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Posted: 09 July 2006 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
great job. I loved it aww that whole close ur eyes scene was soo cute Clap
continue soon Clap

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Originally posted by angadkripafan

awesome fan fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!! brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clap Big smile

 

u have got to be kidding i love ur fanfic i cheak it 5 times a day to c if u updated it but thanks a lot it means a lot to me

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Originally posted by .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

amazing parts!!!!!!!!! Big smile i wish ekta thinked like you!!!!!!!!!! LOL

thank u thank u thank u

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Originally posted by ruby89

great job. I loved it aww that whole close ur eyes scene was soo cute Clap
continue soon Clap

 

thanks soooooooooo much

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i'm posting the next part rite now

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CHAPTER 4

Next morning when its morning angad goes to kanan's room and knocks on her door
she opens it half asleep.
When she sees angad she opens her eyes fully

K=kya faisla kiya thumne

A=(surprised)thume kaise path ke main thume appna faisla sunaie ayya hoon

K= subhae ke saath bage main aur kya expext karou

Angad rund his hang through his hair and says

A=so tho hain
Main thumse saache dil se shaadi kar na chatha hoon par

K= par kya(asked surprisingly)

A=mughe galat mat samajna apr main usse mandap par shaadi kar na chatta hoon jisse par kripa ur nishant kar rahe hain.

Kanan looks at him with a blank face

A=kuch tho kaho

K=mughe phelse se pattha that ke tum ye kaho ge

A=kaise

K=pichle panch saal se dekti a tahi hoon thume itna tho pata ho ga.

A= so ur agree

K=yes I am reday

A=thank u so much kanan

Goes and hugs her

A=srry kanan par main thume vho gage nahin de paounga jho kripa ko di thi

K=its ok angad I know that

A= well can we go tell everyone now and I have to tell mishant too(thinking-and kripa )

K=Yes angad

A=K bye


First angad goes and tells dadi she is very happy that angad listend to her .

But when naina and dilip found out they were like

N&D=how can u do that ur my son and we won't let u make kanan our bahu

A=wrong I was ur son and u were never my parents I broke all relationships with u 5 yrs ago u can't decide what I can do and cant

And saying that he headed off to nishants house


Srry guy's g2g but I'll continue soon

How was the part?
If u don't like it tell me and anything u want me to add tell me

p.s If u don't like the fanfic now I promise the ending will blow u away.

and the in next part angad will discner something that just blows him away. Confused

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Posted: 10 July 2006 at 6:25am | IP Logged
great part

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Posted: 10 July 2006 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BABY-GIRL7

Originally posted by angadkripafan

awesome fan fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!! brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clap Big smile

 

u have got to be kidding i love ur fanfic i cheak it 5 times a day to c if u updated it but thanks a lot it means a lot to me

thanx alot Embarrassedi never knew i m that good at writting that someone checks my fan fics 5 times a day!Embarrassed ur veryyyy sweet 2 say thatTongue

but seriously u write very well! when i was reading the parts i didn't feel u were writing 4 the first time , it looked like ur very experienced in writting fan ficsClapn keep up the good......naaa awesome  work! WinkClapBig smile

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