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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 2:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aashika_virman

i always loved your works...
this is very nice...i am loving it...i always wanted to see demanding virat ...coz in shows it always like virat is more expressive in their love relationship compared to manvi...he always lets her free..that is what he is and one of the reasons i love him in show...but i always wanted to see this type of virat who is very possessive obsessive types who want her in every sense no one can ever imagine off and demanding her to make him her first proiority..who is always insecure about manvi...mere wish puri hogayi..i am imagining scenesDay Dreaming ..awesome..i love this virat..thank you for giving this virat..
would love to read more passionate intense updates...
precap...very intresting..it is not easy for any one to handle such a man in their life..wondering what manvi did...
thank you for pmSmile
that is soo sweet of u to say  aashika...
i too want virat to be demanding... why should he be always on the giving end...??? 
you will see more of this virat dear... i promise...
exactly u are right... difficult to handle such a man...
 

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preetipc

Loved the update. Wow Virat seems to be of the possessive little.Waiting for his character to unfold.Loved Manvi and her love for Virat.Loved the whole update yaar.Waiting for the next updateSmile
thanks... Smile
will update soon  preeti...

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by angel_sofia

Oh Wow!! Superb Start Clap  I loved it Embarrassed
Thanks alot 4 the pm... Big smile
 
thanks angel_sofia...

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 2:17am | IP Logged
[QUOTE=shabsem]Amazing update asusual dear...[/QUOTE
 
thanks a lot... Smile

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arrosha

wow its amazing   Clap
romantic and superbEmbarrassed
I really love it.
but the precap is soo scaring.
Plz continue soon and thanks for the PM
Do pm me when u update.
 
thanks...
will continue soon n pm u...
 

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera.chaudhuri

Hi Naina.. I just gone through the prologue and the 1st chapter...  Amazing concept.. Beautifully writtenClap.. Manvi and Virat are already in a relationship .. I loved the way you described Maanvi's thoughts about their relationship.. Virat is a man of action.. I loved their passionate romanceEmbarrassed..  Precap sounds interesting.. I would love to read more.. Can you please pm me for the next updates???  Take careSmile
 
thank you  meera...
will surely pm u dear... Smile

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 2:54am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by gsrocks

superb start naina!!!!
ahh I loved it!
how do u manage to write it so well??
ok now the precap is making me more curious...
continue soon
and thnx for the pm
Big smile

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hey naina I am geet! Big smile
i am a great fan of ur stories!!!
love reading them!! Big smile

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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
CHAPTER 2
 
"ring ring... ring ring..."
virat : manvi why dont you pick that call...???
manvi : bcos i am in the bathroom...
virat : i will pick it up for you...
manvi : thats soo grateful of you...
virat : i know...
virat picked up the call and was about to say hello when the person on the other started saying something...
virat : ...
? : hey sweetheart... how are you...??? listen i want to tell you something... whatever you said that night really helped... thanks a ton... love you for that... really i mean it... listen i need to go, will get back to you... bye...
virat was burning in anger and threw the mobile on the bed...
manvi came out of the bathroom, got ready and went into the hall... she was shocked to see whole of the hall in a mess. the mess wasnt sort of one that she used to create else the things were scattered all around. the cushions were on the floor, her vase was broken into pieces, the water in the vase was spilled on the floor, roses were on the couch nearby and so on... and on one of the sofa  virat was sitting burying his head in his hands...
manvi slowly went near virat and kept her hand on his shoulder and he instantly removed her hand...
manvi : virat...
virat : why did you do this to me...??? why did you betray me...??? why...???
manvi : what are you saying...???
virat : why did you manvi...??? how can you bring somebody between us...??? how could you...???
manvi : virat... pls calm down... tell me clearly... please...
virat : you regret being with me, right...???  you regret being in  a relationship with a guy who doesnt even say those magical words to you but still demands each and every right on you... let it be physical or emotional...
manvi : no i dont regret it... i really love you and will wait for the very moment when you say those words to me... i know you love me but still i want to hear it... thats it.. i can never regret it baby...
virat : a guy called you n said that your advice helped him n loves you for that...
manvi : omg... virat... he is just a friend... i met him on the conference.. nitin, thats his name... he loved a girl and i just told him to confess his love to that girl without thinking of the consequences and asked him to make sure that her reply would never come in between of their friendship... thats it...
virat : thank god manvi... i thought that you cheated on me... that you will break up with me...
manvi : how could you think like that virat...?? did i ever do something that made you think like i will cheat on you... you really hurted me virat... really...
virat : i wont do that manvi... i am just scared of losing you...
manvi : and what if  you lose me one day...???
virat : i dont want to talk about it... i am leaving...
manvi : virat look into my eyes... answer me jaan...
virat : i would die manvi if it ever happens... and if any other guy tries and come between us or for that matter touches you, i will probably kill him...
manvi : you love me soo much...???
virat : soo much that you wouldnt ever know...
manvi : i love you...
virat : now go manvi... you are getting late... i will clean this mess up...
manvi : are you sure...???
virat : yeah... when i can create it, then i can clear it up as well...
manvi : very efficient...
virat : i know... now just  hurry up babes or else your rude professor wouldnt let you enter the classroom...
manvi : oh yeah... bye...
virat : bye take care...
manvi came out of the classroom and saw 20 missed calls from virat...
virat : hey...
manvi : why are you sounding so casual...???
virat : what...???
manvi : i was so damn worried seeing 20 missed calls from you and i thought may be something was really urgent and important.. but you are sounding like nothing happened...
virat : ohh that one... manvi i wanted to tell you something n its important...
manvi : so speak up na...
virat : manvi... last night i forgot to use protection...
manvi : what...??? how careless of you...
virat : never mind... its not too late... do take a pill sweetheart
manvi : yeah.. i will...
virat : i am sorry for that...
manvi : its okk but...
virat : i will be careful... i promise...
manvi : i trust you... bye... got to go...
virat : bye...
kripa : hey manvi...
manvi : hey krips
kripa : so who was it, virat...???
manvi : yeah...
kripa : tell me how was the last night...???
manvi : what...???
kripa : baby did you forget to notice something...???
manvi : what krips...???
kripa : virat's gift...
manvi : gift...??? what gift...??? when..?? where..??
kripa : gift of love... on your neck... last night.. bedroom...
manvi : what...??? shut up...!!!
kripa : yeah yeah... first just come with me...
manvi : where...???
kripa : washroom...
kripa : see... its so...
manvi : shh... how did i fail to notice it...???
kripa : nasha hai ye pyar ka nasha hai... ye meri baat manvi maano...
manvi : shit its soo dark...
kripa : hooo...
manvi : stop it na yaar... what if somebody saw this besides you...???
kripa : hehe...
manvi : why are you giggling now...???
kripa : angad saw it first... and
manvi : shit...!!! shit...!!!
kripa : and then he made me notice it...
manvi : i am feeling so embarassed...
kripa : cmon... its okk... you guys love each other so much...
manvi : thats true but...
kripa : but on a serious note i want to tell you something manvi... being your friend, i think you should stop him babes.. this is not right.. i mean he wants you only to...
manvi : please dont misunderstand him... virat loves me... its just that...
kripa : as you say, just be careful... i know you are very responsible...
angad : what took both of you so long...??? i mean you girls went to the loo or underwater diving...
manvi : that was very bad...!!!
angad : kripa baby...
kripa : done...
manvi : thanks...
angad : anytime...
manvi : so what are you two planning for tonight...???
angad : tonight...??? is anything special...???
kripa : no nothing is special...
angad : i was just joking... i know its your birthday tomorrow...
manvi : guys why dont you go on a romantic date...???
angad : i have already planned it out babes... virat helped me...
manvi : now i am sure... it would be fun guys... all the best..
kripa : thanks...
manvi : okk bye guys... have to rush...
kripa + angad : bye...
Iqbal Khan and Neha Bamb in Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai
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TIME FOR PRECAP : ENGAGEMENT PARTY
 
PS : NEW CHARACTERS TO ENTER IN THE NEXT UPDATE... THEIR CHARACTER SKETCH IS GIVEN IN MY NEXT POST
 
LOVE
NAINA...


Edited by naina927 - 16 December 2012 at 1:50pm

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