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sherni_ashish

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Hey guys as u all know 2day is DEK's anniversary.. If it was still on air.. So on this special occasion I will share with u 2 different stories which had been written by me when DEK was still on air as an attempt 4 the cvs 2 give it a more romantic n spicy end as it was already announced it had 2 end!.. It was particularly when ariyan(akash) n manyata hugged each other! So the story goes on from there! Plz do comment which 1 u liked more!!
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Option 1:

imaginary epi of DEK:
The story starts when Akash and Manyata r hugging each other..leaving Udhay n Tara shocked...akash is looking at Udhay to see his reaction.. Udhay is shattered..while Manyata is in Akash arms suddently she remembers she is engaged to Udhay.. When she looks at him she sees pain in his eyes!! First time she doesn't see anger.. Bt she sees him shattered.. N unknowingly she feels the pain as well..Udhay suddently hides his pain behind his mask.. Cold n anger is shown in his expressions.. He tells her:

Udhay-"Manyata!!! tumhe hamari izzat ya tumhara parivaar ka koi fikar nahim.. Par hume hai.. How could u Manyata? mujhe bewakuf banarahi thi aaj tak? Tumne humse vadaa kiyatha ke aainda hamara bharosa kabhi nahim torogi.. Lekin.. ek pal mein tum sab kuch bhul gai ye Akash ke liye..?". 

He looks straight in her eyes n says: 

Udhay-" Hum tumhe kabhi maaf nahim karenge..kabhi nahim". 

Manyata tries 2 explain herself saying: 

Manyata-"Udhay tumhe pata hai ke Akash mera pyar.. ". 

Bt Udhay doesn't let her finish: 

Udhay- "Bass Manyata.. Bass! hum tumhare is chawl chapter se thak chuke hain..hume kuch nahim sunna hai". 

Aryan is laughing with an evil smile amused by Udhay's reaction. Tara is also shocked with all this.. She says: 

Tara- "Aryan ye ho kya gaya hai tumhe! Is larki ke liye tum mujhe bhulgae? Tumhare baaten, tumhara pyar sab jhoota tha?".

Udhay is furious aur wahaan se chale jaata hai aur Manyata usko dekhti rehti hai! Phir vo tara ko dekhti hai n she feels sorry 4 her..akash ka chehra mein saaf uski guilt dikhaai deti hai.. Vo kehta hai: 
Akash-"tara mujhe pata hai ke mei tumhara gunegaar hun par try 2 understand..". 

Tara- "understand? Tumne mujhe dhoka diya!kya tumhe andaaza bi hai ke tumne mujhe kitna hurt kiya?ab kuch nahim raha samjhane ke liye.. Ye he tumhara pyar hai na?..to raho iske saath..mei jaarahihun". 

And she also leaves ! Akash is quite disturbed by her words bt he turns 2 Manyata n says.. 
Akash-"moniya Ab hum dono ko koi judaa nahim karsagta.. Khudaa bi nahim..". 

Manyata is still shocked with all! N she nods silently... Then Akash tells her.. 
Akash- "Ab mujhe kisiski bhi zaroorat nahim hai.. Mujhe to bas isi din ka intezaar tha jab tum mere saath hogi.. Ab hum dono milkar tumhara parivaar ka badlaa lenge..tum mera saath dogi na?". 

M looks at him astonished.. Vo kehti hai. 

Manyata-" kya? Kya matlab? Mere parivaar se tum kyun badla lena chaate ho?". 
Akash-" monya kya hogaya tume? Bhulgai ke vo log ne mere saath kya kya? Kitna mujhe zalil kiya kyunke mere saath paise nahim the? ". 

Then he smiles arrogantly n says: 

Akash-" Lekin ab mujhe paise hai aur taakat bhi... Aur mei unhe nahim chorunga!! Specially vo tumhaara mangetar ko..". 

Manyata felt a pain inside when she heard this. Akash continues saying: 

Akash-"aur vo Tumhara dad nei to mujhe maarne ki kaushish ki..usi ne goli chalaai us din..". 
Manyata shocked hai n says: 

Manyata- "kya? Dad nei? Lekin mei samjhi Udhay ne tumhe..". 

Akash -" Nahim vo loverboy to khud ghabragaya jab mei gir raha tha..usme kahaan itni himmat hai kisiski jaan lene ki. Usne mera haat pakarne ki kaushish bhi ki.. Lekin tumhare dad ne behremise mujhe tumhari duniya se hataane ki kaushish ki.. Par ab mein lotgaya hoon.Aur mein use kabhi nahim chorunga!! Tum mera saath dogi na Monya?? Tumhare akash ka saath dogi hai na? ". 
Manyata is still in shock.. She always thought Udhay is guilty bt now... Truth is somthing else.. She starts remembering Udhay n all the good things he did 4 her..(flash back..) All they shared 2gthr n tears come rolling from her eyes.. She was so unfair to him.. Suddently akash kehta hai.. 

Akash-" Kahaan khogai monya? Ya phir tumhe ye rajkumari rajkumar khelna acha lagne laga? Tumhara vo arrogant Yuvraaj ka saath acha lagne laga!!monya.. Bhool gai vo bitehue din? Vo kasmein hum dono ne khaaen?". 

She thinks 2 herself " lekin waaden to maine Udhay ko bhi diye the aur mere parivaar ko.. Aur nibha na saki..". 

Manyata says: 
M-"akash abhi mei bahaut confused hoon.. Mujhe thora waqt do.. Mujhe sochne ke liye waqt do.." Akash is furious: 
Akash-"waqt?? Tum waaki me bahaut badal gai moniya..ek time aisa tha jo mere har kehne par tum haan karti thi aur ab tumhe waqt chaai ye?". 

Manyata says:
M-" tum samajne ki kaushish karo akash.. Vo mera parivaar hai.. Mere apnen hai.. Mera khoon ka rishta hain unke saath.. Kaise mei ye sab bhooladun?". 

Akash anger mei kehta hai .. 

A-" Monya ya tum mere saath ho ya phir mere khilaaf!!aur hum uske saath sath tumhe bhi barbaad kardenge is jung mei. ab Faisla tumhare haath mei hai..". 

Manyata ye sun kar shocked hai.vo rote hue wahaan se chalijaati hai..

Udhay n unnati in his room- 
Udhay is furious: 
Udhay-" vo manyata samajti kya hai apne aapko.. Hamara rishta ek mazaak samajti hai? Usne mera atmaan kiya.. Mujhe zalil kiya us do take ke akash ke liye..hum use kabhi maaf nahim karenge ". 

Unnati kehti hai. 

Unnati- "dada aap plz shaant hojaaiye. Hum yahaan se chale jaaenge.. Sab thik hojaaega.. I promise u". 
udhay looks at Unnati.. 

Udhay- "Chalejaaenge? ". 
- N he gives a smirk- 

Udhay-" Nahim unnati hum kahim nahim jaaenge..ab to hum us Manyata ke saath shaadi karke hi rahenge. Chae kuch bhi hojaae. Chaae vo maane ya na maane! Usne mere saath bewafaai ki.. J thik kehrahithi.. Manyata bewafa hai.. Usne hamara bharosa tora! Ab use uski sazaa zaroor milegi". 

Unnati ye sab sunkar heraan hojaati hai.. .

Manyata arrives home.. She looks for Udhay.. She has to apologise to him 4 being so unfair 2 him.. She asks unnati abt him.. Bt unnati replies coldly.. 

Unnati- "ab kya chatiho hamare dada se Manyata? Humne kabhi socha bhi nahim tha ke tum aisa karogi.. Vo bahaut hurt hain.. Tumne uska dil tora.. Pehli baar.. Pehli baar Manyata dada ne kisiko apne aap se zyada chaha..tumhare pyar mein hamare dad ke khilaaf gaya. Usne kya kuch nahim kiya tumhare liye..? Par tumne..tumne to uska bharosa tora.. Uska pyar khatam kardiya aur nafrat ke aag me jalaadiya.. Humne hamesha tumhara saath diya Manyata.. Par ab nahim.. Jo hamare dada ko itna hurt kiya hum uska saath nahim de sakte..vo bahaut ache hain.. Kaash tum unhe hamare nazron se dekhsakti " 

Manyata sab sun kar bahaut disturb hai.. Udhay use itna pyar karta hai aur usne kabhi ye pyar dekh nahim paya? 

M:" unnati plz hamare liye zaroori hai Udhay se baat karna abhi isi waqt... Kahaan hai vo?". 

Unnati-"kya hua Manayata? Abhi tak tumhara dil nahim bhara mere dada ko hurt karke? Ab kya chaatiho?". 

M- "dekh mein jaantihun abhi tum mujse gussa ho.. Lekin mujhe Udhay se baat karni hai. Its very important..".

Vijay bhai n J arrive at tht moment.. 

J- "ab kya hua jiji? Us akash se jhagra karke aai? Aur udhay waapis chahiye? Bhooljao Udhay ko kyunke ab vo sirf hamara hoga..Aur hum itni bewakuf nahim hain ke use kisi aur ke liye chorenge..". 

Vijay- "manyata kya hua? Kyun itni pareshan lagrahiho? Kuch hua hai?". 

Manyata:" haan Vijhay bhai.. Kuch to hua hai.. Lekin hum khud nahim jaante ke kya hua hai.. Aur isi sawaal ka jawaab hum Udhay se chaate hain". 

Phir Komal Brij Meinka sab aajaate.. Manyata uski mom ke paas jaati hai hug karne ke liye.. Komal kehti hain..

Komal- "Aapne bahaut galat kiya beta Udhay ke saath.. Hum use bachpan se jaante hain.. Jabse uski mom ka intekaal hogaya vo bahaut badalgaya. Kabhi hasta nahim tha.. Hamesha ek adult ki tarha bartaav karta tha.. Phir vo baraa hogaya.. Phir bhi uski muskaan nahim lauti.. Pehli baar humne uske aankhon mei vo khushi aur uske chehre main vo muskaan dekha jab aapke saath tha.. Par phir bhi jo faisla aap lenge hum aapka saath denge.. Hum aapki maa hain.. Aur aapko hum dukhi nahim dekhsagte.. Par Udhay bhi humara beta hai.. Use dukhi dekhkar humra dil tootta hai..". 

Manyata is already feeling guilty n she starts crying.. Uska dad use hug karta hai. Brij- "manyata beta aap ko abhi bi lagta hai ke hum sab aapke khillaf hain.. Par aisa nahim hai.. Hume pehle sei vo aakash battameez aur buraa lagtatha jab vo gareeb tha..aur aaj uske paas bhale dolat aur izzat ho..lekin vo hume aaj bhi bilkul battameez aur arrogant nazar aata hai.. Aur hum aapka haat uske haat mein kanhi nahim de sakte.. Hamare hote hue hum tumhari zindagi ko uske saath barbaad nahim karne denge.."

Manyata is crying and thinking to herself..

M: "Oh Godji.. Mein kitni andhi thi? Mujhe to kuch nazar nahim aata tha.. Mera parivar mujse kitna pyar karta hai.. Mein kaise unke khilaaf jaa sakti hun? Kaise Akash ka saath dekar une barbaad karsagti hun..? Nahim mei aisa nahim karsagti.. Mein abhi jaake akash ko bataadeti hun ke mujhe ye manzoor nahim hai.. Jise mei aaj tak mera pehla pyar samajti thi.. Vo meri zid thi..mera pyar nahim.. Aur jise mein apna dushman samajti thi.. Vo to..."
N she closes her eyes scared 2 admit she had fallen in love with Udhay.. She looks at her family.. She hugs her dad her mom n says. 
M-" mein abhi aati hun.."
They ask her 
Brij-" tum kahaan jaarahiho?". 
Bt she doesn't reply n goes away.. Every1 is worried.. 
Vijay-" ye hamari jhaansi ki raani ko kya hogaya? Rote hue aise.. Bilkul devdaas ki tarha udaas hai vo..Ab kahaan gai? Kiske sath laraaai karne gai?". Menka looks angrily at him.. 

Gaari mei Manyata phones Udhay..vo rocks mei hai jahaan uska Manyata se 1st mulakaat hua tha.. Pathar phenkraha hota.. Flash back dekhta hai.. Un dono ki 1st mulakaat ka.. Par jab phone ring hota hai vo uska nr dekh kar call reject karta hai. Manyata use msg karti hai.. 
Msg-Dekh Udhay mei tumse ek zaroori baat karna chaati hum. Tum plz Akash ke ghar aajao. Mein bhi wahaan ponchrahihun" 

When M arrives at Akash house she listen 2 some voices.. Its akash n tara. He tells her:
Akash - "baby plz tumhe to pataa hai ke mere dad us parivaar se kitna nafrat karte hain.. Aur mujhe mere dad ka saath dena parega.. Hum un rajawaaron ko barbaad dekhna chaate hain..baghar karunga ine.. Chawl mein bhejunga sabko.. Bahaut naaz hai unka royal honeka na? Ab uska guroor mein torunga! Aur tumto jaanti ho ke mere dil mei sirf tumhare liye pyar hai baby.. Kisi aur ke liye nahim.. Mein to manyata ka istemaal karraha hun uska parivaar ko barbaad karne ke liye.. Jab mere dad ko pata chalaa ke vo murli yahaan mumbai mei tha to usne mujhe wahaan par bheja monya ka dil jhitne ke liye.. agar mei ameer banke jaata to use mujpar kabhi bharosa nahim aata. Isiliye vo dono ko mere parents banaakar mein vahaan gareeb ki zindagi ka nataak karke uska dil jitliya. Phir usse shaadi karke uske parivaar ko bataana chaate thei ke mei sach mei uska sabse bara dushman ka beta hun.. Lekin unlogon nei mujhe maarne ki kaushish ki.. Phir meri zindagi mei tum aai.. Aur mei dheere dheere sab bhooladena chaata tha. Lekin mere dad ko abhi tak unse badla lenahai.. Aur uska saath denekeliye maine ye pyar ka nataak karraha hoon manyata se.. Par pyar to mein sirf tumse karta hoon"
manyata is shocked.. Tara says:
T- "Aryan plz ye sab bhool jaao.. Hum ek nahi zindagi shuru karenge.. Yahaan se bahaut door chale jaaenge..". 
Manyata shouts:
M- "akash tum itne gheer jaaoge meri nazron se mei kabhi soch bhi nahim sagti thi..mere dad aur Udhay theek kehte te...tum ache nahim ho.. Mere laik hi nahim ho.. Acha hua ke mujhe Udhay se pyar hogaya..sacha pyar. Yehi kehne ke liye aaithi mein yahaan. Ke mein tumse nahim udhay se pyar karti hun..aur hamesha karoongi". 
Akash use rokne ki kaushish karta hai lekin vo bahaut ghabrahui hai.. Aur vahaan se pedal road tak chalijaati hai.. Akash uska picha karta hai... Dusri taraf Udhay ponchraha hai uski gaari mei.. Jab vo manyata ko dekhta hai he steps out of the car.. Manyata is running towards the road. She is in the middle of the road.. 1 side is Udhay n othr side is akash. A car almost hits her when udhay runs towards her aur use dhakka maar kar bachaata hai par khood ko chot ponchti hai.. At exact tht moment Rajmata wakes up from the coma n shouts 
DS-"Manyata beta..."
Udhay falls in the ground bleeding and unconscious.. 
Akash says:
A-" manyata mei tara ko jhoot bolraha tha. Mein tumse sacha pyar karta hun.."
To manyata reply karti hai.. 
M-"Agar aisa hai to kyun tumne meri jaan bachaane ki kaushish bhi nahim ki? Udhay humse sacha pyar karte hain..tum nahim..aur hum sirf Udhay se pyar karte hain.. ". 
Then she cries 4 help 2 take Udhay 2 the hospital. Vo behonsh hai.She calls her dad n goes 2 the hospital with udhay who is still unconscious.
At the hospital
she asks 2 the doctors abt him. Bt they ask
Dr:" aap yuvraaj ki kya lagti hai?
She says: 
M-" mein unki honewaali biwi hoon.. " 
Her parivaar is there when she says tht.. Unnati runs 2 the doctor with giriraaj to ask abt udhay.. He says: Dr- dekhye use gehri chot lagi hai.. Lekin ab vo bilkul theek hai.. Use sirf thora araam ki zaroorat hai.. Abhi honsh mei nahim hai..lekin agar aap chao use dekh sagte hain. "
When they enter the room giriraaj asks angrily.. 
G- "Ye larki yahaan kya karrahi hai? Manyata chalijaao yahaan se. Tumhaari wajaa se mere bete ki ye haal hua hai..". 
Manyata says: 
M-"nahim uncle hume yahaan se mat nikaaliye.. Hum marjaaenge.. "
Then suddently udhay neend mei uska naam leta hai... 
U-"Manyata.. Manyata.". 
She frees herself frm giriraj hand n runs 2 his bed.. Holds his hands n says.. M-" Me yahaan hoon Udhayveer hamesha ke liye.. Ab hume koi judaa nahim karsagta hai.. Mei andhi thi.. Mujhe tumhara pyar nazar nahim aaya.. Lekin ab mein jaan chuki hum ke hum bhi sirf tumse mohobbat karte hain mera raajkumar.. Behad mohobbat.."
Every1 is shocked with her words. But happy.. Except 4 Jey..kuch ghanten baad Jab Udhay ko hosh aata hai.. He sees Manyata n says. 
Udhay-" tum? Tum yahaan kya karrahiho?" She says. M-"yaad hai tumne mujhe bachaaya? Again! Tumhari jaan ko khatre mein daalkar meri jaan bachaai.. Mujhe tumse itni saari baaten karni hai.. ". He cuts. 
Udhay- " mein bahaut thak gaya hoon. Hume ghar jaana hai".

At home 
When they arrive home he says to every1.. 
Udhay-" Hume Manyata se kuch baat karni hai.. Akele mein.". 
When all leave He tells her: 
Udhay-" manyata hum nahim jaante ke tumhe mujse kya baat karni hai.. Aur hum jaan na bhi nahim chaate hein.."
Manyata says: 
M- "par udhay mujhe baat to karne do.. Asal mein vo akash tara se pyar karta hai..vo mujhe dhoka deraha tha". 
he cuts: 
U-" ooo.. To ye baat hai princess? To isliye ab tumhe hamari yaad aai.. Enough manyata..hum tumhare liye hamesha ek 2nd option rahe hain..or vo hum bardash nahim karsagte.kya chaati ho tum? tum jab chao hume thukrado or jab chaao yaad karo aur hum haazir hojaaenge..? Humne kahatha na!! Hum tumhe kabhi maaf nahim karenge.. Tumne mera bharosa tora..meri izzat ki parwa nahim ki.. Ab aur nahim". 
she cries: 
M-"par Udhay... hamari shadi? Humari mangni? Hamare parivaar ko kya kahenge hum? Tum plz samjo ke me kya kehna chaati hoon.. Mein Akash se nahim..". 
He says angrily.. 
Ud-"Ab hume kuch nahim sunna hai.. Shaadi?
"He laughs mocking.. 
U-"Hamare parivaar ki izzat ke liye hum tumse shaadi karenge lekin pyar ki ummed humse mat rakhna.. Hum tumse kabhi bhi dobara pyar karne ki bhul nahim karenge..humare dono parivaar ke samne hum nataak karenge ke hum dono ek dusre se bahaut pyar karte hain.. Par sach to ye hai.. Ke hum dono ek dusre se nafrat karte hain..aur humari shaadi bas ek dikhawa hoga duniya ke liye ". 
Manyata ye sunkar tootjaati hai.. Bt she agrees 2 him soch kar tht she deserves it.. Uski saza ko kabul karti aur apne aap soch ti hai. 

M- " hum uska dil zaroor jitenge.. Hum Udhay se itna pyar karte hain ke hum sabkuch sehne ke liye tayyar hain.. Uski nafrat ko bhi..usko humara pyar azmana hai.. Azmaanedo..". 
Then all parivaar comes inside and Udhay sweetly announces 2 every1 tht they both gonna marry soon..as if they r so much in love. He holds M's hand who shivvers by his touch n says sarcastically: 
Udhay"-isnt it sweetheart?". 
She nods still too conscious of his hand touching her n making her heat beat faster... Every1 is happy..bas J naraaz hai ye sab dekh kar..

Will Manyata b able 2 make Udhay change his mind?? Will she make him fall in love n trust her once again?? Will he b able 2 resist 2 her charms after their marriage while sharing the same house..the same room all days n nights??? ;)


Edited by sherni_ashish - 21 November 2012 at 4:41am

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Imaginary epi of DEK (2nd option):

The story starts when Akash and Manyata r hugging each other..leaving Udhay n Tara shocked...akash is looking at Udhay to see his reaction.. Udhay is shattered..while Manyata is in Akash arms suddently she remembers she is engaged to Udhay.. When she looks at him she sees pain in his eyes!! First time she doesn't see anger.. Bt she sees him shattered.. N unknowingly she feels the pain as well..Udhay suddently hides his pain behind his mask.. Cold n anger is shown in his expressions.. He tells her:

U-"Manyata!!! tumhe hamari izzat ya tumhara parivaar ki koi fikar nahim.. Par hume hai.. How could u Manyata? mujhe bewakuf banarahi thi aaj tak? Tumne humse vadaa kiyatha ke aainda humara bharosa kabhi nahim torogi.. Lekin.. ek pal mein tum sab kuch bhul gai ye Akash ke liye..?". 

He looks deep straight in her eyes n says: 

U- "is baar hum tumhe tumhari manmaani nahim karne denge! Tum humari mangetar ho aur humare saath jaaogi n that's final!" 

Manyata darjaati hai ye sab sunkar! Udhay grabs her hand and drags her along with him.. Akash tries 2 oppose bt Udhay pushes him away n warns him 2 stay out of this.. He says: "ye baat hamare aur hamari mangetar ke bich mein hai.. U stay out of this". 
Tara is also shocked n upset with Akash.. She stops him from going after M.. She says: 

T- "Aryan tumhe meri kassam!! Ye sab kya hogaya? Kya jaado kardia hai usne ke tum itna badalgae? Mein bahaut naraaz hum tumse.. Kabhi maaf nahim karungi tumhe.. " 
A- "aisa nahim hai Tara.. Mein sab tumhe samjaaunga baadme.. Maine tume kahatha na? Mujpar bharosa rakho aur mujhe kabhi mat choro.. Chae kuch bi hojaae.. Vo kya hai tum hi ho jo mujhee is paagalpan se bachaa sagtiho..." 
Tara is confused n sad.. 
Udhay takes Manyata to his car, he gives her an intense look which makes her shivver then looks back at majnu who is looking at him and M! But Tara holds his hands and takes him along with her... UV gives a smirk and sits in the car with M and leaves... He takes her to his hotel! She shouts at him:
M-"tum mujhe yahaan kyun le aae?" He tells her:
U- "oh com ooon princess! ab hum tumhe aek achi yuvraani banaaenge! Wo kya hai ke tumhare parivaar ko thukraakar tumne achaa kaam nahim kia princess.. Ab tumhare lye sirf humara hi darwaza khulla hai! Par koi baat nahim! Hum aapko apnaenge.. Aur aapko tameez aur tehzeeb bhi hum hi sikhaaenge.." And smiles amused with her anger and astonishment.. She shouts in dispair :
M-"tameez my foot! Hum aapse kuch bhi nahim sikhenge! Muje yahaan se jaana hai..." 
He stops smiling! He keeps looking in her eyes as if he could tell what she is thinking about and reach her soul! Manyata ko aek ajeeb darr lagta hai! She tries to run from him... But he is faster and holds her pushing her to the wall..he warns her :
U-" ab aur nahim Manyata! Tumne apni man maani bahaut karli par ab bas..ye chue billy ka khel ab khatam karo! Ab hum aapko bataaenge ke hum aapke mangeter hi hain..."
Then with 1 hand still holding her arms he caresses her hair with the other hand... Her chin... Her lips.. Her arm and she feels as an electric current in her whole body and tries to get rid of him.. But he doesn't let her go! He keeps on staring her with so much passion that she forgets everything else around her! She can't take her eyes away from his eyes! N she says almost whispering:
M-"Udhaaay.. Please mujhe jaane do.." 
He says...
U- "ahan..shhh princess!!! Kuch mat bolo.. Manyata tum bhi vahi feel karti ho jo hum feel karte hain.. Akash tumhara pyar nahim.. Tumhara bachpana hai.. Vo ek zeed hai... Pyar to tum sirf humse karti ho.. Ye ehsaas tumhe sirf humare saath hota hai... Yaad hai maine tumhe kaha tha?? Vo tumhare liye nahim hai.. U need a Man... And I'm ur man princess.. Aur hamare hotue hue tumhe koi aur chule ..nt even in dreamz!! Tumhe koi aur dekhle..vo bi humse bardaash nahim hota..tum hamari ho sweetheart.. Sirf hamari.. "
Manyata is so mesmerized by his eyes..his words.. His closeness..bt still she does a last attempt to free from his arms.. She shouts : 
M-"kutte kaminei!halkat veraa!tumne mujhe yahaan kyun leaaya? Me sab samajgai hun ke tum abhi tak mujhe tumhaari maharaani banane ki koshish kar rahe ho"
UV gets closer to her, veeery close n says on her ear:
UV-" koshish? Princess hum koshish nahim hum waaki mein tumse shaadi karenge aur humari wifey ko bahaut sataaenge! Par kisi aur ko tumhare saath kabhi nahim hone denge"
suddently he hugs her sooo tight n says
U- :" tum meri ho wifey sirf meri"
kuch seconds ke lie M sab kuch bhul jaati hai.. Akash ko , uske parivaar ko sabko aur use ye ehsaas hota hai ke use Udhay ke bahon mein kitna sukun milta hai.. Aur vo uske aankhem band kardeti hai.. Then UV looks at her with his wicked smirk n he kisses her on her eyes.. She opens her eyes scared of her own feelings n need 2 have him near and pushes him away and says:" kutte chor mujhe! maine tumhe abhi tak haan nahim kahaa, haan nahim to!" And UV laughs n replies:" nahim kahaa to bahaut jald ye bhi kehdogi.. Koi baat nahim! I have all my life princess.. Sola saal maine tumhara intezaar kiya.. Kuch der hi sai.. Aur me jaantahum ke tumhe bhi kuch kuch hone laga hai.. Aur waisse bhi mein tumhe chorne wala nahim hum! Aur tumhe kabhi bhi kisi aur ke saath nahim hone dunga.. To ant mein tumhe to mujhe apnaana hi hoga" n he smiles dangerously at her as if he was trying to intimidate her.. M feels scared when she looks at his eyes n feels his hands touching slowly her arms n then her neck.. N she realizes that what he just said is true! She just thinks about him and his advices all the time! She likes to impress him and hear his compliments! She tries 2 b a better princess coz of him!! She loves what she feels when she's in his arms.. She loves 2 b kissed by him.. Her heart beats much faster whenver he's around!!! The way he mesmerizes her she feels almost hypnotised by him.. She needs him more than she wishes she did.. But she can never admit that in front of him sooo.. She pushes him n tells him to take her home... He laughs at her...as if he knew what she's thinking.. As if he can read the passion n desire in her eyes.. and she looks at him thinking 2 herself how handsome and sweet he looks when he is laughing... He says: " ek baar princess..ek baar admit kardo that u can't live without me.. N u want me as much as I want u.. I can see the same paasion I feel 4u in ur eyes 2.. Hum tum par fida zaroor hain.. Par tum bhi humse pyar karti ho!! She feels shy trying 2 hide her eyes from him.. He looks so dangerously hooot... He forces her 2 look at him..She's totally lost in his eyes.. He's leaning 2 kiss her.. Softly.. But holding her close.. But still she tries 2 resist.. N pushes him away demanding him 2 take her home.. He laughs amused by her anger.. But he saw the sparkle on her eyes.. He knows she loves him as much as he loves her.. N he knows how 2 make this junglee billy surrender 2 his love... ;)

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 5:01am | IP Logged
2nd option for sure...Tongue

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
ohoo it was awesome.Really very awesome.Cont soon huh and pliz send me pm if u can:D

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Tks galz!! well actually I had written these at DEK time!! I stopped writing coz DEK ended!! it was just an attempt 2 make the cvs realize what we wanted.. but unfortunately they gave it such a lousy ending!! since then I stopped writing!! UV used 2 inspire me 2 write!! choco.swiss.. if write cont will surely let u know.. 

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sherni this is amazing plzz plzz plzz plz zplz zplzz plz zplz zplzz do coninue

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I love the 2nd option. It was amazing!!!

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Tks galz 4 the sweet comments!! I'll try Diva.. !!

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