.GOSH! You're Hot!.KiSha.FF. Note-Important Pg18. - Page 13

Originally posted by: Kesha1234

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GOD!

Don't state me by my usrname re.

I TOTALLY HATE IT 🤢 Oops! Sorry! 😛

M Kesha 😃 Hi Kesha! 😆

You're welcome 😳

But thanx to KD, who's hotness made me eager to find out his P.O.V. 😆

Anyways, coming to the update...

It was Kiya's day that day 😉

Her crush as her substitute!

Not bad, eh?

Kiya, girl I love you 🤗

Introduction session was pretty good. 

One thing, is the teacher supposed to be in the class that time male or female?

You have written 'Aniruddha' and after it 'Sir' 🤣 Arey the teacher was male. The 'a' is supposed to be silent. 

I was a bit confused, so 😕 Koi baat nahin! 😆

Just if you had added more of KD's intro 😉

Did Kiya really say, 'GOSH! You're hot!' 😲

I really slapped my forehead. [I REALLY DID!!] --> 😆

Thank God the class didn't hear.

Believe my expressions were just like Kiya.

As you said that Kiya didn't speak that clearly, I relieved!

I liked the golden words wala reference. Ty. 😳

Poor soul, itni compliments mat do re bechaari ladki ko KD!

SHE'LL DIE IN YOUR HOTNESS!

Okay now coming to KD's P.O.V., I was 🤣

MY GOODNESS!

KD's a sort of over-confident jerk!

But he can't help his hotness 😉

HE REALLY DID NOTICE KIYA 😲 😆

And he did hear those 'golden words'. 😉

Aha! KD's falling for Kiya now, eh? May beee! 😉

Pink colour, his favourite 🤣

LOVED KD'S POV DEAR!

This is one of my best new year gifts!

Thanks for that 🤗 Aww. Thank YOU! 🤗

And please add KD's POV in each chapter 😳 I'll try. 😊

IT WAS SHORT 😲

Nah! Long enough re 😉

Update soon.

To be honest, I love your FF more now 😳 Eeep! 😃

Happy New Year To You Too 🤗 

Best,

Kesha

P.S. Loved the big comment? A New Year gift for you. Stupid but, stupidity is something I can't help! Loved? Hell yes! 😆 I totally love this new year gift.  Thanks a ton! 😃

Wooww.. What to say dear, it was superb, it was amazing, it was fantastic and it was looong... 👏🤗👏

Ok let me come to the update analysis, first Kiya's POV.

I have to tell you this Kiya is very much similar to me, so much that while reading I can imagine myself in place of Kiya...😳

She actually blurted out that he is hot in front of the whole class, wow..!!😆 Good for her none else heard her..

Now to Keshav Desai's journal..

He was oblivious to his hotness till Kiya said that 😲 men are such duffers...

Poor guy, he has behave like a teacher in front of Kiya, gonna be really hard, especially when he has already started to love the ''pink colour'😉

Aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hai...😆 

Keep on including KDs POV in between, so that we know whats going on in Mr.Hot's mind...😆😉

That's my long comment to ur looong update.. Keep on writing such beautiful (and long) updates dear...

P.S- Me too have a weakness for the dimple-wali-smile-wale-guys..☺️

Originally posted by: sajan_kisha

Wooww.. What to say dear, it was superb, it was amazing, it was fantastic and it was looong... 👏🤗👏 Awwiee, thankyouuu! 😳

Ok let me come to the update analysis, first Kiya's POV.

I have to tell you this Kiya is very much similar to me, so much that while reading I can imagine myself in place of Kiya...😳 Aaah, that's nice to hear! 😃

She actually blurted out that he is hot in front of the whole class, wow..!!😆 Good for her none else heard her..

KD called her Kiya dear and complimented her dance, awww...☺️

Wonder how she handled all these excitment that too in one day...😆 

Now to Keshav Desai's journal..

He was oblivious to his hotness till Kiya said that 😲 men are such duffers...IKR? 😆

Poor guy, he has behave like a teacher in front of Kiya, gonna be really hard, especially when he has already started to love the ''pink colour'😉

Aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hai...😆 May beee! 😉😆

Keep on including KDs POV in between, so that we know whats going on in Mr.Hot's mind...😆😉 Yeah, that's the idea now. Since the response is like freakin' awesome!  

That's my long comment to ur looong update.. Keep on writing such beautiful (and long) updates dear...Thanks a ton, I love long comments! 😆 

P.S- Me too have a weakness for the dimple-wali-smile-wale-guys..☺️ *sigh* ☺️

 

Originally posted by: basket_101

Res =D

HEY =D

Sorry didn't Unres earlier... 

Was caught up with some other things.. 

and then forgot about unres*ing :P Aah, it's okay! 😉

Anyway..

The two updates were awesomeee 😃  Thankyou! 😳

I was laughing SO hard when Kiya burted out "GOSH! You're hot!"

It was honestly hilarious! --> 😆

Luckily KD made it seem as if he hadn't heard her 😆

I loved how KD kept showering compliments on her :P  It was very cute I knoww *sigh* ☺️

What I loved even more, you may ask...

The fact that you wrote one from KD's perspective :D :D Hmm! 

It was honestly awesome! Thankyouu so so much Hina, means a lot! 😊

Great job!! :D

Take careee <3 You too. 😃

Hinal 😳

Originally posted by: JaseTBP

It was just awesome, awesome and awesome!!!!
Loved it 2 the core!!
I loved the introduction session so much!!
U r an amazing writer!!!
Keep writing like this dear!!
Loved it!!!!!<33

Originally posted by: Yoshita0411

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Hey people. Just wanted to inform you that I won't be updating this FF for a short while. I'll be busy with my exams. I'll be here in IF, but no update soon. Apologies.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">-Yoshita</font>