Door Jakar Bhi Tum...(ak)ch-14 pg.20 - Page 7

Posted: 17 years ago
thanxs 4 the comments
i'll post the next part by 8 p.m
Posted: 17 years ago
CHAPTER 9

He saw kripa coming down the stairs adorned as a bride. But kripa's duppata was around her neck and falling down to cover her arms. She had removed the nose ring and bindis she was wearing on her face and had only a tika on her head.
She was adorned as a bride but wasn't the bride . she was bringing kanan down who was also dressed as a bride.
wearing this.


Flashback

After angad left kripa came into the rrom and told them that she couldn't believe that they didn't trust her that much to tell her the truth. They both tried to give clarifications but kripa stopped them and told nishant that they both knew the reason they were getting married so why is he still up 4 that idea when he had his true luv before him. Kripa then told them that she would get them married. And told nishant to go sit on the mandap.

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Everyone was shocked and had a question mark on their face. But the ppl who were shocked most were buaji because of what kripa was doing and dadi, dilip, Naina , and khartick because they hadn't seen kripa for the past 5 yrs. Kripa took kanan infront of buaji .

K= buaji app to kanan lo jante hoon aur ye bhi jante hoon ke nishant aur kanan ek dusre se pyar kate hain. Main aur nishant sirf app ki khusi ke liye shaadi kar rahe the. Par abb main kahete hoon ki appko kanan se acche bahu nahin mil sakte. Please is shaadi ko srikar kar le geye

B=(tears forming in her eyes.) aur tum se acche beti nahin

Turning towards kanan

B= kanan tum kaha thi beta jabb sabse zaada zurrarat thi tumki tab tho the nahin tum, aura bb itne door kardi hoon aoo gale milou. Aur tum bhi aoo Tanya. Bua ji hugged both of them . then they sepertated by kripa saying

K= murat nikla ja rahe hain .

Looking towards kanan and holding her ang taking her towards the mandap.kripa made her sit down and the wedding started . the pandit told someone to tie the knot ( srry I've grown up abroad and don't know all these things).
Everone agreed and because of nishant and kanan kripa tied it 4 them. She stepped back and bumped into someone she turned around to c angad . kripa looked up to his eyes and say something in his eyes she used to c 5 yrs ago. But she ignored it and went ahead. Staring into a pair of nice . warm and loving eyes which belonged to dadi.

Da= krip……………

K= dadi plese abbhi nahin (looking aroung nervousily) ya ha sabb mhuge Tanya ke nam se jante hain.

D= thek hain par meri bache tune ghar kya chor diya ke tune sarre rishty toor diye.

K= nahin dadi par main appse bad me baath karo plese abbhi nahin.

D= thek hain.

Troughout the whole wedding kripa saw angad staring at her she didn't ubdersatnd why. And when ever he got closer she just ignored him. She was really confused about what was happening . the wedding was now over . and everone was congatlating the couple.

Kripa was raomanind and them bumped into someone she looked up and saw mishty.

K= tum yaha.

M= ha par mhuge tum se phele maffi mange ne hain . I'm srry kripa.

K= baath age bar chuke hain mishty its been 5 yrs. My life was ruined because of u just go please just go.

M= haan agar angad ne mhuge maaf nahin kiya.

K= kya.. tum…ne angad…ko sab bata dita…

M= ha

Kripa felt her self go weak and relized why angad was bewhaving like that she started going backward and ten tripped on her dress and fell   into someones arms. She turned around to c angad


G2g bye


how was the part?
Posted: 17 years ago
nice part!
Plz cont soon!
Posted: 17 years ago
awesome!! fianally misty is GOOD! anyways continue soon!! this is an awesome fan-fic!!!
Posted: 17 years ago
OMG just read the whole fanfic Its brillaint plzz do cont soon cant wait 4 the next part ....the last part was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏

Iqra
Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part
cont soon
loved it 👏 👏
Posted: 17 years ago
great part
hope kripa and angad finally get back with each other
cant wait for the next part
👏 👏 👏
Posted: 17 years ago
so sweet kripa fell into angad arm
so cute
plz contineu soon
Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!! 👏
Posted: 17 years ago
wow if only this would happen in the rreal serial 😛 awesum fan-fic!!cont soon
himani 😛

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