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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: golu_1677

thanks for a superb part...


thx fr finding it superb
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: spvd

part 13
awesome...thx
waah kya teacher hai...he..he he...unique
now Sujal is all ready to teach Kashish and also meet her mom...yup...plan set
very good...
this update was so nice...
cont soon dear...thx fr likin dear...will surely cont the soonest

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Pumpkinn

Hey ...hey
Nice part ...thx
The way Sujal was convincing Kashish was very sweet ...ha ha ha..hez a charmer...isnt it
He very well know how to play with words ...sure, he does
And that hug was the best part ..Sujal ki to chaandi ho gai
Loved it ...thx..n i loved ur cmmnt
Looking forward to read how Sujal will teach his favourite student Kashish ...yeah sure..keep reading
Continue soon ...sure dear...thx fr cmmnt

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

update was very nice...thx dear
sujal is trying his best to convince kashish. He will be a very loving teacher to his dear student kashish...sure...ultraaa lovingšŸ˜‰
continue soon...sure dear...thx fr btfl cmmnt

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi
the up is good
kashish and sujal convo but her mom comes in btw and sujal takes over the situation he handles her mom and finally her mom allows kashish to go to her class
sujal and kashish went to zoo 
and there they had fun
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 14
awesome...
Sujal is a smooth liar...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I understand Kashish' s momz concern but that was too much ...
Asking Sujal his age Hehehe I am still laughing ...
But he very nicely convince her ...
And I really loved his way of teaching ..
Kashish is lucky to have such a talented , hot , Charming teacher ...

Great part ...
Waiting for more ..
Continue soon ...
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PART 15

Near the monkey's enclosure the two monkeys were mating

As Sujal was explain about animals Kashish ne zor se pooch liya

k-Ye kya kar rahe hain???

s- armm they are in copulating

k-In what?

Kashish ko laga kuch hoga animals ka term khane pine ka

s- Look it up. Tumhara home work

 

Sujal sab dikhata hai zoo bhi band hone wala hota hai to they get out

s-So you enjoyed the zoo?

k-Yesss

She says frinning happily

s- You liked the animals?

k-Yeah but most of all I liked one animal

s- Which one?

k-You!

She says grinning cheekily

He raises his eyebrow

s- Well...now comes the difficult question for today..I was going to ask you to describe your favorite animal..and since it's me...you have to describe me

He says smiling smugly

k-ohhh wellā€¦ok then let's start

Kashish looks at himā€¦upar se neeche nazar pherti hai

k-Hair-cactus like, face-stone like, eyes-insignificant

s-You have to color me in too...start again with colors

k-Well hair red, eyes magenta, face black, body pink, lips green

Kashish burst in laughter

While Sujal is straight faced and unimpressed

s- Fail. e report card tumahre ghar jaa rahi hai. Hass lo; jab tumari maa poochegi ki meri intelligent bachchi fail kaiseā€¦to kujhe mat kehna

Kashish is laughing more at his sulking

k-Haan ek chez add hi nahi kiya; nose flared when angry and eyes narrow and jaw clenched

s-Good very good so - you know what angry look is, that's good

k-I know

She gently touches his face , closes her eyes and feels his facial features texture and contours. The way she always recognized people close to her before getting her visual abilities

s-Like what you feel?

He asks smugly

k-What is there to like or dislike? Everyone has what you have, 2 eyes one nose one mouth 2 ears

s- I see.. so I have no visual appeal? After all kisi ki aankhien badi hoti hai naak choti hoti hai etc etc

k-You are asking about visual appeal from a blind? And also id you ask about my blind sensibilities then  I don't know...I haven't touched much male faces and according to female level you are too hairy

s-I am just asking what you think of men as handsome or all men are same or that you like bald men?

k-I don't know. The person is important. Beauty isn't a criteria..I couldn't see much anyways and also I am not beautiful to expect a handsome man

s- Tum kya bol rahi ho aur maine kya poocha

k-ufff tumne kya pucha?

s-See girl, thing is simple; I am fishing for compliments purely materialistic outer beauty ones...

k-I know how shallow you are. That's what I expect...

She says rolling her eyes

s-What shallow?

k-You. For example, have you ever spoken to yourself?

s-Do I talk to myself? All the time. Everyone talks to themselves at some point of time

k-Do you hear the inner silence?

s-Nope. I hear lot of agreeing and disagreeing voices all the time

k-See,  hear your soul, your heart

s- I still don't see what it has to do with how I look?

k-See for my, looks doesn't matter. Not at all

s-Sure they don't. Doesn't mean you can't have a reference

k-See I don't know what look wise beauty is. I just don't know

s-Well one beauty is what others call beauty and then one beauty is what you find appealing on your own what you like seeing.. you feel you can look at for hours. The first one defines fashion trendsā€¦the second one... well sometimes if you like a person enough, you start to think they are beautiful even if they might be hideous according to first type and you can look at that for hours...

k-Yes that's so true!

s-The beauty of first type is always changing but second one is different

k-No, second one also changes if you start hating the thing

s-It's generally same for a all your life and wellā€¦if you truly like,  I doubt you can hate it

k-Why? Hate is just part of love. It's love gone bad; nevertheless its love

s-Well, now we are going deep into the matter. If it's just like maybe you can forget it or hate it ...

k-No no. Opposite of love isn't hate is apathy, when you don't care

s-You may not find it not beautiful.. but then you still want to see it...and you get obsessed. You want to look, keep seeing, love or hate. You want to see, beautiful or ugly. You want to keep looking. That's when you are really messed about something

k-Yeah, sad when it happens to people. But one thing I know and found beautiful and I am so glad I am with it

She smiles

s-You are talking about my car aren't you? I know it's a classic. I love it too

k-No, your watch

She has mischievous side grin

s- oh my watch? Well ...: maybe I'll give you one as a prize if you keep up your grades

k-No thanks..it looks good on you. Actually you look good after wearing it

s- A female's version Kashish..

Beech raaste mein Sujal car rokta hai

s-Chalo chalo..

k-Kya? Kahan?

She is perplexed

s-Book store. We'll make a quick stop here and then tumhe ghar chodna hai warna tumhari maa tumhe kal nahi aane degi

k-ohhh. Waise Sujal

s-Hmmm?

k-Tum bhi bure nahi ho. Kabhi kabhi 1-2 second ke lie ache bhi lagte ho

s-oh really?

He grins with pride

k-Hmm. Haan Andhere mein. Movie hall mein, bohot ache lagte ho. Jab dikhte hi nahi

She burst into laughter

s-Hmm we can go for another movie. You can enjoy my looks and I'll enjoy telling u the movie

She looks at him and thodi blush wali smile remembering the day when they went for a movie last time

 

He takes her to a huge book store

Ab Sujal se zyada padai wadai bas ki to hai nahi

So first he thinks ki Kashish ko padna anna chahiye

Par wo to baith kar sikhane se raha

To wo usse lejata hai wahan jahan special people ke liye teaching learning books hai

Wahan jo log dekh sakta hai and brail seekhna chahte hahin unke liye bhi books hoti hai so Kashish can learn in reverse

Aesa kuch soch kar waisi kitaab kharidi jaait hai  aur ek kitaab animals par khardii jati hai

Then they come out and Sujal drops Kashish home

Kashish to ache se bye bye wave karti hai

He winks at her and leaves

Kashish khushi khushi ghar aati hai chehre pe smile chipkaake

Maa interrogates ki kya hua kya pada ye wo

Kashish shows the books and all

Maa impressed

Sujal ka plan bhi kaam kar hi gaya

 

To ab aese hi chalta hai..

Sujal kabhi Kashish ko beech le gaya

Whan sab log saari cheezein sab ko bataya ki kya kya hai wo kya hai

Kabhi market le gaya

Kabhi bass aise hi driving around ki jo Kashish ko dikhe sadak par; nahi pata ho wo poocho ki kya hai. Beech beech mebi color test chalta rehta hai

Kashish ko naam likhna sikhata hai

Maa bhi background mein hai

Kabhi bhi wo bhi Kashish ka surprise test le leti hai

Yahan maa peecha na chode aur kabhi Sujal pareshaan to wo bhi difficult question pooch leta hai

Kashish bhi kabhi kabhi Sujal ko uda deti hai

Bas aese hi kabhi when Kashish Sujal  ki zyada uda de ya Sujal ki baaton mei dhyan naa de to Sujal pooch leta hai thoda difficult sawaal to keep her in line

Kabhi kabhi Kashish ghar se Sujal ke lie kuch kuch laati bhi hai sneak karke

Kabhi maa ke haath ke ladoo, thodi sabzi bachake jo Kashish ne banaai aur sabko pasand aai

Sujal ko bhi wierd laga shuru mein ki someone is sneaking him bits of foodā€¦matlab he can go to fine restaurants ad get excellent service there but then he likes the gesture and the will behind it plus he realizes that he has a taste for her cooking

To then when the heat is off from mom and Kashish bhi kaafi seekhne lagi hai; apne aap se curious hokar poochne lagti hai aur books padne ki koshish karti hai to Sujal also relaxes and ab wo padai kaam aur tafri zyada karte hain

Itna ghumte hain to Sujal haath-waath to pakad hi leta haiā€¦kabhi coz of crowd kabhi coz of terrain kabhi bas aese hi

Pehle kahsish was wary of the action but she also gets used to it and starts liking it as contact and touching is a big thing for blind people

So she gets comfortable with it and expects it too

As for blinds, since they can't see all other senses are a bit heightened

They touch everything to familiarize themselves and when you can't see anything and although you can hear someone near you wouldn't you just instinctively reach out and hold their hand or put your hand on their shoulder so that you know you are not alone

Imagine blind people in a crowd, when there are so many people around and only one is yours and although you know them by scent and feel their presence; it is just so much more relieving to hold on to him

 

Sujal comes to meet her as per the daily routine

But Kashish frowned seeing him

She comes close, smelling him

Sujal ne aaj perfume change kiya and so he smells different

She knows it's not about the perfumes scent but Sujal has his own scent, it's the way he walks, the way he breaths, the way he moves, the clothes he wears

It is not like she does not recognize him coz of the change but few little things when changed become bothersome and irritating

She was sniffing him

s- oh I like the way you smell too

He takes her in a bear hug and bends his face to her neck and take a deep breath

She frowns...

k-You smell different

s- I changed my cologne. Khatam ho gaya tha

k-emm..wo acha tha

s-This is nice too...

He pouts

s-So where do you want to go today?

k-Home

s- oh abhi nahi... abhi sab ghar par honge fir sba log 10 baat poochenge. Maine tumhe kabhi aur apne ghar lekar jaunga

k-Arre apne ghar!!

s-Abhi to aayi ho.. apne ghar ko jaana hai tumhe itni jaldi? Koi khaas baat?

k-Haan

s- oh kya baat hai?

k-Surprise surpriseā€¦there's a show

He raises his eyebrow

k-Kya hua?

She giggles

k-Awww you look cho cute when you do that

s- Thank you. You look cute too, most of the time

She smiles

He lets go of her, puts his hand around her shoulder and walks her to the car

k-Flirt !

s- Who me?

k-Yesss you

s- Naaahhh! O if you have to go this show or whatever, am I invited?

k-Sure. Here's the pass

She gives him

s-oh chlo phir ye show bhi dekh lete hain

k-Will you come?

s-What? We aren't going together?

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 15
awesome...
waah what a lovely teacher Kashish has got...
lucky her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Too good
Khushi has indeed got a very different teacher
continue soon