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love4raya

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Beautiful... papa "hot" hai.Main "born-hot" hu..haila!!! Thud!! Loved it.. :)
Saniya the end could have been better even though ur showing dey dnt reunite..This looks incomplete.I thot ders more to cum.. Otherwise loved it.. :)

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
Mindblowing update.. Each and every word was just perfectly choose for the situation of raya.. Spcl mention to the priyas thought wala part, it was just terific.. U have almost expressed what priya is feeling... I hearty wish that if u could continue it...

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 8:00pm | IP Logged


Coming to the update ..
asusaul awesome one and the emotional bond between Raya is soo cute ..
And the confrotation and realization of priya's part was penned down so asthetically dear ...
I loved the update ..Try to continue this OS with another update clearing their MUs..
Plz plz pretty plzzz..

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
nice update
hope u wil continue

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Nice update. 

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 3:32am | IP Logged
it ws awsome dear but plz continue soon n clear all the MU.. plz...

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Nice part, but u could have continued, it was going good,I know RaYa has soo much MUs but still it could be a halt ending, I insist plz continue

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 6:08am | IP Logged
Ok...sorry! sorry!  Ouch I will write the next part as you all (me too)  want to see happy ending.
When I was trying  to understand their feelings( their  thought part )  after meeting in these circumstances after 5 years I was worried whether you guys will like that part  or not, the justification of their behaviour.  The most difficult part to write...Shocked  made me nervous.For me it was it was like studying human nervous system or solving a difficult math calculation. Bheja-fry ho gaya.Unhappy Cry   Thanks to CVs...RaYa ko iss situation mein daal diya hain.
I wrote something emotional for the 1st time & was not confident about it so ended the OS here. Embarrassed I thought who will read it if it's boring.Ouch
But after reading your comments, I am feeling like writing the next update.Tongue
Thank you...Thank you...Thank you... each & everyone of you for encouraging me to write.Hug
         I am so happy that many of you liked the thought part...:) Love you all.Heart
 
              


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