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will update next chapter today...!!!!!
till then please have a look at the new pm list...
it has been edited...
bcos i cant keep sending pms to around 60 ppl n get only 40 of them being active...
i really wanna thank all of you for your never ending love n support...

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hey dear awesome awesome awesome upadteClapClap... loved it sooo very much...how did u manage to write to sooo beautifully yr seriously... awww the morning scenes of virat was sooo damn sweet... loved each n every dialogue of this update... the ending scene of maanvi, shaurya n maya was sooo damn cute... loved it yr really... continue soon dear... thanxx 4 the pm... n sorry 4 being late...SmileSmileSmile
 
hey anjali first of all i am very sorry... i couldnt comment on ur post these days... i am way too busy n right now also i m hell tired... by the way i am really happy u came back... Smile
n now thanks for the comment... Smile
will try n continue soon... Smile


Its ok dear no need to worry...SmileSmile

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Thanks for the PM...Pcan u add my name in PM list please..
Aww superb update.. Sorry for late comment was busy with exams n studies..
Loved it..aww virat realised his love to late...aww loved how virat dreamed of maanu and confessed his feelings..Hayee..:)
Love Maya and shaurya...they make such a lovely couple..:))

Do continue soon..:)


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link to the previous chapter
 
CHAPTER 13
 
chaudhary mansion
after the breakfast
maya : shaurya kya hai yaar... tum bilkul hi velle hote jaa rahe ho... koi kaam dhandha nahi hai kya...??? (shaurya what is this yaar...??? dont u have any work...??)
shaurya : beeji dekhi apni ladli ko... sadu maya... (teased maya n winked at manvi...)
maya : haaw... see beeji he called me sadu n u are smiling... (making a cute pout)
beeji : u all carry on... i have to go to do some shopping...
trio : bye beeji...
manvi : hehe...
maya : mannu u stop laughing... shaurya u have spoiled her... (pointing finger at shaurya...)
shaurya : ek hi ek toh saali hai meri...
manvi : jiju...??
shurya : oops... sorry yaar manvi... toh maya do hi toh saaliyan hai meri... ek manvi aur ek dabbi... (high fived with manvi) ab agar inse bhi pyaar na karun toh kis kam kya jiju...
manvi : bingo jiju... love you...!!!
shaurya : love you too mannu... wish dabbi was also here...
maya : shaurya... why do u always tease dabbu...?? thank god he is not here...
manvi : else he would have cried like a girl...
shaurya : thank you manvi...!!!!
maya : jiju ki lawyer...
manvi : but i am nothing when compared to your jiju di... he is a superb lawyer...
maya : i know... my jiju is world best...!!!
manvi : my jiju is also world best...!!! infact he is universe best...
shaurya : hahaha... my saali toh the bestest saali in this whole galaxy...
manvi : our team rocks jiju...!!!
maya : haha... very funny...!!!
shaurya : aww... mannu dont forget my maya is the bestest...
manvi : haaww... itni jaldi team change...
shaurya : kyun...??? tumne bhi toh team chnage ki na mannu... shaurya jiju se viren jaana...
manvi : dont be jealous jiju... i love you yaar...
shaurya : love you too yaar...!!!
maya : excuse me...??? does anybody over here loves me...???
shaurya : me... (raising his hand in the air...)
manvi : me too... (did the same)
maya : nautanki ho tum dono... full time nautanki...!!!
manvi : but we love you diii... (making a puppy face)
shaurya : n i love you more... now toh i have a proof also... (leaning close to maya n she blushed)
manvi : i think i should excuse you guys... bye...
shaurya : bye... close the door while u go...
maya : shaurya...
maya : bye di n jiju... have fun...!!!!
scene shifts
vadera mansion
viren was passing by virat's room when he heard something being broken...
viren entered virat's room and saw him sitting on the corner of the bed... his head buried in his hands and the alarm watch broken on the floor.
viren : bhai...
virat's head shot up and he saw viren looking at with questioning look...
virat : bhai...
viren : what is wrong...?? u are looking upset... (moving towards virat)
virat : bhai... i need my everything back... (getting up from the bed)
viren : virat...?? what are you saying...??? (viren placed his hands on virat's shoulders)
virat : bhai... bhai i really love her... i dont want to lose her... (looking straight into viren's eyes...)
viren : her...??? what have happened virat...??? do u really love her...???
            
virat : bhai... i never realised... but i do love her... bhai i dont want to lose her...
viren : i am not getting it... if u truly love her, go n tell her this...
virat : will she come back to me...???
viren : yeah... if she loves you then surely she would come back virat...
virat : bhai u really think so...??
viren : yes... but what happened between you two...??
virat : i dont know... she left me...
viren : left means...??
virat : she said nothing to me n went away... she broke my heart...
viren : but why...??? how can she go like this...??
        
virat : i am clueless about that...
viren : are you sure she loves you...??
virat : yes certainly... she has always loved me... only me... there is some misunderstanding...
viren : misunderstanding... then go n clear it asap... dont let time pass by...
virat : you are right... thanks bhai...
viren : anytime... now freshen up n see u at the breakfast table...

virat : hmmm... gimme 10 mins...
viren : u have 15 mins... its 07.45am...

virat : yeah yeah rules n rules... see you bhai...
viren : make it quick bro...
after breakfast...
vanshika : didi aaj thoda dil ghabra raha hai, main mandir ho aati hoon... (didi i am not feeling that good, i am thinking of going to temple...)
swamini : haan bhabhi... ho aaie na.. hum free hote toh hum bhi saath chalte... (yes bhabhi.. you should go... if i was free, i would have accompanied you...)
vanshika : didi its okk... main chali jaungi... (i will go...)
swamini : virat...??? (virat was going to his room when swamini called him)
virat : ji...???
swamini : bhabhi wants to go to temple today... why dont you take her...???

virat : sure buaji... maa main bahar wait kar raha hoon... (i m waiting outside mom)
           
vanshika : okk...
 
scene shifts...
chaudhary mansion...
manvi : beeji...
beeji : kya hua mannu...??? (what happened mannu...??)
manvi : beeji mera na bahut dil ho raha hai mandir jaane ka... aap kahe toh main ho aaun...??? (beeji i really want to go  to temple... i will go if u agree...)
beeji : haan... jaa na... (yes... go...)
manvi : thank you beeji... di n jiju are in my room... so please...
beeji : mujhe samajh gayi... i know... manvi do take the car n driver with you
manvi : ok beeji... bye...
beeji : bye...
scene shift
on the way to the temple...
vanshika : virat sab theek toh hai na...??? (virat is everything okkk...???)
virat : hmmm...
vanshika : why are you so quiet these days...?? u can tell me...
virat : mom i am fine... i am missing london n friends...
vanshika : but you friends will be coming for the wedding... isnt it...??
virat : yes.. angad n kripa are coming afte a week...
vanshika : till then you can talk to me... i am also your friend...
virat : love you mom...
vanshika : aaj bahut pyaar aa raha hai... kya baat hai...???
virat : life is too short... why to miss a single chance to express your feelings...??
vanshika : virat... i am proud of her... you have changed...
virat : love do change people...
vanshika : love... my younger son is also in love... (and then she realised hwat she had said... 3 days back only virat told her that a girl left him and he loves her dearly...)
virat : mom dont be sorry... i will get her...
vanshika : i just want you to be happy virat... thats it...
virat : i too want the same maa...
vanshika : i will surely pray that you get what you desire...
virat : thank you maa...
 
scene shifts
saketri temple
                                
virat : maa you go and i will join you after parking the car...
vanshika : okk... but dont take too long...
virat (smiling) : okkk... i will be on time...
vanshika get off the car and went towards the temple...
manvi : driver park the car and i will be back soon...
driver : ok madam...
manvi was moving towards the temple when strong air started blewing making it difficult for manvi to control her continuously flying hair and dupatta... manvi's full attention was on stopping her dupatta from flying when she collided with someone... she was about to fall, when that someone saved her from falling... and taht someone was noen other than our virat... he was continuously staring at manvi admiring her beauty and smiling at her. manvi slowly opened her eyes and got lost in those pair of eyes. they had a cute eye lock unaware of their surroundings. suddenly a child came running and pushed manvi intentionally. manvi lost her balance and fell on virat, making him also fall in the process. manvi broke the eye lock and looked at virat who was lost in her not to miss the love written in his eyes. manvi looked her and there and saw people looking at them and talking. manvi hurriedly got up and this made virat come back to the reality...
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pm list is edited... please do see... if u wanna remain in the list, u have to keep commenting of atleast liking it... so that i come to know who all are interested n who all are not...
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Edited by naina927 - 20 February 2013 at 12:51pm

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Naina I'm extremely sorry for such a short comment this time because while I was commenting I had actually clicked on something else and then all of my writing went soo sorry...
 
Loveed it in and out :)
 
Especially the last VirMan bit :)
 
But in this one no Viren-Manvi romance :)
 
I also loved Shaurya's and Manvi's nok-jhpms...
 
And now *happy dance*
For commenting first had res'd the post even before you started sending PM's :D


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