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KR SS: The Veiled Temptations (Updated Ch5 Pg44) (Page 8)

SuckerPunch. IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 27976

Posted: 20 November 2012 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
vish it was seriously osm the best os i ever read such a osm os !
A big thanks for writing tis 
love u 4 dis
abi via cell hu so cant give a long comment tu to meri bhavanaye samajhtha hai na yes last ka part maft tha unlocked a nw prog haha infact poora os fab tha muah hugs

Le light aa gayi to isse editing !
 tuje live review diya mene iska ! ab aur kya bolu ! and ya thanks tere se baat karke mera  mood theek hua baby ! :* love you muah muah muah

Edited by upasna_mishti - 17 January 2013 at 12:04am


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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 4:04am | IP Logged
awesome os.
thnx forpm
sweetangelpayal IF-Dazzler

Joined: 28 April 2009
Posts: 2745

Posted: 21 November 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged

i lykkk


i loveee

dis was really awesome..

kriyaansh aise geeks... Embarrassed

i was imagining dem in specs as dats d way geeks r portrayed, n dude dey looked so freakin smart...dey r smart...

i lykd how dey confessed dey lykd each other.. start se...Embarrassed

Edited by sweetangelpayal - 28 November 2012 at 11:03am
Pumpkinn IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5817

Posted: 21 November 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Amazing os ...
Loved it ...
Do write more ...
a_happy_2000 Senior Member

Joined: 02 February 2012
Posts: 402

Posted: 21 November 2012 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
Vaishu .. 
First of all , I am sorry .. I guess am almost the last persons to read this beautiful and fabulous OS ...
But .. I knew it would be the bestest ...
When you had mentioned it to me .. I just couldn't wait to read it 

Ok .. now for the OS ..
I just LOVED IT  ...
It was just too good .. 
KR would be the cutest couple fighting over anything and everything ...
Love them .. .

I could seriously imagine everything so well ...

And the end ..
WOW ...
I seriously loved it when Rey said he had unlocked a program and was exploring it ...
I can see it infront of my eyes .. he saying that on the phone .. and Kria rolling her eyes ..
Ha Ha Ha

Really very well written and yes .. please keep writing more and more ...
I know that little head of yours is full of budding ideas .. 
Do pen them down 

Pihu.k11 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 09 August 2012
Posts: 7681

Posted: 22 November 2012 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Hah.. Finally I read it n commentin on it nw..

I jus loved it vaishali.. KR n no fights.. So not possible..
I loved thr verbal fight..was quiet entertainin,u knw Tongue
Poor boss.. None of dem was payin heed to his existence.. Obv kriyaansh h.. Jb ldte h toh aas paas kaha dkhte h.. Ohki.. Wht I loved d most is d reason they both gave behind d initials of thr fights n thts they both wer attractd towards each othr so jus to overcome it they use to fight.. D3 mei b tai tha na kriya ki taraf se.. :) Mumma.. I miss dem Cry Cry

N thn strtd thr journey.. Dat rain sequence n d post convo was beautifully written..
I cud visualise evryrhn..!

Loved it :)
--RAINA-- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 23 April 2012
Posts: 4359

Posted: 22 November 2012 at 10:53am | IP Logged
awsome os...
Jst luvd it..
Thankx 4 d pm
_SenbonZakura_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 28979

Posted: 23 November 2012 at 3:54am | IP Logged
I never thought reading about Tom and Jerry would be this fun! 

Absolutely marvelous Vaish!  Dint know why I took so long! 

But whatever, atleast I made it here! 

The second part was even more amazing! And insanely hot!! Job nicely done there! 

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