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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:11am | IP Logged
hello i am here with my first OS..hope u all like it...pehla hain isliya koi bhi galti ho toh maaf kar dena...plzz tell me if i go wrong at any point except the sorry pehle hi..kyun bol rahi ho voh parne ke baad hi pata chale here it starts..there would maximum be 2 parts...

                                                                    PART 1
in mumbai's city hospital..

a girl is lying on the hospital bed in tears..a lady standing besides her holding her hand..

girl - mom ab kuch bura mere sath hi kyu??

g's mom - kriya aisa kuch nahi hain..everything will be alright..tumhe kuch nahi hoga..i promise..

kriya - aapke bolne se kya hota hain..aab toh doctor ne bhi bol diya ki mere pas zayada waqt nahi bacha...

tears were continuosly flowing from her eyes..

smriti - kuch nahi hoga tumhe...

smriti couldn't control more and she breaks down in tears. after a lot of silence kriya spoke up..

kria - mom aap ek favor karonge..

smriti - anything for u..

kriya- aap rey , swayam aur baki sab ko bola sakte ho kya , mujhe unse akhri baar milna hain..

smriti - theke mein unhe bola dongi

kriya - par unhe yeh nahi pata chalna chaiye ki cancer hain..and i don't hav much tym..

smriti - bt voh tumhare frnds hain..and they have a right to know it..

kria - mom mein unhe pehle se hii bahut hurt kar chuki hun ab aur udas nahi karna chahti...

smriti - beta mein unhe nahi bolongi par unhe ek na ek din toh pata chalna hi hain na...

smriti goes and calls swayam..

in st.louis clg..
everyone is in the rehearsal hall..

swayam picks up his phone..

sway - hello..who's this??

smriti - swayam..mein kriya ki mom ho..

sway - aunty aap..aunty kria kaha hain aur kaisi hain??

by hearing kria's name everyone is shocked...esspecially rey..
tears were forming in his eyes..sharon goes and puts her hand on his shoulder...

smriti - actually beta kria abhi city hospital mein admit hain..

swayam screams - HOSPITAL!! par kyu??

everyone gets even more tensed..

swayam - hospital..kya hua kria ko?? is she fyn??

smriti looks at kria and says - kuch nahi..she just fainted cause of weakness isliye..

tears started falling from smriti's eyes..she wiped it quickly...

swayam - ok aunty..i will come..

smriti - au baki sab..

swayam - don't know..

he cuts the call..

in the hospital..

kria - mom sab aa rahe hain kya??

smriti - swayam toh aa raha hain baki sab ka pata nahi..

she sits beside kria..

in st.louis...

vishakha- Dude..kriya ki mom ka phone...n y kria in hospital?? is she fyn??

neha - neha worrying very much..tall na swayam wht aunt saying..

swayam - nthing guys she s calling us to meet kria..voh weakness ke vjhe se faint ho gayi thi isliye hospital mein admin kiya guys i am going are u all coming..

neha - neha toh coming...

vishakha - me too..

nicky - hum bhi..

simmi and rinni - ya we are also in..

sharon - i am coming..

swayam - aur rey tu..

sharon holds reys hand and says - yeh bhi chalenga..

swayam smiles..

within half an hour they were there at the hospital and were heading towards kriya's room..

smriti was sitting outside..

swayam - aunty..aap bahar kyu ho..

smriti - voh doctors kriya ka test kar rahe hain isliye..

doctor comes out..and gives smriti a list of medicines tht she has to buy..

smriti - tum log andar jao mein medicines leke ati hun..

everyone went in except rey..he was standing outside..

the stand around kriya..

kriya slowly opened her eyes and saw the whole gang there..she smiled..

swayam - kria!! jhalli kahi ki..chod ke kyu gayi..apne best friend ko..tere bina sharon ko patana pada...

kriya -  chod ke gayi thi , aab aa gayi na vapas apne best friend ko support karne so forget it..

she was sounding really low..

sharon - hain swayam..just forget it..

swayam - and kriya u are sounding soo low...dieting kar rahi thi kya..kuch khati hi nahi hogi isliye itni weak ho eat something..

he goes and started feeding her from his hands..there sharon was feeling really jealous..
kria was finding one person..

swayam - bahar hain..
kria smiles - u know me soo well..

sharon goes , opens the door and pulls him in..
rey looks at kriya with a lot of questions in his eyes..
soon there famous LLHH starts..
bt rey looks away..

kriya - itne naaraz ho mujhse..i am sorry na..apni baatcutter ko maaf nahi karonge..last chance..plzz i am sorry agge se nahi ki kasam..

Cry                                           Cry                                       Cry

bas neind aa rahi hain..aur mujhe abhi bhagna bhi tata..
ab mujhe bhii lambe comments chaiya tabhi mein continue karongi..
chote comments se kuch nahi honga aur pir update bhi nahi milenga..
gud nite frnds..

Edited by arsha.kriyaansh - 06 January 2013 at 4:36am

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:17am | IP Logged

Me 1st yay

I'm speechless 

Kriya ko hua hai Cry

Hope everything alright 

I hope Rey aur baaki sab ko sach pata chale 

Thanks for pm

Waiting for the next part

Update soon

Itna lamba comment chale ga ya nahi 

Edited by Himaniahir - 17 November 2012 at 10:30am

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged


o god...

ye kya kiya...

kriya ko cancer...

thats really sad...

n vo kisi ko batana bhi nahi chahti...

kriyam's bonding is really sweet...

n ye kya itta chota sa update...

plz update soon...

waiting 4 the next part age kya hota h?????

thnx 4 the pm...

Edited by anjee_007 - 17 November 2012 at 11:10am

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:21am | IP Logged
awesome os yar...
rula diya bt seriously loved itCry...
plz update soon...
thnx for pm...

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
thank u save me mehak
cancer oooh mamta serious ho gaya  plz mehak sv kria plzzz
 awosm part ClapClapClap
waiting next updateWink

Edited by nature2 - 17 November 2012 at 10:45am

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged

but ye kya Kriya ko cancer..

no this is not done...

nd jab maza aane laga tabhi khatam kr diya

not fair..

jldi update kr

i wanna read more..

so jldi

it was fab... Embarrassed

Edited by heavenly_angel - 18 November 2012 at 2:31am

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:33am | IP Logged
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Edited by nature2 - 17 November 2012 at 10:33am


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