"THE SECOND SHADOW" chap 30 pg 146 new

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The second shadow


Hi guys I am starting a new ss .ill continue only if you all feel so.


It is a story filled with suspense .it is about a story where relations have no value, only money and power was valued. A young and beautiful heir of devgarh, cheerful and bubbly, innocent and pure princess manyata kumari was marked to die.


Unknown that her days were numbered she continued to enjoy her life and that is when she met him. He was everything she dreamt of, her prince charming he brought a smile on her face and lit her life.


But death and his agent looked upon her, waiting for a perfect time to take her away. The assassin was behind her following her, watching her and was like her second shadow


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"here is the advance 50 lakhs in cash, the remaining when the deal is done, the day she is pronounced dead. this is the photo. Make it look like an accident. How long will it take for the deal to happen?


"3 months"


"how will I contact you in these months.i have nt seen your face , your always masked "


"it doesn't matter if you didn't see me and don't worry ill contact you "


"atleast tell me your name:


"what is in a name or a face as long as you get results ok you can call me the shark"


"ok ,it's a deal mr shark"

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She gained conscious and weakly opened her eyes, her head was spinning and her vision was blurred. She looked around and found the door opening


A man entered ,she saw him , her eyes widened with shock and then all went black


So guys how is it ?


Do you want me to continue or not


Pls do comment even if the response is negative pls


 

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Posted: 11 years ago
CHARACTER SKETCH
 
Princess manyata kumari: the heir of devgarh a cute and a bubbly princess daughter of giriraj and komal
 

 Maharaj Giriraj khanna : father of manyata died when she was very small

Brijraj singh: manyatas stepfather ,loves her like her own daughter

Maharani komal: mother of manyata and jainandini. Loves both of them dearly

Jainandini:manyatas step sister ,but loves her dearly

Udayveer singh: a famous business man, who has a heart of gold . is manyatas prince charming

Rohan: is manyatas best friend but has his own private intentions

Mr shark: the  blood thirsty masked , unknown assassin  who is ruthless only his victims have seen his face but none have ever lived to tell about him

 

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Posted: 11 years ago
Intresting...plot update soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
its awesome 
why are u asking
continue it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: swetsurati

Intresting...plot update soon and do PM me.

thank you dear will pm you
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: mahilove

its awesome 

why are u asking
continue it soon

thank you dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyceee character sketch plz pm me and continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: mahilove

nyceee character sketch plz pm me and continue soon

thank you dear and will surely pm you
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting!!!!!!...nice character sketch👍🏼...cont soon &plzz PM me!!!!! ...😉