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CHAPTER 3

KHANNA HOUSE

Kanan hears a knock on her door she opens it and is shocked to see angad standing there.

K=angad tum is waqy ghar pae kya har rahe hoon thume to appni date par honna chaye us Tina, Meena ya Ena ke saath.

A=ajj tum meri date hoon mughe 30 mins mein neeche milou mughe tum se ek zarrori baath kar ne hain.

K=par hum yaha par bhi to baath har sake the hain na?

A= nahin tum mughe 30 mins mein neeche milou

K=parů

But by then angad had gone.

Restaurant Hilton

K=abb boulu tho kya baath hain meri 30 mins se jaan nikal thi ja rahin hain

A=(takes kanan's hand at holds it)kanan tum jannti hoon ki main kripa ke barre mein kaise feel kar tha hoon maine use bhool jane ke booth koshish kare aur jab main kamaiwab hua vo meri zindagi mein vopis agaye. aur abb jab uski saagaye hoon rahe hain mhuge bhi lakta hain ke main bhi zindagi main aggaye barro.

Kanan just sat there looking surprised because she knew and angad didn't even want to hear her name and today he was talking about her.

A=tho kanan agar main thumse kuch magou ga kya tum mhuge vo dougi.

K=ha angad bool kar tho deekhou

A=will u spend the rest of ur life with me

K=(takes her hand away immediately and says)whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat

A=kyat um mera zingadi bhar saath dougi.kya tum sur ko apppni beti banaougi. kya tum mughe se shaadi karouge.

K=tum ya isle khe rahe hoon kyoni kripa zindiagi mein agge bar rahe hain?

A=(looks up surprised)

A=assie koi baath nahin hain

K=nahin angad abb tum meri baath suno tum isle mughe se shaadi kar na chaate hoon kyon ki tum kripa ko dikhana chate hoon ki tum bhi zindagi mein aggay bar sakte hoon.

A=kanan main zindage mein agay kaise bar hoon? Zindage tho peche chhoth gaye.

Kanan can see how sad anagd feels while saying all this .

A=jab bhi kisie ko appne paas anaye diye vo him mughe choor kar chale gaye. Phele kripa phir mom and phir tum bhi ja rahe thi.

K=angad tum ne kabhi soucha hain assae kyon hua. Chlou avantika aunty ko tum nahin rook sakte the. Par kripa kyon gaye ye tum aur mein acche tara se jannte hain.agar tum chate tho usse rook sakte the.

A=(bitterly)main kyin usse rok tha usse ne mughe par barousa nahin kiya mera pooura barasoua thoor diya usse ne mughe par rape ka illzam laga ya

K=galti kisse se nahin hooti(thinking-angad agar main thume ek baath bata doon jho tum panch saal se nahin jante tum toth jayo ge.)

A= itne baadi galti

K=kya thumne kabhi itne baadi galti nahin ke.

Angad thinks about the time when he didn't trust kripa.

A=main use bare mein baath nahin kar na chata par ye baath bhooth saaf hain ki jiise bhi maine appnaya vo mughe choard kar chala gaya.

K=angad appne ankeen band karo

A=kya.kyon.

K= just listen to me

Angad closes his eyes

K=don't open then till I say

A=ok babba

K=now picture the person u love most

Angad does that and sees kripa's face.and then sees all the flases of them together good and bad.

K= main jannti hoon ke thume kripa ka chera nazar aya raha hin
K=now remove all the bitter feeling u have 4 her in ur heart.

Angad does that and sees only good memories of kripa

K=abb souche kar batou ke vho tumari khusi ke liye kya kya kar sakte hain.aur jhooth mat boolna

A= vho kuch bhi kar sakte hain

K=aur agar tum uske jage hoothe aur jisse vho payar karti hi hain vho hi usse nafrat kare. nahin chaahe ki uskki shakal bhi dekhe paade kya karti hi vho.
Saccha jawab dena

A=vho mughe choor kar chale jaati tho mughe usse dekh kar dukhi na hoon na padde.

K=now u can open ur eyes

Angad open them and sees kanan looking at him carefully

K=abb thume appna jawab mile chukka hain ke jiise tum appnaya vho thume chor kar kyon jata hain

K=agar tum kripa ko dikane ke liye ki tum bhi agaye bar shakte hoon tho main thumse shaadi nahin kar shakti par agar tum mughe appne jeevan satthi dil se bananya chou tho tab mein tayr hoon tumse se shaddi kar ne ke liye
Aur abb chaolu booth der hogaye

They go home and go 2 their rms .kanas goes to bed but angad thinks about what everything kanan said.



What will de decide?
And what is that secret that angad does not know?

How was the part? Did u all like it?

P.S I hope it was long enough

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awesome part!!!

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ONLY ONE COOMENT AND I WROTE SUCH A LONF PART 4 ALL OF U
Cry

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awesome fan fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!! brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clap Big smile

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amazing parts!!!!!!!!! Big smile i wish ekta thinked like you!!!!!!!!!! LOL

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awesome part Tongue loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 09 July 2006 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
great part

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