Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

virika os:karan u dhokebaaz

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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was time of diwali since karan entered the vadera mansion. swamini had been giving more attention to kaan and had been neglecting viren.πŸ˜• this had made viren feel bad from heart.
but jeevika his lady was with him supporting him in every aspect of life and viren promised jeevika that he would come out of it as soon as possible.

the next day:
everyone was busy in diwali preparations.jeevika was in the kichen making lunch for all. viren and viraat had gone to the market to buy crackers and manvi was in the lawn looking after the light decorations. karan enters the kitchen and sees jeevika making food.
j:are karan  aap? kuch chahiye tha aapko?
k:nai jeevika.vo actually sab kaam mein busy hain aur mein room mein akele baithe baithe bore ho raha to socha kitchen mein aakar ek cup cofee banake pee lun.
j:oh to aapko cofee peene hai.aap rukiye mein bana deti hun.
k:vaise i hope tumhe boora nailaga ho ki maine tumhe jeevika bulaya to.
j:no its ok.
k:vaise jeevika aaj khane mein anything special?
j:nahi kuch khas nai.dal chawal virenji ki favourite bhindi bua ji ke liye aloo gobi chachi ke liye chole virat ke liye lauki aur meethe mein gulab jamun..aur haan paneer ki sabzii bhi hai..dahi to hai hi aur saath mein salad.
k:huff...itnaa kuch.kaise yaad rakhti ho itnaa kuc tum akele?
j:ho jata hai .jab aap koi insaan ko dil se apna lete ho to unki pasand aapko yaad reh hi jaati hai.
aur issi ke sat ye lijiye aapki cofee bhi ready hai.
k:thnks.mein chaltaa hun.aur cofee ke liye pjir se shukriya.

jeevika was continuing with her work when viren and viraat enter.
j:to khaid liye aap dono ne patakhe?
vi:haan bahbhi aaj shaam ko to majja hi maja he. vaise manvi kahan hai?
j:mannu..vo to lawn mein hai.light decorations dekh rahi hai.
vi:oh..mein jaakar dekhta hun kahin koi gadbad na kar baithe vo.
and virat goes..
v:aur jeevika, tum bas kaam hi kar rahi hogi itne der? kyun?
j:haan virenji khana bana rahi thi.khana ban gaya hai ab room mein jaakar kapde sametna hai.
v:ohh..to room mein jaana hai. mein bhi chaltaa hun.vaise bhi jabse aaya hun tumse theek se baat hi nai kar paya hun.
 and they both go to room..
jeevika enters first and viren entering closes the door and comes and holdes jeevika by waist from behind.
j:virenji,yeh aap kya kar rahe ho?
v:biwi ke saath romance.
jeevika blushes hearing this.viren puts jeevika's hair on one side and kisses her neck.jeevika is enjoying his touc.
viren lifts up jeevika and takes her to the bed.he drops her and kisses her forehead cheek neck and is going towards her lips when someone knocks on the door.
v:kaun hai?
k:mein karan.
v:haan karan k minute abhi aaya.
viren reluctantly gets up and opens the door.
k:sorry tum dono ko disturb karne ke liye par viren mujhe tumhara laptop chahiye tha.mera kaam nai kar raha and mujhe ek important mail send karna hai to..
v:haan zaroor ye lo karan.
karan takes the laptop and goes away.
v:haan to hum kahan the?
j:kahin nai.lunch ka tym ho gaya hai aur humein chalna chaiye.
v:par jeevika...
j:virenji chaliye...
in karan"s room..
karan is on the phone talking to mr.thackral viren's opponent.
k:haan ji thackral sahab mujhe datas mil gaye hain.ab yeh case aapke favour mein hoga.viren vadera ye case harega aur apni zindagi ki baazi bhi.
aap nischint ho jaiye.

precap:who is this thackral?viren will lose life why?who is karan?what does he want?


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