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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ttrocks

Wow Aazeen... finally I am done with reading all your chapters till date... Wow!!! U manged to read all of them!!! Seriously!!!! U must b a very fast reader then...ClapClapClap Superb journey it has been and dear I am feeling really so happy and proud that you didn't disappoint the reader in me even for a second...U proved the title that I gave you: CPBD... Clap  Awww... Thanx a ton 4 that... Its an achievement, if I did not disappoint u...Big smile

Writing to you for all the chapters seems a huge task to me, but, will write back to you as and when possible...  Nahin... main samajh rahi hoon... Its a huge task... Even, I was abt to ask u to just keep reading... Comment it 4 the last one...Embarrassed

About the latest chapter, in brief: It was very very beautifully written. Loved it... Heart I could understand your apprehensions but you were just perfect everywhere in that chapter. Oh Thank u... I had really missed u there... U know na, how crazy I go with these things...Detailed comments in PM whenever possible. Big smile No problem... As per ur convenience... Aap ne padh liya... Mera likhna safal ho gaya...Embarrassed

Soul-sis ka kissa: After reading the ultimate union part, I literally slapped my forehead... Telling you why: The song "O Saiyyan" from movie: AgniPath that you chose here, I had thought of putting it for AshNi of ur FF's SR since chapter-2 of your FF. Remember, I had told you about certain words from Ashu then?? Since that day, I had decided to dedicate this song to Ashu from Nidhi when they finally unite in ur FF. I just love this song... Music is mindblowing!! It's a beautiful and soulful song although in male-voice but from totally a female point of view and I had found it apt for AshNi of JHBH... Didn't tell you about this song before coz wanted to give you a surprise... But, the dumbo me... D'ohSurprise ke chakkar mein I forgot that you are my soul-sister here and we would think on the same line... 

rolling laughter emoticon
hehehahaha... Kya surprise tha...!!!  Humne aapko surprise kar diya... Arrey... I had heard this song many updates before this... N was absolutely sure, to put this one only... By God ki kasam... Itna ittefaaq mera kisi ke saath nahi hua... No doubt we r soul-sisters...!!! Agli baar jab forum members awards ho na, ek catagory Soul sisters ki honi chahiye... Apan dono hi jeetenge...LOLLOLLOL
Once again... Clap It was a beautiful saga... Thank u... N oh my!!! Saga...!!!! thats a huge compliment di...AshNi are always adorable but you considered DV, MC and long-lost love found again etc. complicated things in your first FF itself and did full justice to them all... Great job sis!! Thumbs Up Jahapnah tussi great ho...         kabool karo... Big smile...Uffo!!!! Aap na taareef bhi exagerated wali karti ho... Itni tareef ki haqdaar nahi hoon...Embarrassed... Lekin aapka emoti galat taraf jhuk raha hai... Movie mein wo aisa nahi karte...
roflmao emoticon
Thank u loads di 4 the review... I love u loads...air kiss emoticon

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shreyalvashni

great chap aazeen Embarrassed
Thanx Shreya... Big smile
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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aazeen02

Originally posted by ttrocks

Wow Aazeen... finally I am done with reading all your chapters till date... Wow!!! U manged to read all of them!!! Seriously!!!! U must b a very fast reader then...ClapClapClap Superb journey it has been and dear I am feeling really so happy and proud that you didn't disappoint the reader in me even for a second...U proved the title that I gave you: CPBD... Clap  Awww... Thanx a ton 4 that... Its an achievement, if I did not disappoint u...Big smile

Writing to you for all the chapters seems a huge task to me, but, will write back to you as and when possible...  Nahin... main samajh rahi hoon... Its a huge task... Even, I was abt to ask u to just keep reading... Comment it 4 the last one...Embarrassed

About the latest chapter, in brief: It was very very beautifully written. Loved it... Heart I could understand your apprehensions but you were just perfect everywhere in that chapter. Oh Thank u... I had really missed u there... U know na, how crazy I go with these things...Detailed comments in PM whenever possible. Big smile No problem... As per ur convenience... Aap ne padh liya... Mera likhna safal ho gaya...Embarrassed

Soul-sis ka kissa: After reading the ultimate union part, I literally slapped my forehead... Telling you why: The song "O Saiyyan" from movie: AgniPath that you chose here, I had thought of putting it for AshNi of ur FF's SR since chapter-2 of your FF. Remember, I had told you about certain words from Ashu then?? Since that day, I had decided to dedicate this song to Ashu from Nidhi when they finally unite in ur FF. I just love this song... Music is mindblowing!! It's a beautiful and soulful song although in male-voice but from totally a female point of view and I had found it apt for AshNi of JHBH... Didn't tell you about this song before coz wanted to give you a surprise... But, the dumbo me... D'ohSurprise ke chakkar mein I forgot that you are my soul-sister here and we would think on the same line... 

rolling laughter emoticon
hehehahaha... Kya surprise tha...!!!  Humne aapko surprise kar diya... Arrey... I had heard this song many updates before this... N was absolutely sure, to put this one only... By God ki kasam... Itna ittefaaq mera kisi ke saath nahi hua... No doubt we r soul-sisters...!!! Agli baar jab forum members awards ho na, ek catagory Soul sisters ki honi chahiye... Apan dono hi jeetenge...LOLLOLLOL
Once again... Clap It was a beautiful saga... Thank u... N oh my!!! Saga...!!!! thats a huge compliment di...AshNi are always adorable but you considered DV, MC and long-lost love found again etc. complicated things in your first FF itself and did full justice to them all... Great job sis!! Thumbs Up Jahapnah tussi great ho...         kabool karo... Big smile...Uffo!!!! Aap na taareef bhi exagerated wali karti ho... Itni tareef ki haqdaar nahi hoon...Embarrassed... Lekin aapka emoti galat taraf jhuk raha hai... Movie mein wo aisa nahi karte...
roflmao emoticon
Thank u loads di 4 the review... I love u loads...air kiss emoticon


You are so sweet dear!!          

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Sorry yaar, kal se i am really busy with my assignments and all. Raat ko thak kar so gyi. Aaj bhi full day college. And abhi bhi bahut saare assignments bache hain karne ke liye, which needs to be submitted by tomorrow. And tension mat le, pehle tere review dungi, then manisha di ka and then sujatha di ka. Sorry for keeping u waiting, but cant help it, abhi bhi kaam kar rhi hun.

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Aazeen,have read it bt can't able to give proper review! Will b back with that tomorrow!

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aazeen02

 
Thats great to know, u liked my update... Thanks ArushiBig smile
U are most welcomeBig smile

Yess!!!! Nidhi is also suffering at the end... But, u know, I had wanted, that she should not surrender to make love with him in guilt, but out of willingness... I hope, I'm able to justify on tht point...

u did an amazing job with thatClap  . hem as a different couple and i'd say unique as wellThumbs Up 
the "thank you" dialogue of nidhi was amazingClap                 Chalo achha hai, u iked that ultimate dialogue... 
Big smile
Oh My God!!!! Thats such a huge compliment... Continuing writing,I'm a lil skeptical abt that... I have to get back with my studies yaar... Lets just see, when can that be possible...Embarrassed

Chalo koi baat nahi studies are more important...but would to read further from u wenever u writeSmileshall be eagerly waiting for the epilogueDay Dreaming Abhi tak likhna shuru nahi kiya hai... But everything is clear in my mind to write... Just need to pen it 
Shall be waiting...pls do that soonBig smile
 

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 11:03am | IP Logged
What an awesome ending to a beautiful and 
moving story Aazeen.
You have done an awesome job with this FF.
I know that the subject was a very tough one
but you have managed to do a wonderful job,
with all aspects of the story, Medical, emotional, physical, and mental.
Great attention to detail and facts.
Aazeen, I love your Ashutosh, and his love concern and patience for his Nidhi.
The way he waits for her to give the go ahead in all aspects of their relationship
was beautifully portrayed.
I loved your FF. and Am waiting eagerly for the epilog.
on a job well done, and also on the completion of your FF.

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 10:27am | IP Logged
UPDATING IN PARTS,DONT READ UNTIL I PM U

CHAPTER 12 REVIEW

Hi aazeen,

First of all accept my heartfelt apologies for being this late, u already know the reasons na.

"WOW" is the one word appreciation for this last chap. The progress and all was really smooth yet had the right pace. Must say that u should try your hand at writing in the life that lays ahead. Kudos to you for that superb delivery and performance of your FF. Will wait for the epilogue, and plz make it a long one.

Now moving onto the detailed part, here u go:

-First of all that ceremonial grahpravesh, complete with all rituals, the rice kalash and red colour water caught my eye. I have always loved these rituals, personally these are very dear to me. It was a simple sweet one which i enjoyed thoroughly. Thank you for putting that in.

-Nidhi won that ring finding competition. Aww, that was really a tender touch to the scenario, it must have actually boosted nidhi's confidence na, that she has an upper hand in this relationship along with a caring life partner. I mean it must have given her positivity ahead of her new life.

-Mallika staying back with nidhi to reassure her was very refreshing. As in be it in serial or in other FF's anji always used to stay back. I know that mallika here had a special purpose as her councillor, but her first purpose was to offer assurance as a friend to nidhi, a dear one to her. Must say that it was a small but beautiful addition to this scenario. It appealed to me a lot.

-Nidhi's anxiety and inhibitions owing to her previous experience was very natural. In this one line, could again relate to nidhi's pain and suffering. And i guess that's ur speciality as a writer, that u can bring out the required level of intensity in such a small scene.

-I have said this time and again that Ashu is a gem, and am saying that again. He is truly priceless. If nidhi is the fighter in here, Ashu is her knight in shining armour and much more. His understanding of nidhi got a whole new dimension. Kudos to u for shaping up his character so well.

-Ashu leaving the door unlocked and taking nidhi's permission to lock it up was an awesome scene. Ashu making nidhi comfortable enough was so Ashu like. Love him for such tiny miny things.

-Ashu arranging a deewan bed in the room was very perceptive on his part. Nidhi was great here. Wanting to share the bed with ashu and trusting him with her heart and soul was superb. She surely has come a long way from her past. Now only a few steps need to be taken, that would redefine their relationship in a whole new way. Her fears have taken a backseat, letting her enjoy her new found bliss with an equally blissful companion.

-The cushion scene between Ashni reiterates all the above said things. It was actually another thoughtful and impactful scene on ur part, especially the duvet sharing.

A MONTH LATER:

-Their life has progressed just like a normal couple. Really liked this development. No hint of any discomfort. Bingo perfomance in this aspect too. Vaise do u like bingo or lays??LOL

-Ashu's concern and worry for nidhi and her health was utterly butterly delicious. Nidhi's concern for her saasu ma was great. She also managed to calm ashu down. Single stroke pe do nishane laga diye aapne to, aur nishana zaraa bhi nhi chooka.

FEW DAYS LATER:

-Ashu throwing his arms and legs over Nidhi in his sleep was so so romantic. I was actually wary of nidhi's reaction here, but her response made me jump up and down with happiness. That positive response to the intimacy was super cool. Liked it that u developed their relation in bits and pieces in this aspect too. Their hugs transported me to my dreamy world. Ashu grabbing her tightly was just fab. Really liked that lovestruck part.

6 MONTHS LATER:

-Beautiful portrayal of the life ahead. Regular life of husband wife was so very cute, especially the morning scenes. I am glad that nidhi pulled through her bad phase.

-Nidhi's pain while narrating the pregnancy part was very evident. Ashu's assurance and soothing touch was very impactful.

-Finally the ultimate union was just FAB. Especially the unique touch u gave it, the rose and the aalta were just so different and refreshing. And you didnt miss out on the hotness quotient either.

-Ashu took care of the clothing to keep Nidhi at comfort was great thinking on his part.

The ultimate chapter was actually worth it. Ab samajh aaya why i didnt give a lil review, because i wanted to give a long one which u actually deserve.

Waiting for the epilogue.

Edited by deepali.rock - 25 January 2013 at 12:27am

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