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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Wow!!! ClapFantastic!!!Clap Loved how you penned the entire story!!! Big smile The flow is impeccable!!!ClapIt was sizzlinggg hottt!!!Embarrassed 

Looking forward and thanks for writing a beautiful story..Big smile


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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 6:28am | IP Logged
 I m speechless Jenny Smile
 u penned down so beautiful which touch my heart it was like m watching shanak onscreen Clap
 the way u write how she left and thanx to Duck he stopped her and give assurance at the right time she can meet shaantanu 
 the whole concept of the story took me to RBO i loved it to the core Smile
  Shaan wanted to leave India, he went to Dhulwali but khanak was not there after she left and knew the truth from Rahul himself 
  Khanak listening to his songs, she bought each cd n listen repeatedly its was touching yaar  
 Khanak came to studio and shaan couldn't believe she was around him
 loved their conv and their tender kiss which let them know how they missed each other in those past 8 monthBlushing
 while she was leaving he called her both moved to where khanak was leaving and shaan thought how Duck can let her leave in that place heheheh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 the room part was on fire its was penned awesomely how they missed each other without any exchange of words only action speaks 
 Hot sizzling kiss which they share was freaking hot Blushing
 khanak's happy tears make shaan worried, he can't see her in tears loved how he kissed her tears showing his love to her 
  This update was very touchy and later became hawwtt!!!!!!!!!! Jenny i love ur writing 
 thanx for updating and gave us week end with shanak as me miss aur burthal maha purush along with his Jhahsi ki rani 
 I m greedy waiting for next week end with shanak
 at one week end, if possible please can we get Khanak pregnancy track and her cravings and how shaan love her more n more Wink
 

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Jenny ...its awesome man...
M.speechless...too gud...
Keep it up...

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Splendid jennyBig smileClap
loved it very much, and sizzling hotBig smileEmbarrassed
2nd part was just like as though i was watching some Hollywood seriesEmbarrassed
their emotions, their reasons, their feelings, either it may be physical or emotional, just perfectStar
waiting for next weekend...

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 9:50am | IP Logged
Lovely update...
1st emotional thn too hott n beautiful...
Awww so sweet to remind RBO memories...all beautiful scene came in front of d eyes...
N u used such beautiful words to describe shanak love...

Loved it..only shan is perfect for khanak n only khanak is perfect for shan...only shanak perfect togethr..awesm duo..

Love RBO love SHANAK...

Superrb job...ll wait fr next update...

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
awesome update
the idea was superb that instead of heading to dhulwadi she was still in  mumbai
i loved that all his songs were about them
khanak and ducks conv was nice
it was quite painful to know that he was leaving everything behind coz she has left him
the shanak conv was penned beautifully... it was simple but yet it was pure shanak
only they can talk in such simple language yet show the intensity
i loved the part where she said she wanted copyrights over all his songs
that part was just superb when she walked to the door with the hope that he will call her and he did
the hotel room part was just freaking hot...  very passionate very romantic
i was blushing blushing and blushing... it was shanaklicious
jenny that was penned amazingly...  i cant even visualize it but i loved that u mentioned in  between their thought their desires the care they have especially he had when he made love to her
the lil conv where he was concerned that she was hurt was just superb
i loved the fact the he cant see her cry even if she cries in joy
i loved it loved it loved it

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 9:36am | IP Logged
Just read 2 short stories posted on weekends.
They are awesome babes...loved it xoxo

Steaming Hot and sensitively written...woooshhh
Continue soon

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 9:54am | IP Logged

awesome jenny!!!!!!!

cant wait fr nxt wekend

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