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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 8:46am | IP Logged
res... unres... AAA... WAT THE HECK WAS THAT... :O *gulping hard* ... Damn... F**k... Infact i am breathing hard this moment... :O ... Dudeee... Wat are youuu...????? ... Now coming to d update... I'm... Litrelly speechlesss... Wo dilse re... Wo kya tha... :O ... Damnnn... The way droplets on Kria's body were making him crazyyy... And thn d way Rey entered... The way he teased her... His continuous smirksss... OMG... M out of wordsss... And dey still fight... He raam... I thought dey wont... *sigh... Rey will nvr improve..!!! ... And phr plane meiii... Poor passengers n air hostess... Wo b sharma gayi unki intensity dekh k.. ROFL ... Ayr phr last mei kria back to her "Rey aapka juice".. "aapka hanky" .. Wala avatar LOL ...Bt finally..Evry1 happy...Happy ending.. Wink ..*sigh..Haaye deetha..Biiggg hugs 2 u 4 writing these awesomee stories...i especially loved that dilse re part.. Smile ..u knw wat...u wer ryt...Ye story hume humesha yad rahegi...U mde us speechless..Love u re..

Edited by akanksha_arsha - 18 November 2012 at 9:29am

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Res ki line
Unres


Awesome di

loved it

Dil se re 


Edited by Himaniahir - 18 November 2012 at 9:38am

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:06am | IP Logged
wooww maaa this was super duper fantasticulously fabluous kya likha ap ne maa mazaa gaya
from the begining tilll the end super coooll yaar am loving evry bit if it kaash aap honey moon ka scene bhi likhti toh hit hota but aap ko kaun samjhayega
aaw u put tht kriyaansh scene in after such a lng tym i wached it bought bak the gd memories and the amount of tym ive heard dil se i jus cnt stop listning to it its jjus like this song is stuk to my head...

but rey waise ka waisa hi hai angry young mann.. lol but kriya ko handle krana ata hai...
kya yar rey plane mein bhi apna romance nahi chodta lolll besharamaa...
loved ur updte maa... and here a ig commnt for u evnthough m still upste wd u

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:07am | IP Logged
beautiful...

just loved it...

thanks for updating now...

the intensity u described was just phenomenal...

beautiful...

no words...

(sorry for short comment... jaana hai...)

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:08am | IP Logged
res [ will unres latr] unres... Fabulus update...loved it...rey ni sudharne wala~...but nw kriya knw how to tackel him... Abt dance v all guessd it rght... But yaar...flight m b...awww...!!!! Finally they r togethr jst lyk one soul two body... Abt dance seq...kya bolun...it was out of world... Osssooommm updatee...!!!! I m gonna miss this amazing ss...waise tre toh saare hi acche hote h... But this one is kind a sp... Finally tre bhai ko scold karna band...:p

Edited by shalini_arsha - 18 November 2012 at 10:17am

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Finaly u updated
tjhse zyada aur koi nhi tadpata hai update dene mein
huh

bt apart 4m dat loved ur story n ek baat bta teri story mein dil se ke alawa koi aur song nhi hai kya :-P

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Fabulous update

it was just mind blowing

loved it

kal mera exam hai and im sure it will go good..after all itna mast update jo padha..

hayyeee inka romance <3 <3

huh rey nhi sudherne wala...

mind blowing SS on the whole...

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Fabulous update

it was just mind blowing

loved it

kal mera exam hai and im sure it will go good..after all itna mast update jo padha..

hayyeee inka romance <3 <3

huh rey nhi sudharne wala...

mind blowing SS on the whole...

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