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Posted: 11 years ago
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super awesome

 
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                        CHAPTER 53


AADHI - jeeth sing y r u taking me back to jaigad palace 


JEETH SING - Yuvraj SA  MAHRAJ ji ka aadesh hai 

AADHI - k I think adithi is feeling lonely ...so dad must have asked me ...I should have known this before 

MANYATAH - she reaches jaigad palace with uday and friends...sh shoes up and changes dress ...she wears a red t shirt and a a jeans and come down 

UDAY  - he makes his friends sit in first floor in da hall 

FRIENDS - yaar show me ur kids 

UDAY - my son is not here ...on da way ...but my daughter is here ...but she is sleeping ...don't distubt 

FRIENDS - ohhh ...k dear ...we have minimum common sense ...we won't disturb a small kid 

MANAYTAH - while coming down she gets adithi along with her 

ADITHI - she is sleeping peacefully 

EVERYONE - they rush towards  MANAYTAH and see adithi  and in excitement shout ..." wow uday. She is amazing !!!! Like an angel " 

ADITHI - due to sound she wakes up and gets scared seeing many unknown people around and cry 

UDAY - he immediately takes adithi from manyatah and control her " baby don't cry ...see paapa is here " he kisses her 

ADITHI - she stops crying after she finds her father ...she giggles and kisses uday

UDAY - SUSHANTH u shouted and disturbed my little angle 

SUSHANTH - don't blame me alone uday ...these idiots also shouted 

EVERYONE - hello UV chill ...now pls give baby ...we will play with her 

UDAY - sorry guys don't mind ...she will cry ...I mean let her get used ...after sometime ...also she jus got from sleep ...so she will be a bit cranky 

FRIEND 2 - ur behaving like typical father UV 

EVRYONE - that's true ...yeh angle naya hai ...hum Kabi dekha hi nahi aur socha bhi nahi !!!!! 

MANAYATH  - she tries to take adithi but adithi doesn't come from udays arms ...,

UDAY - princess let her be ...she is sleeping ...after she sleeps I'll put her in cradle ..,.,

FRIEND 3 - yes princess MNAYATAH father India will take care u don't worry 

UDAY - Saala kameena ..,,he hits him playfully 

SUSHANTH - he touches adithi's cheeks and tell " MANAYTAH ji ur daughter is just beautiful, like u ...WONDERFULL ...natural beauty " 

MANAYTAH - she just smiles at concentrates on adithi 

UDAY  - he gives death glares to SUSHANTH 

GIRIRAJ - he comes there and meets everyone ...Hii SUSHANTH beta after a. Long time ,.l..how is dad 

SUSHANTH - he is good uncle ...he is missing u 

AADHI - he comes home and doesn't know that everyone is t home and directly goes to his room to wear night dress

UDAY - as adithi sleeps he goes in lift to his room and keeps her in cradle 

GIRIRAJ - beta I'll take care of my nanni pari ...u guys go back to party 

UDAY  - ji dad 

EVERYONE - uday ...we're is ur son ???? Dint come yet 

SUSSHANTH - yes it's been 30 min 

JEETH SING - maharaj ji KI Pranam ...Yuvraj ji went to his room 

EVERYONE - they jump out of excitement and shout " MANAYAAH were is his room " 

MANAYTAH - 2 nd floor ...3rd left in da corridor 

EVERYONE - they just rush 

UDAY - guys just stop ...r u gonna scare my son 

FRIEND 2 - UV chup kar ...

FRIEND3 - yeh father India bhi na ...he is not months baby like ur daughter ...he won't get scared 

FRIEND 1 - he accidentally hits a board and lights go off ...he is not known of da fact that he hit it 

UDAY - power cut !!!! That's impossible 

SUSHANTH - not power cut uday ...lonely lights went off in this floor ...might be some prob 

UDAY - security ...,look aft it ...and be near adithi AADHI and maharani ...jeeth sing 

JEETH - Jo hukum sarkaar 

AADHI - he hears foot steps ..." wat is this ??!! Power cut ...in jaigad palace ...,impossible ...were Are maids ...y dint they on generator ??? I think something is worng ...I can even here foot steps sounds ...might be some thieves have entered mansion " 

EVERYONE - they are in hall near AADHI room ...due to darkness they stop there 

AADHI - he keeps all his technical things ready ...there will be always a long invisible bread tied in his hall ...with remote he raises it from flour to half feet hight ...

JEETH - he switches on da light 

EVRYONE - they go to AADHI room along with uday 

AADHI - due to foot steps sound he switches on the remote Nd rope comes up 

EVERYONE -  they doesn't see rope and fall down 

FRIEND 1 - oh know...my hip ...uday yeh kya ho raha hai 

AADHI - he comes out and gets his playing gun and hit them with plastic ball hiding behind a sofa 

  EVERYONE - they shout in pain ...

UDAY - oh no ...AADHI baby it's me daddy ...stop it ...they are my friends 

AADHI - he finally hears uday and looks. Slowly from hole and makes sure that he is his fathe and rushes to him " dada many thieves have come ...

EVERYONE - they are in floor and stare at little AADHI ðŸ˜²

UDAY - no junior ...they are my friends ...,they came with me 

AADHI - sorry uncles and aunties ...am really sorry ...I didn't know ...I thought some thieves ...dad also don't inform me about guests ...sorryyy sorryyy ...he helps SUSHANTH to get up 

SUSHANTH - uday Tera beta thi thum Se bhi zyada katharnaak nikhla 

friend 1 - aur intelligent bhi 

FRIEND 2 - razzwade hai ...pakka wala ...he thought us to be thieves and did like that 

FRIEND 3 - beta who trained u beta ???? 

AADHI - sorry everyone ...am extremely sorry ...he catches ears 

EVERYONE. - that's k beta ...we can understand .. That all talk to AADHI for 10 min ...they get impressed by AADHI and like him so much 

UDAY - princess see how is talking to everyone ...JAADUGAR hai 

MANYATAH - beta kiska ...

UDAY - jus like me charming and attractive ...

MANYATAH - uday ur full of ur self ...so self centred ...is AADHI does something good u will tell he is like u ...if he does something wrong then u will tell he imbibed such qualities from me .

UDAY - no baby...AADHI completely like me in every aspect ...I can see that ...adithi is like u sometimes 

MANYATAH - Kya mathlab 

UDAY - like jungly billi ...scratching n stuff 

MNAYATAH - udayyy 😡 

UDAY - also adithi is beautifull like her mother ...she has got her mothers lively smile 

MANAYTAH  - she blushes 

UDAY - guys we shall leave ...come ...it's already late ...THANIYA and NISHANTH must be waiting 

EVERYONE - k uday ...we shall ...ur son is so cute ...adorable ...attractive child 

SUSHANTH -  he is so intelligent and charming 

FRIEND 2 - both of ur kids are just fabulous ...,I have no words to express ...so cuteee 

FRIEND 1 - uday he is a perfect Yuvraj ...man u have a perfect heir for u ...he is just like u perfect ...l

FRIEND3 - aakhir UV KA beta hai ...l.perfect tho hoga ... 

SUSHANTH - adithi is so CUTEEE ...uday ur wife is also beautifull man ...I have seen many beautifull girls but she is one ...a natural beauty 

UDAY - he gets mad at sushntahs words about to tell something but a friend interrupts 

FRIEND 2 - SUSHANTH is true ... U got such a cute family ...

EVRYONE. - they leave to pub ...to party ...

THANIYA - manyatah didi were did u guys go ?? 

SUSHANTH - he narrates everything ...

NUSHANTH THANIYA - haha ...AADHI is such a naughty boy ...also cuteee 

UDAY - he looks angrily at SUSHANTH as he stands beside manyatah 

SUSHANTH - he. Gets wine and offers to manyatah 

MANAYTAH - sorry I don't take drinks 

SUSHNATH - k no problem I'll get a juice 

MANAYATHA - no thanks ...I'll take it 

UDAY - yes SUSHANTH  she will take ...thankleef math lelo

J - hiii jiji and uday ...sh shrugs both of them 

SUSHNATH - he gets orange juice and gives MANAYTAH 

MANAYTAH - she takes it and tell thanks 

UDAY - yeh NISHANTH tho meri princess ke peeche padgaya😡

MANAYATHA - j take it...u like orange favour na 

J - tanks jiji 

UDAY - he feels satisfied ...thank god princess dint drink da juice which that fool has got ...

THANIYA - she announces " guys it's time for couple dance ...come everyone ...didi and uday jiju come onnn first with u " 

MANVEER - they dance together and set stage on fire 


    AFTER SOME TIME ALL FINISH OFF DANCING AND HAVE DINNER ...,,SUSHANTH ACCOMPANIES MANYATAH WHIKE DINNER ...UDAY DOESNT LIKE IT ...HE COMES AND STANDS IN BETWEEN THEM AND SOMEHOW MANAGES TO COME IN BETWEEN ALWAYS ...


          THANKS EVERYONE FOR UR COMMENTS ...SORRY IF I DINT REPLY FOR ANYONE COMMENTS ...SORY FOR DA MISTAKES ...


         HIT LIKE BUTTON AND POST COMMENTS IF U LIKE IT ...THANK YOU ...


PRECAP - 

 
GIRIRAJ - so beta how is Mumbai ?? U got adjusted ?? 

SUSHANTH - yes uncle it's very nice ...am getting used to ...

GIRIRAJ - y don't u stay at jaigad palace SUSHANTH ...ur gonn stay for 10 days in mumbai na ...pls stay here beta ...

SUSHANTH - no that s k uncle ...a, fine ...

GIRIRAJ - no beta stay here ...I'll be happy ...also u will not feel home sick ...kya bolthe uday ...he is ur friend come onnn uday ask him to stay 

UDAY - yes SUSHANTH pls stay ...

SUSHANTH - k uncle ...I'll stay ...thank u 

UDAY - he thinks inside " dad muje phasadiya ...donno how am gonna stand this bloody dog ...always flirting with my wife and behind he ...how can I tell u dad " 


Edited by puggyy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update was just awesome
Loved it to the core
Aadhi is so smart he reminds me of the kid from home alone
Uday is so jealous and protective
I wish that sushanth dosent do anything to manyata
Cant wait till the next update
Edited by PrincessZaneb - 11 years ago
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Do update soon
  I am waitin...
    Can't wait what happens next
             Always liked ur ff and always will
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Posted: 11 years ago
update jaldi jaldi😉
Edited by hans1998 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: eyecatchers

Do update soon
  I am waitin...
    Can't wait what happens next
             Always liked ur ff and always will


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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum chapter. udays frnds are just crazy. aadi scene was amazing. 

cont.soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aadhi is so smart and luv it how uv is so possessive about m
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Originally posted by: arna753

awesum chapter. udays frnds are just crazy. aadi scene was amazing. 


cont.soon


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