Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11) - Page 27

madhu resting on his chest pouring out her emotions was so touchy...likd d fact tht RK knows how 2 hande her anger,but not grief.sindoor scene was beautiful.her kiss was unexpected n tht surprse was sweet.last scene where they mentioned paste tense ie she does'n hate him anymore was d best.

happy ending... liked it...

Its nice one. So Rk filled Mb's mang wid sindur at last.

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome loved the ending loved how she saw behind the facade he put up to throw her of loved the ending mind blowing thanks for the pm i read all your work so just keep pm me for who ever or whatever you write you never disappoint

thanks yaar 😳

Originally posted by: mandymore

Its beautiful di...wid. Sindoor n othr gifts...he made her 1 kc memorable...

thanx dear 😃
yup, finally she got what she wished for most... gifts she wanted most 😊

Originally posted by: Sofia13

Amazing Ending..with SindOor n Bangles😳
lOved it..!😊

thanks yaar...😃

Originally posted by: ritzy09

superb ending Bindu...loved it completely

thanks RItzy 😊

Originally posted by: vijayarvi

wt an amazing update..excellent👏

thanks VIjaya 😊

Very beautifully written! You should write more. Im a big fan :-) best of luck with any future work xx