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KR SS: The Veiled Temptations (Updated Ch5 Pg44)

-Vaish- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 12:12am | IP Logged


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I never knew Tom n Jerry cud b like this... lol..

but seriously... I loved this TJ KriYaansh...

attraction chupane k liye... playing pranks on the other ..

n vice versa...

hadh hai.. inke jhagde ka majaa toh pura office loot ta hai.. n on top of that bechara Boss sar pakad kar baitha hai...

office blog n ek dusre ke mailing accounts bhi nhi chode in logone...

Boss pareshaan... KR ki duniyaa aabaad.. (I heard this kinda dialogue sumwhere)

waah kya boos hai.. what an idea Bossji...

bandh kar do room mein...

finally spitted out the reason.. Attraction..

haye that barsaat romance... maine kya kya expect kiya tha.. but u... tune kuch nhi karaya...

I know tu kuch karati bhi nhi..

mujhe toh laga tha bahut badaa hoga but tune toh cut short kar diya...

shortcut mar rahi hai.. huh

anyways mujhe toh bada majaa aaya OS padh kar..

I loved it..n aise aur likhna.. I'll enjoy reading them...

waise concept bada sahi tha...

dil khush kar ditta... (phir dialogue copying)

a lots of puppies n jhappies for this...

Edited by -shenz- - 18 November 2012 at 4:29am

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Deetha. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 12:30am | IP Logged


okay first as usual i like the start...

haha can imagine she storming into the cabin and

rey  sitting peacefully in his chir making her fume more LOL

i thought u would continue the same...

but i didnt expect rey to shout back ...

but i liked their tom and jerry fight too.. donon itne faaltu ke kaam kyun karte hai???

cartoons...spamming systems...ROFL kaha se socha re???

lolz...again.,...he spammed her inbox??

he for sure is a cassinova LOL

hahahahaha still laughing at the cat fightLOL

and that just a second...uske baad kriyaansh ki expression when they realise its their boss ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

ummm 3 hrs locked??????? achi idea hai...

waise i liked the talk between them ...

mostly that im attracted to u wala lineEmbarrassed


and the next part is sensous u see...

its simple yet sensuous

and mostly i like rey's excuse a lot...

hahaha  LOL

hmmm...i siad na it is awesome...

its just awesome awesomeEmbarrassed

Edited by deetha - 20 November 2012 at 12:24am

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shaffy_arsha IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 12:31am | IP Logged

hayeee dat was Amazinggg!!!!!!!!!!! vaishu Big smile

full tym while reading i m smilling lyk an idoit...n sister was lyk "tu pagal ho gyi h kya" LOL

teko bola tha na mjhe ache wali feeling aa ri h is OS ke liye b jaise wo CONTRACT wale tym ki ayi ye smile usi ka ek reaction tha LOL

hahaha i love dere TOM-JERRY fight alot...n den wo ek dam attraction wali line bolna...hayeee Embarrassed Embarrassed

awwiiieee barsat romance lovly
rey kitna cute no hot n sexy Wink Embarrassed
n kria ki dress...haha mil gyi shaanti use hot si formal phenwa kr ROFL

i love da most last part wen chief ph was come n dere silly n awsome exuse...hehe i love rey excuse alot
kya dhundh kr likha h rey mjhe computers pasand ni waise LOL

n i m also ready for nxt round of ur update weather it is of FF or another OS...bbuhaaa ROFL ROFL

loved it alot vaishu
fadu tha...mast Big smile

Edited by shaffy_arsha - 18 November 2012 at 1:14am

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--Shukti-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 1:06am | IP Logged
OMG!!! wt an
OS!!! amazing.. fabulous..
U rocked it...
luvd their Tom-Jerry fights a lot... Big smile
n Romance in d Rain!!! hayyeee...Embarrassed
bt last part was simply d Best.. especially their Convo wid d Chief
... "I unlocked a program which I had been trying for a long time and have decided to explore it." ROFLROFL Gosh! ye Rey bhi na...Embarrassed

Edited by shukti_19 - 18 November 2012 at 2:28am

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Madhu_ArSha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Omg di. . . . .
It was,
out of the world. . .
I jst lovd it. . . . .. . .
Ha ha ha,
tom and jerry fight. . .
Sach mai jinta yeh kriyaansh lad rahe the utna toh mai and mera bestie bhi nahi ladte. . . .
Last part was totaly hawtt. . . .
Bilkul fadu os tha. . . .
Lovd it. . . . . .

Edited by Madhukumari - 18 November 2012 at 1:45am

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
hmm coming to os wow wow ow actually it was fab 

rey and kria kitna jagad rahi hai dono aur 

nice idea chief you made them alone for three hours that had given them big cute and great turning for thier friendship

wow when they fighted i thought they are really how chief said like they are kg kids


Rey didn't speak and continued his doings.


Kria moaned as he clutched a piece of flesh strongly.

"Rey... Call me Rey."

He spoke gazing her intently.

"Rey... I think u shud check where ur hands are. I believe they r at wrong place."

"Are they?"

He moved his hand little above and moving it in front and in the process bring her more closer. Kria dug her nails in his back to refrain herself from losing out in the moment.

"Well... I don't think so. They are where they should be."

He pulled her more towards him.

"U got a problem. Strange... ur actions speak otherwise."

"R...Rey.. Don't do something u might regret."

"Who said I am gonna regret? I didn't."

With this he brought her more closer as their lips almost came in contact.

"Are u?"]

this part of their conversion wow i liked it no no i loved it 

yes at lastly it took my breath really an  amazing os 

i appreciate your work 

Edited by CHOCOLATEKRIYA - 18 November 2012 at 3:56am

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