Door Jakar Bhi Tum...(ak)ch-14 pg.20 - Page 3

Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by .:KYPHlOvEr88:.


amazing parts!!!!!!!!! πŸ˜ƒ i wish ekta thinked like you!!!!!!!!!! πŸ˜†

thank u thank u thank u

Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by ruby89


great job. I loved it aww that whole close ur eyes scene was soo cute πŸ‘
continue soon πŸ‘

 

thanks soooooooooo much

Posted: 17 years ago
i'm posting the next part rite now
Posted: 17 years ago
CHAPTER 4

Next morning when its morning angad goes to kanan's room and knocks on her door
she opens it half asleep.
When she sees angad she opens her eyes fully

K=kya faisla kiya thumne

A=(surprised)thume kaise path ke main thume appna faisla sunaie ayya hoon

K= subhae ke saath bage main aur kya expext karou

Angad rund his hang through his hair and says

A=so tho hain
Main thumse saache dil se shaadi kar na chatha hoon par …………

K= par kya(asked surprisingly)

A=mughe galat mat samajna apr main usse mandap par shaadi kar na chatta hoon jisse par kripa ur nishant kar rahe hain.

Kanan looks at him with a blank face

A=kuch tho kaho

K=mughe phelse se pattha that ke tum ye kaho ge

A=kaise

K=pichle panch saal se dekti a tahi hoon thume itna tho pata ho ga.

A= so ur agree

K=yes I am reday

A=thank u so much kanan

Goes and hugs her

A=srry kanan par main thume vho gage nahin de paounga jho kripa ko di thi

K=its ok angad I know that

A= well can we go tell everyone now and I have to tell mishant too(thinking-and kripa )

K=Yes angad

A=K bye


First angad goes and tells dadi she is very happy that angad listend to her .

But when naina and dilip found out they were like

N&D=how can u do that ur my son and we won't let u make kanan our bahu

A=wrong I was ur son and u were never my parents I broke all relationships with u 5 yrs ago u can't decide what I can do and cant

And saying that he headed off to nishants house


Srry guy's g2g but I'll continue soon

How was the part?
If u don't like it tell me and anything u want me to add tell me

p.s If u don't like the fanfic now I promise the ending will blow u away.

and the in next part angad will discner something that just blows him away. πŸ˜•
Posted: 17 years ago
Originally posted by BABY-GIRL7


 

u have got to be kidding i love ur fanfic i cheak it 5 times a day to c if u updated it but thanks a lot it means a lot to me

thanx alot 😳i never knew i m that good at writting that someone checks my fan fics 5 times a day!😳 ur veryyyy sweet 2 say thatπŸ˜›

but seriously u write very well! when i was reading the parts i didn't feel u were writing 4 the first time , it looked like ur very experienced in writting fan ficsπŸ‘n keep up the good......naaa awesome  work! πŸ˜‰πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ

Posted: 17 years ago
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh don't make nishant n kripa n anagd n kanan marry! 😭
Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by angadkripafan


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh don't make nishant n kripa n anagd n kanan marry! 😭

 

that i won't do at all afetall i'm a a-k fan not n-kπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part! πŸ‘
i think angad will find out that they are only having a fake marriage...
anyways..
continue soon! πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 17 years ago
HEY I'M POSTING THE NEXT PART IN WHICH ONE SECRET IS OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: 17 years ago
CHAPTER 5

Before going to nishant's house angad went to a sweet shop nad bought a box of sweets and a card on which he got printed ANGAD WERD KANAN.

When he got to nishants house and was going in he met bua ji outside

B=arre angad beta kaise anna huya

A=actually nishant se kuch kam tha

B=par vho tho gahr par nahi hain

A=kya kri…. Tanya ji hain

B=nahin par tum jao anger nishant abhi atta hoga aur Tanya baocou ko pick up karne gaye hain

A=thek hain

B=tum jao mhuge zarra mandir ho kar atti hoon

A=bua ji agar app ko koi problem na hoot ho main app ka ghar thek sakta hoon jabb thak nishant nahin atta

B=yeh bhi koi puchne ki baath hain of couse dehk shake hoon

A=(thinking-akkir main bhi to dekhou kripa kaise retti hain yaha)

Saying that buaji left and angad went inside the house.

When he went in he first found a plain room which he knew belonged to nishant. Next a room filled with posters of him which obliviously belonged to tanu. And then a room with delicate show pieces and very sweetly decorated which he could tell belonged to kripa. He looked around if anyone was home and when he didn't he went in her room. He didn't know why but he liked being in the room which had kripa's presence.

While he was looking around he bumped into a side table due to which a few documents and phone dropped. He quickly pickes them up and put them in their place. While he was doing so he saw something sticking oit of the drawer without thinking he opened it and looked inside. There were a few documents and a picture frame turned upside down . he turned it around and saw him picture and beside it kripa's mangulsutra and a dibbi of sindor. This left angad shocked and surprised and wondering why kripa still had these things when she was marrying nishant.

All of a sudden he heard kripa's voice

K=yeh kya batamezzi hain?

He turned around startled that he was caught but no one was behind him. So he closed the drawer and went and his behing the curtains.
He swa kripa coming in , in a sulking mood and when she sat on her bed the 3 kids came behind her.

K= yeh teacher kya keh rahe thi ,tum theenou ne mile kar teacher ki chair toor dhi aur phir asse rake dhi jisse kise ko kuch pata na chale. Agar kuch serious ho jata tho tum kitne musabat meh fass shake the pata hain thume.

B,B = par aunty humane kuch nahin kiya

P= ha humne kuch nahin kiya

K= accha tho teacher jhooth bole rahe thi . bad both hoga ya abb maine thum teenou se booth naraz hua jao main thumse baath nahin kart hi

B,B and P =par app hi tho kethe hoon ki bache bhagwan ka roop hain tho app bhagwan se kasie naraz ho sakte hain

K= bhangwan. Shakla dekhi hain thumne pane shetan hoon tum shetan

Prateek comes ahead and says

P= kaha that um donu ko ki yeh mat karna kitne shetan hoon
Behind that he winks at bhim and bali.

Angad sees that and doesn't know why but ses himself in prateek. He also used to go that when he was a kid,

Kripa holds prateeks ears and says

K= tum tho sabse bade shetan hoon

Prateek quickly releses himself and all 3 of then go to a corner where angad coild hear them

B, B= abb thume hi manou aunty ko .

They both leave and prateek goes to kripa

P= srry abb tho maaf kar do please………

Kripa just faces the other way but prateek tuens her face around and gives her a 1000 watt smile and says

P= I'm a good boy na

Kripa just melts hearing this and nods

P= abb meri dou ( 2 ) kisses

Kripa gives them to him and he says

P=I love u mumma I'm ur good boy

K= I love u to beta

All of a sudden kripa hears a crash in the room and is shocked to see angad standing there with a very very shocked expresiion on his face. What Kripa feared most had happneded angad now knew that prateek was kripa's son.



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