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sweetcherry95

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
hey peeps ...i am posting part 1 of my ss...please bear with all the grammatical mistakes and typo errors

part one

Some village in india

A pregnant lady who a is demographer'she is in this village on population serve''she has completed her task and is ready to move back to her city'.she is the bus'.suddenly the bus came across the accidents'which caused severe damage to passenger'every one was dead except her'..she with great difficulty managed to come out of bus'..she walked for some distance and then fainted'..a women came to her rescue and escort to her place'.the lady was highly pregnant and due to her severe condition ''she delivered the baby

Woman: mubarak ho apko beti hui hai

Lady happinesss knew no bounds as her husband wish has come true.lady" swyam I am soo happy'finally God has listen to your wish and it's a baby girl"'..as she was in village she could not contact her husband'.lady made her daughter wear a necklace '..it was a heart shape pendant with both her and her husband picture

Due to her severe and weak condition she lost her consciousness and died at that moment'..her funeral was conducted and her astiyan was kept save with the woman'.she has asked the woman to take care of her daughter and soon her husband will be here to take her with him

The man was informed about the bus accident in which her wife was travelling'the person who called him said that it was dangerous accident and not even a single soul servive'.this new broke swayam into million pieces '..the fate has taken away his life and his dream'.he felt lifeless'his joy of life drained'he somehow managed to survive

2 years later

At present

A man is in deep slumber but he is restless''tears are breaming out continuously'.seems like he is calling someone'calling his wife'.his wife's soul appeared to calm him down

Wife ; sshhh!! Swayam calm down 'I am here by your side

Swayam felt a soothing sense of touch and he wokeup and to his utter disbelieve his wife was beside her'.caressing is forhead softly calming him down

Upon seeing her '.he hold her hand tightly,,,,as to never let go

Swayam: I lost you,I lost my baby just because of me''it was my mistake,,,,kash main tumhe usdin jane se rok leta 'to ajj meri family complete hoti (tears flowing)

Sharon : no its not your mistake'. I was the one stubborn

Swayam: I am solely responsible for it

Sharon: (wipes his tears) you're not respnsible'it was our destiny'..it was destined to be this way'.. your baby'our sign of love is still alive'.she is waiting for you'..your daughter is waiting for you

Swayam: my daughter????

Sharon: yes your daughter

Swayam: where is she ???

Sharon: she is in he village I last visited

Swayam: who wahan akeli hai kyun??

Sharon:she with the lady jis ke ghar maine apni akhri saansein li thi

Swayam: kya who muje janti hai??

Sharon: ab tak toh usey jaaan lena chahye

Swayam: who kese?/

Sharon: I made her wear locket you gifted me with our picture on adjacent sides

Swayam: main usey kese dhundun ga'kya tum mujhe btao gi????

Sharon: main bs tumher clue de sakti hun'.baki tumhe usey khud dhundna hoga

Swayam: how did death occurred to you

Sharon: main tumhe baad main btaoungi'phle tumhe khud dhundna hai'apna farzz pura karna hai''you must sleep now

Swayam: nae I wont sleep'.jaise hi main sounga u will leave

Sharon: nae, main nae jaoungi'.i will be here just beside you

He laid down again '.holding her hand'.making sure she is beside her

hit like tab and comment

do tell me whether i should continue it or not

waiting for your views

for pm buddy me

regards

sweetcherry



Edited by sweetcherry95 - 06 January 2013 at 11:16am

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
res for sadiya
EDITED

Finally ur new ss
Interesting concept,sharon died...:( It was really heartbreaking.Swayam dream was really good finally he now knows that his baby is still alive...:D 
N yeah I m the first one to comment lol
Waiting for next part


Edited by sweetcherry95 - 23 November 2012 at 6:13am

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
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yeyy! ure back with another bang on SS
Awww Sharon diedCry
bt she delieved a baby girlBig smile
i hope swayam finds his junior princess soon
seems like ure gonna give us a very sad story!
bt bahut choty update tha
next time bada
and update it asap


Edited by swaron09 - 24 November 2012 at 11:38am

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Sharon deadShockedErmmCry Whatever it is you have done a beautiful job...

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
CryCryCrysharon no more
anyways nice start continue soon


Edited by kanchan06 - 17 November 2012 at 11:13pm

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 12:23am | IP Logged
sayaa
this truly reminds me of it
and u killed sharon in the first part itself
but is she sharon that i am still not sure
is she??
update sooon
and pm me

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Its Wonderful:-):-) plz pm me next time dear..., loved it:-):-):-):-)

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 2:33am | IP Logged
WOW...
amazing concept dear...
sad but interesting concept..touching...
waiting for the next part..eagerly ...Smile

Edited by deep_Tanha - 18 November 2012 at 3:01am

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