Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11) - Page 6

This is too goo to stop like that 

Amazing plz updt soon and pm me if possible

Originally posted by: apolloartemis

😉It will be a major crime if you don't finish this- therefore, unless you want to be in lockup continue writing!

thank you
ohhh! you mean chakki peesing and peesing... 😉

Originally posted by: bangalores

thank you
ohhh! you mean chakki peesing and peesing... 😉

And you'll be locked in with Ballu😆

Originally posted by: ninand

aww.. Bindu.. this was indeed touching.. melancholic yet beautiful.. i so wish they show KC sequence with this kind of sensitivity..  it really did feel like the woman had changed right there in front of her own self, and the fact that it happened with tenderness left her devastated.. 

song was aptly chosen.. beautiful.

thanks Ninand 😃
 Madhu must be shattered... Maalik to her was the epitome of goodness and integrity... the man she must have compared other's with and found wanting..
to find out that he was behind the attacks must have been such a blow and to realize that she was the reason behind it will make her all the more helpless.
i was fascinated by the son ever since jodibreakers was released... so beautifully lyrical

Originally posted by: apolloartemis

And you'll be locked in with Ballu😆

So write! write!

Ballu ... OH no!!!
but if it was RK i wud not have given you part 2😉

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Fab & lovely os,cont

thank you
will update soon😊

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

Ohhh so emotional and beautiful os dear
plsss plsss plsss plsss plsss continue this os i really want to see wht gift rk wil give to his biwi & how will he break her fast so plsss plsss cont it
gn tc ks hsd

thanks dear 😊
you will find out about the gift soon

This was a beautiful one...actuallly mesmerizing one...but i find this incomplete as of now... Can u write a second part of it and complete this beautiful fictional work of urs plz...

Originally posted by: .Priya2000.

Its Beautiful Di 👏

you got to give the second part 😛 please 

The song went with her situation , I loved it where you said she was looking at herself in the mirror as RK's Biwi the mark of a suhaagan - sindoor , mangalsutra , bangles ... that part was just superb 👏

Cont soon ❤️

thanks Priya...😊
will be giving part 2 soon...