Originally posted by --Udhay--Thank you Uday..
Wonderful work of fiction, chechi. I'm literally speechless at your beautiful portrayal of RishBala interactions, their emotions. Its awesome. The best part is you write their conversations in English yet I can feel the typical RishBala flavour in the dialogues..! Awesome..! I loved it a lot.. With each update, I'm learning a lot and I need to learn so much on the art of fiction-writing from u, so I'll always be there to read your fantastic work..!
i guess reading too many romances paid off ...
i agree sometimes it is difficult to keep the essence intact , usually with comedy especiallly when there is the play of the words involved... wonder how one can ever translate the humour of some of our comedy movies... say the dialogues of 'RaMji Rao Speaking'
there is one particular scene in the 2nd part..Innocent going aut in the night sees Vani VIshwanath and runs inside screaming " purathu... purathu.."
and mukesh or Sayi (whom i don't remember) bends him down and scrathes his back assuming something bit him on the back . it was hilarious but one cannot translate that into english.
you have good imagination... loved our OS...
ente sahayam aavashyamundengil choodichal mathi