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Pumpkinn IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Awesome update ...
Very hot indeed ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for next ...
Update soon ...
Thnx for pm ...
..-Chabhilal-.. Goldie
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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Great update
Very hot
Thnx 4 da pm
Crazy4AshVik IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
Loved it to the core!!Wink
CHOCOLATEKRIYA Goldie
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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
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CHOCOLATEKRIYA Goldie
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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
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crazysky IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
its really awesome
just loved it
u write one of the master piece i must say
heavenly awesome
pallavi.14 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 1:40am | IP Logged
sorry this time i read it super late...
stuck up wid work..

HOT HOT to HOT to handle...
need AIIRRR!!!!!... WATER!!!!!!...

tu aise dhansu...bomb type idea kaha se laati hai ???
airport..he kissed her in public... u serious..this Rey is highly mischievous...
but kriya and her big mouth... this is why it is said think before u speak..and damage hogaya hai toh control bhi karo...

and dude the way she handled him... made me go feeble in my knees...
i loved his dialogues for hinting her to take up same room instead of two separate


her black dress... i want dat one to...but problem where am i gonna wear it???... poor rey how hard for him to control his demons...who are urging to burst out any moment...
but he got his chance...

her way of asking apologies... if i wud have been in place of rey..staircase par hi kaam khtam kardiya hota...

but seriously he thought of making her jealous... janta nahi hai kya raat ko kya hua tha...
but again... his eye balls get a treat of watching..Super super sexy kriya...

loved it..loved your ending...
and more den dat loved their dialogues...

hayye.. still in dreamland..pinch me someone plzz...

thanks for pm...




Edited by pallavi.14 - 06 December 2012 at 8:59am

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