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Nice Part!!!
Plz cont soon!

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awesome part!! i know ekta will bring misthi and prithvi back into the show again too! lol..

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great part

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great part

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great part!! cont soon!!!!!!! Big smile Big smile

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thanks a lot 4 ur commenst i'll past the next part in 2-3 hrs

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aww i donno how i missed last few parts. But it was amazing Clap aww man i dnt like it when anagd blames kripz like that, and then ahhh the dine is back (Misty) LOL .. fab part cant awit for the whole secret to be out Clap
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Chapter 8

A= tum jao yaha se

M= angad please meri baath to suno.

A= baaki kya hain

M= please meri baath suno. Mhuge yaha nishant ke taraak se bula hain par jab mhuge pata chala ke tum kanan se shaadi kar rahe hoon isse mandap par to main jald se jald hu tumhe kuch batten.

A= kyon tumara pati tumhe chor kar chala gaye ki meri shaadi par ayee hoon usse rok ne ke leye.

M= ha asia he kuch hua par…………..

A= main janta tha ki tum jaise auurat ke saath kon rahe sakta hain

M= please ek baath meri baath suno.

A= jaldi bolo meri paas time nahi hain.

They were in the wedding hall so angad took him to a corner where u could c every angle of the hall.

M= tum kanan se shaadi nahin kar sakte

A= kyon (surprised why she was saying that)

M= kya tum aur kripa 5 saal se alag rahe rehe hoon

A= thume isse kya ussen galti kari abb vo uske ka anjaam dek rahe hain.

M= angad ussne…………….meri vageh se………vo gave de thi.

Anagd who was looking around stopped and looked at mishty

A= kyaaaaaaaa

M= ha usse ne meri aur sheetal ke baath sune le thi


Flashback

S= kya plan hain mishty app to kripa aur angad ke zindagi barbaaad hune se koi nahin rok sakta.

M= ya aur mhuge ye farak nahin parta ki angad so sazza mile ya nahin par main chatte hoon ke vho angad ke kilaaf gavee de. Konki main janti hoon ke iss bar angad nahin usse maaf karega.

S= par agar usse ne assa nahin kiya tho

M= phir main angad ko asse fasoungi ki vo poori zingagi jail ke salakou ke peeche hoga.

S= mind blowing mishty mind blowing


A= ha to usse kya kripa ne gavee de

Turning around to go but mishty spoke up

M= kyunki usse ne hamari baath sunle

Angad stopped dead in his tracks and turned around. He felt as if his heartbeats had stooped.

A= kyaaaaaaaa

M= ha aur tumhe baccha ne ke liye vo gavee de.

A= usse ne mere kilaaf gavee de par baacha kasie

His heartbeats turning fast second by second

M= ussne vo saaboth kate kiye thume bachha n eke liye

A= par vo to mom ne diye the

M= aur avantika aunty ko kripa ne take tum bhi unko appnalou kyunki usse ko saab sach pata chal gaye tha .

A= par usse baath kyon nahin.

M= kya tum usska vishvaas karte?

A= ha .. of course…………………………..nahin (looking down)
And then looking up suddenly

A= par thume kaise pata

M= vo mere paas case ke baad aye the.

A= ek second tum mere se to nafrat kate hoon phir aaj tum ye saab kyon baatha rahe hoon.

M= (looking away) main bhi kisse se pyar kar ne lagi aur jab meri pati ko pata chala to ussne meri pyar ko marni ke koshish karee. Par usse saye waqt par pakadle aur phir laga ki prithvi neb hi asse hi kara aor esshas hua ke maine usse sifr appne bhai ke roop mein dekha ek katil ke roop mein nahin.

Angad getting shocked moment by moment and cursing himself 4 not trusting kripa.

A= tum ne phele kyon nahin bata huh.(holding her sholders and feeling his voice break)

M= mhuge laga kit um aur kripa ek saath hoge aur isslee vopis nahin ayyee

A= tumhe paatha hain ke thumari vageh se maine kya kiya.
Kripa ko majbor kar diya ghar chorne ke liye.
Appni beti se 5 saal door rakha.
Inti nafrat kari ki jabb bhi samne aye use kya kya sunayee sirf main jaanta hoon.

Angad feeling tears and held mishy one more time and asked kyun kiya asse kyon.

M= (also in tears ) srry angad srry

A= just get lost

M= srry angad srry

Saying that she walked away leaving a shattered angad.

A=(in his mind) I can't lose u kripa I can't . because of my mistake I always misjudged u

He turned to go to kripa's room but before that everyone gathered near the stairs. The bride was coming down.

He looked up and was shocked once more.
He was kripa coming down in a red weeding dress adorned as a bride looking like an angel.


G2g

How was the part?

Preview= dou dil mil rahe hain


p.s this is what kripa was wearing

Deep Red Georgette Lehenga Choli with Dupatta



 



Edited by BABY-GIRL7 - 15 July 2006 at 10:17am

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