Madhubala - Ek Ishq Ek Junoon

Darmiyaan:OS part 3 on pg 33 (22/11) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
Please do contiue...btw that was fab
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bindu!!!

how could you start something and leave us hanging!!!!


plsss complete it! you have brought out madhu's pain so beautifully. even i thought they shd show madhu trying to curl up in foetal position searching for that support which RK should come and give. you have caught it so well. so pls continue. when i saw OS by you, i had rush in and read late at night. pls remember us your fans for ur ffs. so pls continue. eager to read the rest.

pls get him to finish her fast. (i know you'll do, you are a romantic!)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting!! Count me in.. I wanna read ur updates on this OS! I'm very impressed by ur narration of Madhu's various emotions!! Please update the next part soon and PM me as well.. Thanks..! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bindu darling!! Such a beautiful OS...but it feels incomplete...I would love a part 2 on this :P

P.S. the song goes wonderfully with the OS
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Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderfully written.. Bindu, I expected RK to come runnign at the end.. He didnt.. I didnt like that... 

You wrote Madhu's emotions v well.. 

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Posted: 11 years ago
luvly OS bt its not complete yet i guess & the song was perfect 
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome one...loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey i'm mostly a silent reader but this was lovely! u captured all of madhu's emotions and thought processes really well. please do continue. very enjoyable. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bindu chechi...Awesome...!!
please do continue...!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part .,.
Plz iska nxt part bhi do