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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Wonderful part! Sheetal got put in her place! Yayy!

And Arnav's dimaag has started working Wink!


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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
Just noticed the name! Very Apt!! 

I loved it! I love how Arnav is trying to redeem himself. I love how Khushi stands up for Arnav in front of the family, and I love how after figuring out ShitAll's game, Arnav shares his doubts with Khushi, instead, of doing it on his own! At least this way Khushi knows what Arnav is upto, and won't be hurt. Oh, and I also loved how Khushi show's her right on Arnav by telling him to change back to ASR for the world. That brought smile on my face!!

And about your note, I don't think anybody will have any problems regarding the length. I even wanted it to be little longer. I don't know why you feel this wasn't a good part because it really was! I guess you had something in mind and it didn't come out that way, and that's why you feel this way! But here's the good part! Because we don't know what you had originally planned, we are totally satisfied with this part! So no worries! :) Now, please update the next part soon! I hope it's later in the day! 

p.s I am not a grammar/spelling Nazi, but I couldn't help but notice a spelling error both of the times you wrote, "peak on her lips ' The correct spelling is "peck" not peak. The word peak means the highest point of something. The only reason why i noticed that was because i had to read it twice to understand that you meant peck. Sorry, if you feel offended. That was not my intention.

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
beautiful update
loved it

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Yay, no more misunderstandings! Can't wait for the last part!

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
tht is soo nice love it

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
Nice update

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Nice part:)

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