awesome fairy...u deserve a standing ovationπ π...u keep getting better and better..this os has everything..love, passion...darkness..the temptation of the forbidden fruit...and u've depicted all this so beautifully...so much in so less words..yet so deep and beautifulβοΈ
i just loveddd abhay hereπ³...he has every trace of that dark beast he is, the vampire that is his nature...yet somewhere deep deep down, he has a conscience, and an inner goodness...which ultimately stops him from harming piya...π
and piya..the innocent firefly lured by the flame...yet she can't help fall in love with abhay...the blue-eyed mysterious boy she had met only twice...already her heart is his to keep..π³
their meetings were so well-written and so impactful.πloved the encounters...and the last part...where piya is already turning to abhay for comfort..even in those two short meetings, he has become her world...and his decision...to leave her..knowing they can never be...knowing that for her sake he will have to stay away from her..that shows already the depth of love that is alraedy forming between them...βοΈ
awesome job..would love a second part to thisπ
Edited by ..tora.tangled. - 11 years ago