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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 9:52am | IP Logged

This is my first ArHi fic ...hope to gets lots of love from u...enjoy the fic


Characters:

Khushi: She is a middle class girl. She was blind from birth but has been operated recently. So she is all new to this sight world. Her family consists of her mom and her younger sis. Her younger sis is an air hostess while Kashish is a violinist

 

Arnav: He is rich hot headed arrogant entrepreneur handling the family business. He is the eldest son of his famy; which consists of his mom, dad and younger brother

 

Part1

 

Khush's family throws a party Khushi ka operation successful hone ki khushi mein

There she gets to meet lot of people

But it's difficult for her to remember so many faces, just by looking

Her brain is just learning to recognize sight

Usko to saare chehre ek jaise lagte hain

She tries her best to map people through her sight but her mind would need a lot of practice

 

++++++++++++++++++++++++

It was a bright afternoon

 

Arnav was in a restaurant, in a meeting

Arnav, the man famous for his arrogance; jiske peeche saari ladkiyaan hain

He sees a gal abruptly come over to him {Khushi}

K-Hiii. Arre Pradeep tum yahan?. Tumhara kaam kaisa chal raha hai? Nayi airlines join kar li kya?

Arnav frowns hard he is like W*F

A-I don't know you

Khushi realizes she has again mistaken somebody else with someone

She says sorry and goes

Arnav is like, gals device so many plans to chase me

++++

Ab kuch aur din baad raaste pe chalte chalte

Khushi suddenly comes in front of Arnav

K-Arre Abhinav, tum? Tum to Japan jaane wale the naa. Laut bhi aaye?

Arnav recognizes her but this time he is hell irritated by her antiques

He just ignores her and walks away

 

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A week goes by

Arnav ko bas ek lunch time milta hai to spend with his love..cigarette

Warna to during office hrs he is very busy

He gets to smoke only during the lunch time, office se bahar aake

He is peacefully smoking near the bus top jahan chotti moti shops hain

Khushi is standing there, waiting for her bus

As she was blind she couldn't read

She walks over to him

K-Excuse me, mujhe yahan jaana hai

Shows him a written chit

K-Kya ye bus wahan jayegi?

Maan narrows his eyes...this was the limit of chasing him

a-Yooouuu

Khushi blinks her eyes in a confused manner

K-Huh?

A-Another plan to get close to me huh?

K-Huh?

A-Itne din se mujhe follow kar rahi ho

K-Kya? Main aapko follow kyun karun? Main to aapko jaanti bhi nahi. Maine aapko kabhi pehle dekha bhi nahi. Kaun hain aap?




Edited by storywriter - 26 November 2012 at 9:32am

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PART 2

A-Itne din se mujhe follow kar rahi ho

k-Kya? Main aapko follow kyun karun? Main to aapko jaanti bhi nahi. Maine aapko kabhi pehle dekha bhi nahi. Kaun hain aap?

A-Kaun hoon main????????????????????????? Main kaun hoon???????? Main kaun hooon???? Haan?

k-Haaannn. Mujhe lagta hai aap pagal hain. Khair main kisi aur se puch lungi bus ka number

A-Puch rahi hai..main kaun hoon. Huh

She ignores him

He lights another cigarette

She moves away to a distance

But he is a chimney...ek ke baad ek

k-Please do'nt smoke. It disturbs me

He raises an eyebrow in utter annoyance

A-Why?  Is it your property?

k-No, it's not even yours. I request don't smoke, I have a problem

A-If you have a problem then you go somewhere else

k-I can't... because I am waiting for a bus

He comes in front of her and starts smoking

k-**cough...cough**...stop it..

Her eyes are burning...please stop..I have a medical problem

But the smoke has entered her eyes...she is feeling dizzy...her eyes are burning...she can't see anything...it's all hazy

She sits on the bus stop

He is looking at her...samajh nahi aa raha hua kya aisa...whyy is she reacting like this...smoke hi to tha...kya acting kar rahi hai to get his sympathy?

She somehow takes out her phone from her purse and calls her mom

Maa comes and escorts her

Par tab tak Arnav has gone back to his office

He is back to office working, its late evening

Police enters

Police-Aapke Khilaaf Miss Khushi ka complaint hai ki aapne unhe jaan bujhke harass kia when she had medical problem and also a complaint for public smoking. She said that you are responsible for her health deterioration and that would have been fatal

His jaw clenches with rising anger

But for the time being he acts skeptically and uses his contacts to lead the police to leave him

Agle din to Arnav uss ladki ko mazza chakhane ke iraade se khade hai

She comes there

He locates her

A-AYE !

k-Kya aye ? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho, tumhe to jail ho jaani chahie thi

A-Naa jail to mujhe ab hogi tuhe maarne ke jurm mein chudial

k-Rakshas kahin ka...tum mein to humanity bhi nahi hai

A-Haan haan badi aayi mother Teresa! Jhuthi makkaar 420!

k-Main????? Jhuthi makkar?????? Mujhe eye problem hai

A-Kaisi problem? Sahi to dikhta hai

k-I was blind

A-Achcha aur chamatkar se ankhen aa gai

k-There is something called surgery, Einstein!

Dono chup...silent

Khushi bus dekhne lag jaati hai, Arnav dusri side

Both are ignoring each other's presence...both r la la la

Hhe takes a cigarette between his lips

She squeaks

k-Phirs se!

She pulls it away and throws it


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PART 3

He takes a cigarette between his lips

She squeaks

k-Phirs se!

She pulls it away and throws it

a-How dare you throw it away!

 k-How dare you still smoke?

a-I hadn't smoked in front of you, I can walk, madam curie!

k-You can't walk out without apologizing

a-What????????????????? Apologies for what?????

k-For..for...irritating me

a-You irritate me more...apart from that I don't think I did anything wrong, I only apologies when I make mistake

k-I think you made mistake

a-I don't...its not a mistake as high that demands apologizing

k-Really? Then what do you think requires your high apologies [she says in a taunt tone]

a-Don't use that tone

k-eh???? Say naa what requires your high apologies...huh? Don't wanna show? Scared of police?

He is pissed off

He pushes her a bit

a-Sorry! Happy?

Khushi is shocked at his behavior

She loses a bit balance

k-ehhh

He takes out his cigarette packet and empties it on her head

a-Sooorryyy

Khushi is so zapped and damn furious

She pushes him with all her might, and kicks on his knee and he loses balance landing on his back

Arnav is too startled to react anything

She sits on him and starts pulling his hair with all her might

She is not leaving

He throws some mud on her

Some drops splash on her face

Khushi ne to saari to mitti dhul kichad jitna tha Arnav ke sar ke face pe shirt pe har jagah madh dia

Baithi hui hai Arnav ke upar aur maare jaa rahi hai

Crowd is gathered

Khushi comes into herself seeing the crowd aur jaldi se escapes taking an auto

Ab Arnav apne office pohonchta hai mitti se sanna hua, baal khade hue, shirt bahar, lutti pitti halat

All eyes in his office are stuck on him

Arnavl ki izzat ki to band hi baj gai

Uske upar ek ladki se pitt gaye puri janta ke beech

Khushi comes home and narrates the story to mom

Mom is worried says ki

K mom-This world is big bad place for my doll. Khushi you are very naive and innocent. You don't know about this world,: specially this new world where people can see and specially you don't know men. They can harm you. That boy could have harmed you. Don't pick up fights like this. I know you are very naive and meek. You can't handle this world


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