Do u really feel, that getting that hard a kick, n then falling down the entire staircase(mind it,its not 2-3 stairs, but a long huge SC... ) would really save that lil-tiny life??Very emotional Aazeen.😭
U have touched on a very sensitive andConcerning aspect of humanity.Felt very bad and sad, and angry for Nidhi being hurt like that.I hope her Baby is ok. I am so gladAshutosh and the parents came in time.plz update. you have left off at a huge Cliffhanger.😃on the whole very well written👏
Thank u vidishaa di, m glad u liked it... par maine kora kagaz nahi dekhi... so no idea, what u r referring to...😕Originally posted by: Vidishaa
Nice topic...I always feel very strongly against domestic violence.
Will Nidhi lose her child...are Ashni going to be together like Salil Ankola and Renuka in Kora Kagaz?
thnx zara... really glad, u liked it...😃Originally posted by: ZedZee92
great concept di... really interesting...
plz continue...eager to read what happens next...
Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Do u really feel, that getting that hard a kick, n then falling down the entire staircase(mind it,its not 2-3 stairs, but a long huge SC... ) would really save that lil-tiny life??
and as for ashu n his parents coming there... agin there's a reason behind it... will disclose it in the next chap... will have to pen it down... I know, what to write, but need it to type it...Btw, thanx 4 the comment...
Uffo!!! God save that lady n her kid ... But, m writing no miracles here... I have something in mind to mould the story into... Will look melodramatic, I guess, but I wanted her to come out of her misery at first... U'll know in the next update, when she'll reach the hospital... Other than those kick, n earlier hurts, she has got other hurts due to that fall, n I have already written in the chap, she is malnutritioned n all, n to top all over it, she is real traumatised... Bas uspe ek baar mein saare musibaton ke pahad todne ke baad, u'll see the justification of the title...
I know a woman who fell two flights of stairs, being pushed by her husbands feet as he followed her down. (i know very filmy, but its real, and the truth) she was three months pregnant. Her baby is 5 years old today. Beautiful little boy. Totally healthy. She was on bed rest though for the rest of her pregnancy. Stranger things than this have been known to happen. world is full of miracles.Hubby is doing 10-20 on attempted murder.
thnx dear... Glad u liked it... Will try updating asap... Thanx again for ur comment...Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
nice part cont soon
Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Uffo!!! God save that lady n her kid ... But, m writing no miracles here... I have something in mind to mould the story into... Will look melodramatic, I guess, but I wanted her to come out of her misery at first... U'll know in the next update, when she'll reach the hospital... Other than those kick, n earlier hurts, she has got other hurts due to that fall, n I have already written in the chap, she is malnutritioned n all, n to top all over it, she is real traumatised... Bas uspe ek baar mein saare musibaton ke pahad todne ke baad, u'll see the justification of the title...
Oops! It seems, I have almost revealed my Part2... Heheha...
Look Anu Aunty... I dont have the better sense of understanding like u... M still in my growing times... Main cheezon ko itni gehraayi se nahin samjh sakti... Isliye, I always try to be on general terms as far as writing fics are concerned... I leave the sense onto the reader... Mujhe ye bhi nahi pata, k which months of pregnancy, tend to be more vulnerable to MC... So I left it as few months... I had no strength to sit n google... N then search... Please, give me the liberty of my unawareness... Think me as a kid, correct me, where I went wrong, but plz dont expect me to b absolutely correct... M really sorry if, in case, m going in some wrong direction... Do let me know...
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