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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
lovely start...

waiting...

cont soon..


thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
Waiting for the Update

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Nice one.

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 3:19am | IP Logged
lovely prologue.
do update soon.

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 5:05am | IP Logged

Khamoshi''
                        lakin kab tk''''

 

Part 1

 1.jpg

At airport

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Driver:
 madam ji, maine saara saaman car mein rkh diya hai

Aap'

She: chliye bhaiya

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     *********************

Apne desk ki mitti ki khusboo ko..kitne waqt baad mahsoos kiya''.

Ek arsa bit gya'..yha ke mausam mein saas leye huye''.

Yha ki dhoop, yha ki hawa,

Hmara ghar,pariwaar'..

Mere dost''mera p****?

      **********************

He : kaun tha wo?

She: abbu

Unka naam

He: mein nhi chahta tum uska naam bhi apni jubaan pe layo

Tumpe humne itna barosa kiya '..aur tumne ek pal mein hi hmara viswaas tod diya

She: nhi abbu

She continuously crying'.her tears not stops''..

Asa mt khiye'

Allah ki kasam humne kuch asa nhi kiya''.abbu

Abbu: tum paraye mard ki baho mein thi aur tum khti ho'..ye galat nhi hai

She: abbu'..hum unhe pasand karte hai''..

Abbu: geett

He raised hand for slapped her but stop in mid.

Ammi: khuda ke waste aap shant ho jaiye

Abbu: kaise ho jayu mein shant

Is ladki ne ek baar bhi khayal nhi kiya hmari izzat ka

Aap is ladki ko hmari nazro se door le jaiye

Ammi: zaira , geet ko andher leke jayo

Zaira: ji

Zaira: geet andher chalo

Geet: ek baar hume abbu se baat krni hai''..

Ammi: geet andher jaiye apne kamre mein

Geet: ammi ek baar'''.

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            **********************

Due to Sudden break of car, she came out from own thoughts''

Driver: madam aap thik hai na

Geet: hmm

Driver: madam ghar aa gya hai

Geet: hmm

          **********************

she: kaisi hai meri baby

She cupped her face and kissed on her forehead.

geet: thik hu daai maa

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daai maa: baby tum room chalo'..ye samaan deepak le aayenga

geet: hmm

           *********************

Geet: abbu dekhiye na

Daaimaa ne hume chocolate nhi dilayi

Abbu: aap hmare pass aaiye

She came near and sat on his lap.

Geet : abbu hume chocalte khani hai

Abbu: hmm

Hmari princess ko chocolate khani hai

She nodded.

Abbu: ye lo

Geet: itni saari

Abbu: hmm

Geet: mere liye

Abbu: hmm

Geet: thankyou abbu

Abbu: welcome beta''

She stands'..but her father words stops him.

Abbu: mera gift

She came near him and kissed on his cheek.

He smiled.

              *******************

She smiles'.but vanished in few seconds''..

Geet: abbu ab aap humse shi se baat kyun nhi karte'''.

Kya ab hum apki princess nhi'''.

Maine sbko bs dard diye hai'''.

Aur kuch nhi diya'''..

She cries''''.

 

 

Itni khamoshi kyun ho'''

Har ek rishte mein itna dard''..itni udaasi kyun ho

Mein kissi se bhi kuch kyun na kh saki'''

Na in saalo mein ''.maine wapas apne abbu ko paya''..

Aur pyaar to'''.phle hi kho chuki ho''''

Unhone kyun ek diwaar si khich di''''.hmare rishte mein'''

Kyun khamosh kr diya hmare rishte ko'''

Aur kuch ase rishte hai''..jha humne diwaar kbhi girani chayi hi nhi'''..

Khamoshi chayi hai'''''..bs ''''.darmiyaa''''''

       check this update also

maaneet ff - kaisa ye pyaar hai
maan bane joru ke gulam
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2669586&PID=69915543&#69915543


Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 21 November 2012 at 10:14am

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
fabulous and geet is lot of pain uski abbu ki saath strong bond hain aur uski pyaar bhi yahi hain lekin usne toh sab ko kokar akeli hain waiting for next

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 9:33am | IP Logged
interesting...
continue soon...

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
interesting dear update soon...

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