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Door Jakar Bhi Tum...(ak)ch-14 pg.20 (Page 25)


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Posted: 15 September 2006 at 7:48am | IP Logged

Angad looked at his watch. It had been 2 hrs since they( nishant and angad) had been thrown out of their dearest wives rooms. And now it was time for their reception party.
And now both of them were waiting for them in the lobby.

N= angad what's the longest time kripa has taken to get ready?

A= I think 4 no………. 5 hrs.


A= yep trust me it was an awfully long day

N= pata nahin ye intne der kyon lagate hain.

A voice from the back said……..

V= because we r girls

Nishant and angad turned aroung and saw kanan and kripa looking drop- dead hot. Which left angads and nishants's mouth open.

As both of them headed towards their wives. Nishnat and kanan left for the hall and as angad came towards kripa. All of a sudden prateek ran to kripa crying …

P= mummaaaaaaaaaa

He just held on to her and cried

P= mumma app kaha thi app ko pata hain mhuge kitna daar laga rat ko. Main app se both narazz hu app ne to mhuge meri kisses bhi nahin dhi.

Kripa bent down and held her ears

K= mumma is so srry baby. Ok . abb ye lou apni kisses.

And kripa kissed prateek on his checks.
All of a sudden angad spoke up .

A= prateek kya main appko appke kisses de sakta hoon?

P= got scared on seeing him   and hid behind kripa.= nahin app both gande hhon

This hurt angad very much so he turned to leave but kripa stopped him.

K= prateek app innse asse baath nahin kar shate.

P= looking at kripa= mumma ye booth gande hain . inoune mhuge dannta.

K= ek baath bathou jab main app ko dannth thi hoon tho app mhugse to nahin gussa hote.

P= kyonki app meri mumma hain.

K= talking a deep breath= aur ye appke papa hain.

P= just stood there looking at kripa and angad.
P= ye nahin ho sakta

K= kyon( shocked at his reply0

P= kyonki mere papa to superman hain.
LOOKING AT ANGAD WITH A PUZZLED FACE= kya app hawaa mein auur ( fly) kar sakte hain?

Angad just looked at kripa with a helpless face. While kripa just slammed her hand into her forehead , thinking when will superman's booth get off prateek. But all of a sudden she got an idea.
She whispered something into angad's ear. Which made his face light up also.

A= main to nahin fly kar sakte par main app ko zarror fly karva sakta hoon. Saying that he lifted prateek off his feet and into the air. Which made him forget all his differences
Now angad was holding prateek while he clung on to angad's neck.

P= main appko ek shart par papa mainounga ……………………….agar app mhuge phir se nahin chor kar jayennge.

This brought tears to all 3 of their eyes and angad also brought kripa into an embrace . and all of a sudden.

Sur= ye yaha kya ho raha hain vo bhi meree bina.
And she walked up to them while angad released prateek and set him on the floor.
But she didn't stop infront of angad but walked infront of kripa . took her hand and pulled her down so she was at equal height with her.

S= kya app mere mumma hain?

This just shocked kripa and anagd . they only had one thought . how did she know?

S= kya app mere mumma hain?

Kripa just held her face and shook her face = ha………..
And both of them embraced each other

This was a moment to watch . the reunion of a perfect family..

All of a sudden. Everyone appeared infront of them .( naina , dadai , karthick , dadi_

Dadi= abb chale andar agar tummara milna katam ho gayeaya.

It all clicked now……dada had told sur everything.

And they all headed inside for a party that no one could forget .

Srry 4 the delay

I know this part wasn't all that brilliant but I think the next or next to next part will be the last.
I may take some time to continue so please understand

insia12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 September 2006 at 8:20am | IP Logged
awwww so sweeet part....u r ending it..aww i m gonna miss this 1!!! Clap Clap Clap

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Posted: 15 September 2006 at 8:24am | IP Logged
thanks Wink
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Posted: 15 September 2006 at 9:13am | IP Logged
gr8 part Clap
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Posted: 15 September 2006 at 9:30am | IP Logged
awesome part!
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Posted: 15 September 2006 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
great part
finally they are a family
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Posted: 15 September 2006 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
thats soooooooo sweeet!!!!!!!!!!!!   ur ending it.. aww.. ill miss it but its okay.. as long as ak are together!!!!!!!!

good job and continue sooooooon
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Posted: 15 September 2006 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
wonderful Clap Clap

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