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OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
res for sur
unres!!

Himanii...yar...
Shit man...kya likh diya tune!! Cry
Itna senti kr diya...phewshhh..! Ouch
I dun noe wat to write...no doubt i loved it..and you know dost..your writing have this thing..it has emotions..you write it with all your feelings and heart...that it directly touches our soul! Heart
Okay now i vil not make it more senti...! Cool
Dude you wrote it awesomelyyy!!! Star
Love you for this! Hug
Aks was really an awsum character..and two updates mei hi itna acha likhna usske baare mei ki humei bhi feel aa jaaye...is really tough!! Clap
Commendable Job!! Thumbs Up



Edited by OceanicRockStar - 29 November 2012 at 9:33am

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res for nish

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Hey my RockstarHug

That was...ummm...that was...ummm...welll...m not able to find words right now...

Well...coming to the update...its the last part of this Amazing OS...I guess its my favorite from all your works...when we write about swaron...we write about 2 characters already established & known to the readers...but creating a new character...and making the reader fall in love with that one is true talent...m proud of u ...really...u r amazing...

I loved everything in this update...swayam-aks convo...swaron confession...aks's sad demise...the conclusion ...everything...

But these are few of my fav lines...


Swayum hugs her tightly…he was really blessed to have a friend like her in his life…for Akanksha it's his happiness which always comes first….beside her own….she loves him…but don't even thought to tell him….she kept her love deep inside her heart…with the cover of friendship….she is expert in hiding tear behind her cute smile…the pain of losing love of life is well known to her…


her pain..her love..her friendship...heart wrenching...beautifully penned by you...

Loved Swaron confession...it was beautiful...

Sharon broke the kiss…and said against his lips "Akanksha is right…your love made me complete…my life gonna be full of joy and happiness…coz I have you in my life….the perfect one…she looked up above  sky and continued…thank you god for bringing him in my life…and thanks to Akanksha as well…

Her accident part was painful...but beautifully written by you...amazing...

"Sa…Sam….rehne de…i…i…think…its  ...Over…its…tim…time…to say good bye….he tightly hugs her….no …no…no good bye…you are my only friend…MY BEST FRIEND …you are not going anywhere…you will be all right Aks…

I had tears when i read this part...it was ...i dont hv any words...m speechless...

Swayum although she unites us…but saw…deep, pure, unconditional love for you in her eyes…. she really love u swayam...may be more than me...the love which remain unsaid…incomplete….swayum tum hamesha kehte ho…pyar ke liye dost banna bohat jaruri hai….me tumhari dost to ban gayi….par tumhari BEST FRIEND nai ban paayi…SHE WAS YOUR BEST FRIEND……WILL BE…..ALWAYS…..

Awww...i loved the friendship...the unconditional love...pure love...it was AMAZING...u r amazing swthrt...


You have to resume writing...take a break..no prob...but you have to write again...


luv u ...

Ur Di





Edited by deep_Tanha - 26 November 2012 at 1:53pm

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
a very very emotional ending

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
was this by any chance inspired by KKHH. coz mostly while reading i could imagine rahul tina and anjali. and it felt as if anjali died in this os and aarghh i am getting all confused. frankly i didnt read it as swaron os coz i was so much engrossed in remembering KKHH hai and u have given that movie a total different perspective. making tina/sharon the herion and KIlling akaksha/anjali it really made me sad when i thought of anjali dying rather then akaksha. as far as ur writing skill are concerned i am a great fan of it u express beautifully and give life to ur characters
great job just that i have watched KKHH hai a million times so it instantly reminded me of it 
and the last line was just kkhh 
other then that i would say it is fabulously written 

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
HEART TOUCHNG . . .

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
ok now this one's end was heart wrenching...yes i agree i wanted swayam and sharon to be together but still never wanted AKS to die...she was a true friend and even a true lover i would say...

first time in a swaron os, i m getting impressed by some other character...great work...with a sad yet meaningful note at the end

DOSTI KARNA ASAAN…..

NIBHANA BOHAT MUSHKIL...

DOST KHONA ASAAN…..

DOSTI BHUL JAANA BOHAT MUSHKIL… 

and yes it did remind me also of KKHH...but still with a new perspective though...Smile

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
It was soo emotional.No one can take best friend place in life.Beautifully penned update
loved it

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