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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
New here thanx for d nice story . plz pm me whenever u update

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 10:39pm | IP Logged

Sorry guyzzz update karne me thode der hogai'.my exams were going on

Enjoy the  3rd chapter

Here u go''..

CHAPTER 3''''..


Arjun: ohh aisha kahan chali gyi thi tum''?

Aisha: I missed u so much arjun..

Realizing where they were standing they broke the hug'

Shree: aap dono ek doosre ko jante hai'.

Rathore and riya were looking at them vid jealous eyes'

Arjun: ha shree mai ise janta hu..infact..

Aisha: infact we are 'best of friends.' Ryt arjun'

Seeing her smiling face a smile crept slowly on arjun's face too'

Riya was jealous bt she ws happy too fr arjun' she had not seen arjun even smile a bit since he joined etf bt today he smiled jst bcoz of aisha'.. 

Arjun: pichle 2 saal se kaha thi tum aisha? Tumhe pata bhi hai maine tumhe kahan kahan nahi dhoondha , pr tum'

Aisha: ok baba' ab to mai aa gyi hu na nd look mai tumhare etf ki CIC hu' ab hum saath me time spend kar sakte hai'got it' get it

Arjun: tum thik to ho na'. in 2 saalo me ek bar bhi meri yaad nhi ayi na tumhe'

Now tears welled up in aisha's eyes'.

Arjun: zinda hu ye kam hai' tumse dur rehkr ji rhi thi ye kya kam badi baat hai..?

Now riya ws super jealous and as usual shree and chotu were enjoying the scene and making her more jealous''

Shree to riya in low voice: yarr riya friends kabhi itne closely thodi baat krte hai.?

Chotu: haan yarr shree ye to kuch jyada hi chipak rhi hai arjun sir se..

Riya (now annoyed): shut up chotu, tumne suna nhi ki vo dono best friends hai'.

Shree: thik hai to aj se hum bhi tujhe aise hi chipkenge' chalega..?

Both shree and chotu gave a teasing smirk to riya'

Rathore's phone rang and he answered it'

Rathore: kahan? Malad me.. thik hai hum pohochte hai..

Arjun and aisha were still talking to each other'

Rathore (looking at arjun and aisha): agar tum dono ka ye bharat milap khtm ho gya ho to hum kuch kaam karle'

Aisha glared at rathore bt chose to stay quiet at dat time'

Aisha: ofcourse ' so we have a case in malad , right?

Rathore: ha ' team lets go' ek minute tumhe kaise pata..?

Surprisingly to aisha

Aisha comes forward to rathore and vid full attitude'

Aisha: aisha ko ekhi vakt pr kais are kaam karna achi tarah se ata hai' got it'u better'


Shree, chotu and rathore in one suv and riya arjun and aisha in another'

In arjun's suv:

Aisha: arjun, tum nhi jante ki mai kitna tensed thi Mumbai ane ko lekar'. Acha hua mujhe yaha tum mil gaye..

Riya again jealous'

Arjun: vo sab to theek hai, pr tum 2 saal tk thi kahan?

Aisha: bataya na' delhi me. Maa k saath' bt trust me I really missed u' aura b fir se ye sb puch kr mujhe emotional mat kr dena' got it.. u better.

Riya (finally): umm.. aisha tum yahan pr kahan ruki ho'.

Aisha: finally, riya speaks' mujhe to laga ki tum baat hi nhi karti on duty..

Arjun glared at riya through rear view mirror, as if saying 'pata nhi is ladki ko dusro k personal life me itni interest kyu hai'

Aisha: infact acha hua ki tumne puch liya' riya kyat um mere liye kuch dino k liye ek apartment on rent dhundh sakti ho? Vo kya hai na mere apartment ki deal abhi pending hai'.

Riya: sure' why not

There in the Rathore's suv:

Rathore: ye ladki apnea p ko samajhti kya hai' itna attitude'

Chotu: haan yarr shree ye aisha to mujhe kuch thik nhi lag rhi hai'

Shree: are yarr chotu things ko positively le.. ye to soch ki ab rathore sir ko ulta javaab dene vala koi to hai.. tune dekha nhi aisha k saamne to rathore sir ki bolti hi band ho gayi thi' (and he smiled silently)

Chotu: pr vo to arjun sir bhi rathore sir ko ulta javab dete hai'

Shree:  haan pr ye aisha to arjun sir ko bhi chup karva sakti hai' aur vaise tujhe vo thik kyu nhi lagi.. she's so friendly yarr'

Rathore: kiske friendly hone ki baat ho rhi hai?

Shree: vo kuch nhi sir'

They all reached the spot where a girl had commited suicide'



1.Aisha to the man: aurto ko kamjor samajhne vale log aisha ko bilkul pasand nhi' got it' u better get it'

2.much awaited ariya scenes

3.rathore and aisha again cold war..

4. aisha telling riya about her and arjun's relationship'


Guyz I hope u enjoyed the update' plz leave ur comments here and let me knw abt ur views'

I promise u'll love the next chapter'

Edited by rinku321 - 29 November 2012 at 10:39pm

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
hey no comments?????????
dont like it guyzzz?
plz comment na

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Nice... Please update soon !!!!



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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 1:44am | IP Logged
Superb update dear :) loved it




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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 1:52am | IP Logged
mind blowing... Smile




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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
lovely story dear
you should write it in your title every time you update, that way we all can know what page to read and comment
love this aisha
and wow Riya is jealous
N hope that there's nothing between Arjun and Aisha
Aisha and Rathore's cold war, sounds very interestingWink

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