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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Rey and Vicky didnt fight, but Rey humiliated Taani very badly infront of everyone)
Avp: If you want the Dance Ban removed you'll have to compete with another collage and there after the authorities will decide if the dance ban should be removed or not. And there will be just one dance number, And two from this school who will dance and get judged! And Neha is one of them!
Neha started jumping and said: And the other one who is?
AVP: Thats a surprise ( After saying this she left )
Everyone was left in shock?! Surprise? what does that mean?!
Taani came to the classroom...
Taani: Neha, the dance is in an hour and you need to practise the dance routine with your partner.
Neha: Haan, Challo!
Rey and the gang: Who's the other person?
She turned towards them: I don't know guys, She said.
Rey looked at Taani and saw sadness in her eyes. He was sorry, feeling guilty.
Swayam: Taani?!
Taani: Haan bhai?!
Swayam: You ok?
She looked at him and tried to keep her tears from falling.
Taani: Uhm... Yeah.
There was an hour left for the competition and everybody was praying that the other dancer is good enough to get the dance ban removed.
Everyone was gathered and waiting for the performances. The gang was eagerly waiting.
Neha came down the stairs wearing a punjabi suit.
Suddenly the lights went of and the song began ( The song is Bhangra bistar )
When the man started singing in the song a person ( The person was looking like rani mukherjee looked when she was dressed up as a Punjabi munda ) started dancing.
'' He " Was dancing unbelievebly awesome. The gang was cheering and had a strong feeling that the ban will be removed.
When the other college was done dancing the judges had the results and ofcourse the other college lost!
The dance ban was removed and the gang was over happy. They were jumping and hugging Neha.
Vicky: We should thank that man who is also the reason why the ban is removed.
They all went too '' him'' and thanked him.
Suddenly Swayam noticed that it wasn't a man, it was Taani! Dressed as a Punjabi munda.
Swayam: Taani!!!!???
Everybody was shocked and looked at her, Swayam hugged her and was very proud.
Vicky: Wow Taani! You are a awesome dancer, Really!
Neha: Neha also think so!
Swayam: Tumne bataya kyon nahi ke tum itni acchi dancer... wow
Taani: Woh bhai...
Nil: Anyways Taani thanks alot!
Rey was very happy and also shocked, her dancing was unreal, unbelivebly good!
She looked at him and she was still mad at him.

The next day.
The college was empty, Taani was the first to be there. She went to the rehearsal hall and looked around. She went and changed her clothes into dance clothes and went back to the rehaersal hal. She started the music ( Bairi piya - Devdas ) She started dancing.
Rey was the second one in college when he was walking lost in Taanis thoughts she heard the music coming from the rehaersal hall. He went there and saw Taani dancing he stood there and lokoked at her. Suddenly she saw im standing there. She stopped dancing and shuted the music.
Taani: Uhm... I was just... Sorry, I should just go... When she was about to leave Rey said wait!
Rey: Taani... Uhm sorry, i mean i didn't mean what i said yesterday
She turned to face him and said
Taani: I think you did Reyaansh
Then she left
Rey: Taani please...

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Here's part 2.
Enjoy Big smile

Part 2:
At Taayam:
Taayam is having dinner and Taani is lost in her thoughts.
Swayam: Taani?...
No answer from Taani. He waves his hand infront of her fae.
Swayam: Taani...
Taani: Haan... Bhai.
Swayam: Are you fine? You look a bit lost? 
Taani: Yeah, I'm fine... There's just so much work to do so... I'm just tired.
Swayam: Oh Okay. But i was saying that Rey is coming.
Taani: Here?
Swayam: Haan... Kyon?
Taani: Aaj?
Swayam: Haan Taani, Aaj, Abhi.
Taani got lost in her thoughts again. 
Taani ( Talking to herself ) : Oh no, I rejected his apology and then I ignored him all day. And now he's comin here.
Swayam looked at her while she was mumbling about something.
Swayam: Taani...!
Taani: Haan...
Swayam: Do one thing, go and rest you're really tired.
Taani: Yeah you're right. 
She sttod up and was on her way to her room but before she could reach there the door bell rang.
Taani ( to herself ) : Damn, did you have to come now?
Swayam calling from the kitchen.
Swayam: Taani!! Will you get that please.
Taani: Yes Bhai!
She went and opened the door and... it was Sharon standing there.
Sharon: Hi Taani, Woh Rey will be here in some time he went to get some snacks.
Taani: Oh well come in.
Sharon went into the kitchen and Taani went to her room but before she could reach her room the bell rang again.
She opened the door and there Rey was standing. They looked at each other. Then suddenly Rey just barged in without asking permission if he could come in.
Taani was to tired to fight with him so she just went in o her room and changed her clothes.
She sat on her bed and suddenly it started to rain. She went to her balcony and stood ( inside ) there watching the rain pour down. Then she went to stand outside and let the rain pour on her face. She closed her eyes and she thought of every single moment she spent with Rey but that one moment when he rejected her was flashing in her mind and that's when she opened her eyes. 
She got tears in her eyes. Suddenly she felt someones hand on her shoulder. It was Sharon. She had two cups of coffee in her hands.
Sharon: Coffee?
Taani: Thanks.
Sharon: Are you fine Taani. Swayam told me that you're acting weird.
Taani: I'm fine, there's just a lot going on right now.
Sharon: Is it about Rey?
Taani got shocked.
Taani: Rey?
Sharon: Haan, I mean about what he said the other day. You know that he didn't mean it he was just really scared.
Taani looked outside and said.
Taani: I don't know bhabhi, It felt like he meant every single word of it.
...
Next Day ( At Tayam ) : 
Taani woke up at 7 a.m, she went and took a shower and then she walked to the kitchen. Swayam was still not awake so she made coffee for the both of them and went to his room. She knocked at his door but no answer so she opened the door and she saw him laying on the bed still sleeping she went and placed the coffee on his bedside table.
Taani: Bhai, wake up. 
He didn't answer, she shook him with her hand but still no answer.
She took the blanket off of him and suddenly she screamed...
It wasn't Swayam who was laying in the bed. It was Rey.
Her scream woke him up and then he tried to stop her screaming.
Rey: Taani... Ssshhh...ssshhh
Then she stopped screaming and then Swayam came running out from the bathroom.
Swayam: Kya hua?
Taani: What are you doing here. She said looking at Rey.
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Edited by lovvedramaaa - 10 March 2013 at 6:36am

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anyways its awesomeClapClapClap update soon


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Omg. That was great. Make it a ss please.

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 1:58am | IP Logged
This was amazing wow. Taani is not only a superb dancer but she also help in removing the dance ban. But Rey always hurt her Confused hope she dont forgive him easily. Plz continue soon Im loving this OS

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 2:10am | IP Logged
Amazing 
Absolutely love it 
I really want an intense apology from Rey to Taani 
Taani lets him get away with too much 

and loved the suprise package of 
Taani being the dancer in a males get up 
very different 
Well done 

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Wow...amazing os...taani is dancer...plz update next soon...cant wait for the next part...

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 2:29am | IP Logged
OMG tht was great 
i luv d way taani say: I think you did Reyaansh 
ooo reyaansh
 i like attitude of taani nice star 
i am luving it n say PM me nxt prt plzzz


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Its really amazing plzz do continue with the next part...

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