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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 3:03am | IP Logged


 Finally I m starting the FF….

Chapter 1-

It was one another simple day in ETF. Everybody wa busy in their respective works i.e. solving a case. It was then , rathore's phone rang…..

Rathore: What?? Bt we don't need it sir….ok SIR . as u say..

He cut the call. He was looking a bit tensed and a bit angry. Arjun noticed this and was about to ask him something when suddenly Shree cracked up…

Shree: kya hua sir? Aap thode tensed lag rhe hai…..

R: ha shree. Commissioner sir hamare etf me ek naye officer ko appoint kr rhe hai. Koi delhi etf se aa rha hai. I told him dat we don't need anybody. Our team is perfect..(everybody was feeling very proud listening to the words rathore uttered few seconds earlier… except arjun)

Arjun: pr rathore ye bhi to ho skta hai ki vo hamare kaam ka officer ho.hum use ek bar mil lenge aur phir decide karenge ki….

R: tum mujhe mat sikhao ki mmujhe kya karna hai rawte…mai tumhe kaise bardasht kr rha hu ye sirf mujhe pata hai.. aur ab upar se ye ek aur jabardasti ka team member…

Riya felt very bad for arjun nd she really wished dat both arjun and rathore would work frieldly one day…she was looking at arjun with pity eyes, as if saying dat "don't worry, everything would b fine"

May be arjun noticed this, he said arrogantly to rathore..

A: koun kise bardasht kr rha hai ye hum dono achi tarah se jante hai rathore.. aur jahan tk baat commissioner sir k decision ka hai to unka decision hamesha ryt sabit hua hai… nd I really hope k iss bar bhi unhone kisi efficient officer ko bheja hoga…..

Shree and Chotu were really enjoying this cold war…jst then riya said to shree in low voice…

Riya: inki fight ka maja lene k bajay inhe shant karo shree… we hv to concentrate on our case… aur ye sirf tum kar sakte ho…cmon

Shree: rathore sir jb vo naya officer ayega tb hum dekh lenge.. sir lekin abhi mujhe case se related kuch imp lead mili hai…

Rathore got his point and glared at shree vid cold thn all of thm got back to their work…

All of dem were unaware of the new twists dat were going to come in their perfect tale…..

Later dat day rathore again got a call from the commissioner… nd he told rathore dat the new team member was  a bit arrogant nd of attitude bt he had full confidence in rathore dat he will surely make things easy for the new member….
Now rathore riya and arjun in the SUV…

Rathore: riya kyat um janti ho ki delhi etf ka command in chief koun hai..? kyoki comisner sir keh rhe the ki delhi etf ka CIC hume join kar rha hai…
aur vo thoda arrogant bhi hai… pehle hi attitude vale bando se adjust karna pad rha hai…. Ab ek aur

I m fed up…..(he said angrily looking at arjun)

Arjun gave him an 'I don't care' look….

Riya: sorry sir! I hv no idea who is it… bt maine suna hai ki vo bohot hi brave aur honest police officer hai….

R: dekhte hai….. mere khyal se vo kal tk mumbai aa jayega… mai use kal hi join karne ke liye keh doonga.

Suddenly arjun remembered dat rathore said delhi etf command in chief… something clicked his mind nd he suddenly asked rathore..

Arjun: rathore kya tumhe pura yakin hai ki delhi etf ka CIC hi aa rha hai….?

Rathore : haan.. commissioner sir ne to yehi kahan tha… lekin kyu kyat um jante ho vo koun hai…?

Arjun: shayad.. lekin mai bhi sure nahin hu… aur vaise bhi chief ya command in chief koi bhi ho…. Mujhe koi farq nahi padta.. kyuki mujhe to unhe sirf SIR bulana hai. Right …SIR?

He gave a sarcastic press at the word SIR….

Riya tried to handle the situation….

Riya: vaise arjun sir, aap bhi to isse pehle delhi etf me kaam kar chuke hai na….?

Vahan ke chief koun hai……?

Arjun: ACP Sharma, Zieshan Sharma….

Riya: Wow wat a cool name…!

Arjun was feeling a bit jealous…

Arjun: haan aur banda bhi utna hi cool hai.. ek officer hone k bavajud ek no. ka flirt hai….mai to aj bhi sochta hu ki vo ACP aur etf ka chief kaise bana hoga…?

Rathore: ha, mai janta hu uske bare me… pure department me famous hai vo… specially ladkiyon me….

Riya happily: oh really…!!!

Arjun: par mere baad delhi etf ka command in chief koi aur hai…. Shayad vo vohi hai..?
Rathore: koun???

Arjun: maine kaha na rathore mai nahi janta par …..

Rathore: chodo bhi rawte.. raat bohot ho gyi hai…. Riya tumhara ghar aa gya.. kal office jaldi aa jana…. Tumhare naye command in chief (CIC)  aa rhe hai… god knws vo koun hai aur kaisa hai…? Mai rawte  ko ghar chod dunga…

Arjun: mujhe uski koi jarorat nahi hai…. Mai khud chala jaunga…

Riya got out from the car and vid a smile said Gud N8 to both the angry young men..
Rathore gave her a return vid "kal milte hai"

Arjun jst glared at her……


Shree and Chotu on their way back to home….

Shree: yarr chotu tujhe kya lagta hai, ye hamara naya CIC kaisa hoga…?

Chotu: yarr shree, jaisa bhi ho bas rathore sir aur arjun sir jaisa na ho….

Both shree and chotu broke into laughing….

Shree: haan yarr ye to sach kaha tune… hum to jaise in dono k beech fas gye hai.. kisi side nhi le sakte varna dusra khunnas dene lagta hai….

Chotu : khunnas???

Chotu said it vid some shockness. He never expected such mawali word from shree, the computer genius….

Shree: ha yarr, aj hi sikha hu ye word, riya se…..
both of them looked at each other nd again broke into a loud laughter…..


Precap: A beautiful gal vid open hairs enter the etf office nd thn in rathore's cabin….. she's observing the name… 'ACP Sameer Rathore'

Rathore is watching dat gal from a distance…..


Dats it guyzz for today….

Wait a bit nd I'll update soon….

A very interesting love story is waiting fr all f u….

Guzz m a big fan of rathore so u'll get to see of him a bit more…
plz don't mind….

Guzz ur comments nd likes are very much imp for me

Tell me if u hv liked my FF or not…
plzz let me knw….

Comment plzzz


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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 7:42am | IP Logged
nice update... continue soon.. Smile

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waiting for an update :)




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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Love it




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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
so the coming cic is a girl... riya will b disappointed LOL.. update soon!!




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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Nice CIC flirt no this is so cool..
arjun will be jealous..
please don't mind...please keep the font size a bit bigger...that would be convenient..sorry if that hurt you:)

Edited by prava55663 - 24 November 2012 at 9:56am

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