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Door Jakar Bhi Tum...(ak)ch-14 pg.20 (Page 8)


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srry guys i won't be able to continue but i think i'll ket half the secret out in the next part and end in the next couple.


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The wedding day came closer day by day. Angad had tried going closer to prateek but whenever he did he ran off. And when he angad tried to talk to kripa she was always with someone so she wouldn't have to face him. The week passed by with preparations. And angad and nishant had also talked and decided to marry at one alter. Kripa was totally against it but she couldn't say anything.

Today was the weeding day and was being held at the 5 star hotel Taj. No one still had seen kripa (angad's family). So everyone was at the hotel getting ready. Naina and Dilip had also come just 4 angad.

Angad was going to kanan's room when he heard 2 people talking.

N=kanan kaha thi tum. Tum asse kyon gaye . ha main manta hoon ki misunderstanding thi par inti bade ki tum chale gaye

Ka= to aur kya karti


Nishnat and kanan loved each other a lot they were about to get married but there was some misunderstanding due to which kanan left. Nishant looked 4 kanan a lot but didn't find her.

*** kanan and nishant didn't meet each other before they heard the names but they thought it was a coincidence.***

Ka= jab pata chala to jhooth tha to aye thi vopis par tum gayab hogay. Phir angad se mille aur laga usse se pyar hogaya par agg patha chala vo illusion tha.

N= main bhi, Tanya ji se pyar kar ne laga aur ajj vo bhi lakta hain nahin hua tha.

Ka= par nishant hum ek dousre ko bhul jana hoga. Jin se hum shaadi har rahe hain unhou ne humara saath nahin churda tho hum bhi nahin chord sakte .

N= ha hume bhi qurbani dene padegi.

A=(who had heard all of their talk spoke up) kisse ko bhi qurbani nahin dene padegi.

Nishant and kanan shocked at ashamed that they were caught.

Ka= ann…gad tum kab aye

A= kanan kya tum mhuge par inta bhi bharrousa nahin karti ke yeh bata diti ki tum nishant se pyar karti hoon. Main kya thume force kata?

Ka= nahin to asse baath nahin hain mhuge bhi abbhi pata chala ki vo nishant hain jo kri…. Tanya se shaadi mera pyaar hain.

A= abb bata ditya na abb main humari shaadi nahin hone dunga. Pir tum donu shaddi kar sakte hoon

All of a sudden nihant spoke up.

N=Srry angad par yeh nahin hoon sakta

A= (shocked) kyon.

N= main Tanya ko dhooka nahin de sakta unoou ne sifr bua ji ke khusi ke liye ye shaadi ke liye ha kaha. Unnou ne mera saath nahin chorda tho main kaisse.

A= par nishant.

N= I'm srry angad and I'm very srry kanan.

Kanan was in tears but gave him a slight smile and said

Ka= jho bhi kare rahe hoo vo saye hain.

A= whatever par isske bad main aur kanan to nahin shaadi kar sakte . never .

Nishant was about to make him understand but he left.

Angad was really heated up. He was very mad at kripa he thought in his mind. Always because of kripa people lives were ruined. And today just because of her 2 more lives were going to be ruined.
He was going down to make the announcement that he wouldn't be getting married and as he was going down he bumped into someone.

He was about to apologize but when he say the persons face he became really flamed up at shouted.

A= tummmmmmmmmmm.
Yaha kya kar rahe hoon. Zindagi barbad kar di abb kya baaki hain.

Someone= angad meri baath suno please.

A= just get lost MISHTY get lost

Yes the person was no other than MISHTY.

Preview-----Secret out in next part

Edited by BABY-GIRL7 - 14 July 2006 at 8:52am
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