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priyachand

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Bindu!!!

how could you start something and leave us hanging!!!!


plsss complete it! you have brought out madhu's pain so beautifully. even i thought they shd show madhu trying to curl up in foetal position searching for that support which RK should come and give. you have caught it so well. so pls continue. when i saw OS by you, i had rush in and read late at night. pls remember us your fans for ur ffs. so pls continue. eager to read the rest.

pls get him to finish her fast. (i know you'll do, you are a romantic!)

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Interesting!! Count me in.. I wanna read ur updates on this OS! I'm very impressed by ur narration of Madhu's various emotions!! Please update the next part soon and PM me as well.. Thanks..! :)

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Bindu darling!! Such a beautiful OS...but it feels incomplete...I would love a part 2 on this :P

P.S. the song goes wonderfully with the OS

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged

Wonderfully written.. Bindu, I expected RK to come runnign at the end.. He didnt.. I didnt like that... 

You wrote Madhu's emotions v well.. 

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
luvly OS bt its not complete yet i guess & the song was perfect 

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
awesome one...loved it...

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
hey i'm mostly a silent reader but this was lovely! u captured all of madhu's emotions and thought processes really well. please do continue. very enjoyable. 

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
Bindu chechi...Awesome...!!
please do continue...!!Smile

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