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Manveer Impossible

Rsaakka Newbie

Joined: 23 November 2012
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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
I m thinking to try n write a story this will be my first attempt.i ll soon update the character sketch.          PROLOGUE: after 5 years she was returning back from she entered airport media all ov a sudden rushed to her like some hungry predator found their prey.10 husky muskular men all dressed in black appeared from nowhere and surronded her.and took her to her car safely before she was burdenised wid their questions.the drive was about half an hour after that she reached her destiny,rajmahal ov devghar their every1 dying to meet her n hug her she walked toward an old lady took off her shades n greeting gud morning ds and then same to her parents n took their blessings.her mother did her aarti n she was warmly welcumd.                                                                                     So did you guys liked it?Do tell me ur opinions

Edited by Rsaakka - 23 November 2012 at 3:44pm

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Archi02 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 6:06pm | IP Logged
Res. Sorry but busy right now. Will read later.
snowdream IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
IcyToasters IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
Omg girl u scared me.I was so angr with u when I read the title.I thought u r a manveer hater.But phewww u aren't.N hmmm nice prologue.Cont soon huh.
princessSonia IF-Rockerz

Joined: 09 November 2012
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 12:10am | IP Logged
hey dear
nice prologue!!!!!!!ClapClap Thumbs UpThumbs Up
do cont soon 
n PM me if possible bdw m SONIA!!!!!!!
Rsaakka Newbie

Joined: 23 November 2012
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Character sketch devghar:yuvrani manyata:elder daughter ov brij n komal went to london at the age ov12 for her studies n safety.she is stylish,beautiful dream girl ov every man likes to drink sometimes. loves her sister j n friend unnati alot.she is very responsible towards her duties n knows how to handle herself.hate the concept of love until she herself fell in love.sometimes she is very sweet and loving.                                                                                                                                     Rajkumari j nandani:loves her sis a lot she just wants to be like her sis.she likes uday as her jijusa as she thinks manveer will make the best couple.                                                                                              Brijraj n komal parents ov j n manyata ,loves both ov their daughter but show more love n affection towards manyata as she webt abroad at a very young age.                                                                      Rajkumar vijay:cousin ov m n j loves both ov them equally.he is very funny n entertainig likes unnati alot but is scared of uday n never confessed his love for her as he thinks he is not suitable for her.                  Rajmata:dadisa ov j m n vb loves her family a lot she is very strong n wants manyata to follow her steps as she is the heir of devghar. This was the devghar family will soon write about jaighar.

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princessSonia IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged
nice character sketch dear!!!!!!!! ClapClap
do cont soon but wer's uday ??????Shocked

n thnks 4 d PM!!!!!
thank you rose

Edited by princessSonia - 24 November 2012 at 8:33am
MrsSSO IF-Dazzler

Joined: 04 August 2012
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Nice Smile
Continue soon ...
But the title is a bit scary LOL so could you just mention if it is some FF or SS ?
Do PM me ...

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