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thanks a lot ppl!!!!!!!!!

coz the way u kept loving this SS

wow!!!!!!! im shocked...

im overwhelmed...

okay ab emotional drama band...

but really thanks thanks a lot for this love and support

love ya

deetha
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SS series part 2 

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so we are here in thread two...bas ab no bakwaasing nahi toh meri ram naam satya ho hojayega..πŸ˜†...here goes the update







none knew where she was...ranvijay had tried a lot to find...and preeti..she is the one not able to cry or not able to be happy...coz rey fell in love with kriya...this is what she always wanted...but he was sad ...too sad on loosing her...she was confused with herself...

rey...he was a silent soul now.. he always will be in contact ol with his company and indulging himself in work but she had her space in that too... 

# rey was doing continuously and seriously his work..he felt thurst and traced his hand on the table his gaze fixed on laptop...no glass was found...

"kriya water"he shouted... no response

"kriya paani leke aao ...cant u hear.."he shouted and looked sidewards and realised he is alone...she left him...

he sighed and continued his work...

# rey was on the breakfast table... after having he was abt to get up...when his gaze fell on the juice glass...he smiled took it and remembered how she used to be back of  him and drank it and left...

and many more incidents where he unconsiously remembered her...

finally the day was here...today will be the last day ...court will declare them divorced...

still there are 5 mins for the case study to start...

Singhania's were sitting on the table outside under a tree waiting at the parking lot to see their daughter-in-law...rey was sitting and looking down without any expression...

finally ranvijay and priya saw kriya along with her family..she looked healthy but she lost all the glow...the spark in her eyes..as soon as she saw priya she ran to her and hugged tight...

"baat mat karo mujhse...mai gussa hun.mujhse batana tak zaroori nahi samjha tune???"priya asked still hugging...kriya remained silent but hugged her tight...she missed her a lot...

ranvijay called her and slightly slapped..."papa bulati hai...cant u come to me???"he said...

"sorry papa"she said and hugged him...

but rey was still sitting and looking down without any expression...kriya looked at him stopped her tears and stood quite...

"tym hogaya hai...hume chalna chahiye"the lawyers of kriyaash said...

kriya nodded and rey just got up and followed the lawyers...

both were standing in the bone

MR.Mishra...rey's lawyer started..


Mr.Mishra: ur honour...

he was cut

Rey: sorry Mr.Mishra...mujhe kuch bolna hai...

all looked at him confused...

Rey: ur honour sorry to waste ur tym...sorry to say but cancel this case...mujhe pata tha ki mai kitna bhi dhoondhun meri wife mujhe nahi milne wali ...galti meri thi... maine papers sigh sirf isiliye kiya coz i can meet her again only through this case... mujhe divorse nahi chahiye... i want u to cancel it now...

rey said looking at the judge...the judge thought for sometym

judge: ohkk...according Mr.Reyaansh wo ye divorse nahi chahte and divorse sirf donon ki marzi se hote hai...but Mrs . Reyaansh ye court aapko ye guarantee deti hai ...agar aapke saath kuch galat hua then a very severe action will be taken... now i think i should close the case as discuss karne keliye kuch bacha hi nahi...

kriya: par...

she stopped as rey started walking towards her...he never since she came he looked at her...he stood before her and asked for her hand as the judge cancelled and closed the file declaring disperse...

kriya is not able to understand whats happening...but she placed her hand in his...he gently took her to his car made her sit and declared...

"dad hum ghar jaa rahe hai...aap bhi aajayiye"he say and droke off...

ranvijay and rest rushed to house wondering whats gonna happen there...ranvijay is more tensed...he knew rey is very short tempered...

rey was driving calmly...

"can u plzz close the window kriya...AC on karta hun"he said... looking at road

she nodded and pulled the glass up as he started the AC...

all were waiting at home...they rushed fast...

but the saw rey along with kriya ...he simply ignored everyone and walked upstairs to his room when she followed quitely looking down...

he locked the door and turned around as she stood fidgetting with her dupatta...he held her by shoulders and made her sit on the couch and he himself sat before her on the table...

he never looked at her..she was just looking at him...he held her hands between his and spoke 

"kriya...lemme speak once...i swear ...i really say...sach mei mere aur rose ke beech kuch nahi hai...maine kabhi bhi kisi ladki ko uss nazar se nahi dekha...i swear..."he looked at her finally as tears started but he quickly blinked them away...

she already started crying..."i know"she replied to his surprise...

"toh tumne mujhe akela kyun chod diya??"he asked hurt...but she remained silent...rey moved closer and asked...

"k...kriya...*he struggled a lot to ask as the pain he was experiencing was hell...* kya...kya mera choona bhi tumhe pasand nahi???"he asked as a tear rolled down...he still remembered that...every night it pricks him...
she quickly nodded a no crying...

"to phir uss din..."he trailed off as his voice betrayed...and tears flowed continuously...

"nahi rey...aisa kuch nahi...wo ...*sob* wo actually party ke din...jab mei shower mei baiti thi...tab maine bohut socha *okay guys i cant write sob every where so imagine she is sobbing in between her words* ...tabhi mujhe laga ki...aap aur mai bohut alag hai...aapki soch aur meri soch kabhi nahi mili...aur mujhe laga ki hum ek doosre keliye nahi bane...par mujhe pata hai...app mere saath adjust karloge...par mai aapko khush dekhna chahti hun...adjust karke rehna nahi...aur aap mere saath kabhi kush nahi reh sakte...kyun ki meri soch ...mai bohut hi typical ladki jaisi hun...mai aapko iss rishtey mei aur baandh ke rakhna nahi chahti..."

kriya said looking at him when he looked at her...as soon as he looked at her she looked down...

"tabhi maine sochliya hum kabhi ek nahi ho sakte toh kyun na alag hojaye...mai agle din hi jaane waali thi sab kuch chodkar...par beemaar pad gayi thi...aur jab mai uthi tab mujhe laga ki mai ek hi jhat mei aapse dhoor nahi jaa paungi...isiliye humare beech jo bhi tha sab se dur jaake dheere dheere tab alag hona chahti thi... maine hi di ko bola ki mujhe aapko dekhne se pareshaani hoti hai kyun ki maine socha aapse dur rehne ka usse acha mauka kuch nahi hai...mai aapko apne aap se dur karne keliye wo sab kiya ...sach mei aapki choonese mujhe takleef nahi hoti...uske baad mai mauka keliye dekh rahi thi kyun ki mujhse aur ho nahi paa raha tha...mujhe dar lagne laga ki mai aapse door aa nahi apungi ...aur uss din maine sochliya...wahi sahi mauka hai...aur agle din hi maine aapko apne aapse hamesha keliye azaad kardiya..."she said breaking down as he tightened his grip as he too cried looking at her...

fially after few secs she looked at him...

"rey...aapne aisa kyun kiya?? aapko pata bhi hai ab humari talaak milne mei kitni tym lagti hai...appko aisa karna nahi chahiye tha...hum ek doosre keliye nahi..."she was trying to say but was cut by him...

he can never ever think that she did this to break their relation and leave him free...as she started blabbering he smiled through tears 

paagal...

he smiled before quickly taking her lips in his...she froze by his sudden action...she looked at him with shock...but he slowly cupped her face and gently deepened the kiss...she closed her and gave in the moment...she waited and was still waiting for this day...to feel his love...he slowly shifted on the couch never breaking the kiss and made his way into her mouth as she moaned in pleasure and layed back as he kissed her every cell of her mouth...he finally left her lips in lack of air ...she was breathing hard eyes closed as he traced his lips on her face planting kisses and again took her lips into his...finally after a long kiss he pulled back to look at her face still over her...after few secs she opened her eyes...

"we are meant to be"he said and kissed at the edge of her lips...

"sachi???"she asked as tears brimmed up...

"muchi"he said with a slight laugh...soon she broke into tears and hugged him tight as he sat straight and hugging her tight...he smiled through tears...

"waise mujhe tum pasand nahi ho"he said...

she looked at him almost about to burst out crying when he said with a pout

"mujhe ye kriya pasand nahi hai...apne aapko kuch jyaada hi smart samajhti hai"he pouted ...

"toh aur koun chahiye" she asked naughtily

"wo...jo hamesha pere pyaar keliye tarsti hai...wo jo hamesha meri baat ko sunti hai...wo jo humesha mere peeche peeche ghoomti rehti hai...aur wo jo apna sabkuch mujhe de sakti hai " he said looking deep into her eyes...

"sab kuch??? mere paas kya hai??? abhi abhi mai teacher ji job mai join hui...mujhe apna salary bhi nahi mila...kya doon aapko??" she asked innocently

"tum...mujhe tum chahiye ...dogi??? "rey asked looking intensely at her...she shivered at his gaze...she looked down blushing...

he pulled her into his lap as she gasped and wispered "batao...dogi??"he asked seductively...

she nodded and ran away...

all were sitting in the living room when kriya blushingly came down...

"beta rey ne kuch"ranvijay started asking as soon as he saw her but soon after seeing her blush everyone rised their eyebrows getting that they are together now and smiled as they always wanted these two to be happy...

"acha toh sab sort out hogaya??"ranvijay asked kriya who was still trying hard to stop her blush...

"yup dad...!!!!!"rey said coming down...she stiffened immediately...

"ab koi problem nahi..."he said looking at her making her blush more...

*********

the day passed...

at 7...

reys and kriya s parents were sitting along with rey at a corner talking to his clients and doing some work on the laptop...

"rey ...aaj itni khushi ka din aur tumho ki kaam mei lage hue ho"preeti said...

"mom just 5 mins plzz"he said never looking up...

"baap aur beta ek hi jaise hai...mai kehrahi hun na aapse"priya said prustrated to kriyas mom...

"beta...hum kal waise bhi jaa rahe hai...bohut din hogaye tumhe naachte hue dekh ke... jab tum wapas aayi tabhi poochna chahta tha par tab haalat aise the ki... kya tum ek baar mere liye.."kriya's dad asked...

rey froze...*bohut din hogaye tumhe naachte hue dekh ke* this was ringing in his ears...

"kaisi baat kar rahe ho papa...aapko toh mujhse bas bolna chahiye..."kriya said sitting on her knees before her dad and hugging him by waist...

he kissed her head...

"ab karo bhi...humne bhi bohut dinon se nahi dekha haa..."ranvijay said enthusiastically... rey looked at him confused+shocked...

kriya smiled and finally met rey's eyes...she stood still she knew...he doesnt know abt her dance

"arey kadhi kay ho shuru karo..."preeti said...kriya said and went in and came out with the ghunghroo...

rey was looking at her in shock...she played a song ...

*okay stop the song DIL SE and play this...she is dancing on pure bharatanatyam style ... and as if she was dreaming abt rey...his company...his love...him to be by her side... with a smile on her lips *i wanted to explain sequence but its pure classical i cant take risk..galti se bhi kuch kehdiya toh...nah baba i cant insult it..so imagine* rey was looking at her shocked*

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QNB4ah9r79M&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

she completed her dance and stood still as her eyes met his ...it expressed pain,confusion. and shock...she looked down with guilt...all praised her and finally went for dinner...all the while rey was silent...she sensed it...she went to serve him...he didnt flinch ...means he s not mad at her...

finally as everyone dispersed and kriya wnt to thier room with water and closed the door slowly knowing he would aske her...

as soon as she turned placing the jar she bumped into him...

"kyun nahi bataya???"he asked hurt...

she looked down...

"tumhe dance itni achi se aati hai...aur tumne mujhe batana zaroori nahi samjha??? "he asked holding her shoulders...she was still looking down...

"agar mai ye kahun ki aapne jaan na zaroori nahi samjha toh??"she asked crying...it still hurts her...

that day when she came to know that he doesnt know that she can dance...

*******

he was dancing when she was looking from outside...he completed his dance but she was lost thinking how would it be if they would dance together...

he saw her standing at the door and walked to her...

"tum yaha??"he asked irritated..

"wo asal mei..."she started...

"koi kaam tha??? ohh hoga hi warna tum yaha kyun aati ...kya kaam hai yaha tumhara ...dance toh nahi aata...kisine mujhe bulaya???"he asked sarcastically...

she froze when she knew that he dont know that she can dance...

***************

"what???? agar tum batogi nahi toh mujhe kaise pata chalega??"rey asked...

"aapko ye tak nahi pata ki aapki mummy papa ne mujhe pehli baar ek dancer ki tarah hi jaante hai...aur dance karte hi dekha hai...aap ne ye tak jaan na zaroori nahi samjha ki jisse aapki shaadi ho rahi hai usse aapki parents mile kaise"she asked crying...

rey remembered that day when his parents said him abt her...they said that she is a middle class girl studied till 10th and that's it rey left aying...

"jo karna hai kijiye"

he looked at her.. he hurted her much...

he pulled her close...

"sorry"he said as she looked up pouting with fake anger...

she looked too cute...hit bit her pout and said...

"beautiful" when she blushed...

he slowly took her lips into him and sucked but soon pulles back...

made her lye on the bed and went upon her and kissed her passionately and kissed her forehead and rolled down pulling her into his arms

"I LOVE U "he said placing his chin on her head...

"love u too"she said kissing his chest and both drifted to sleep



okay thats it for now...

and im so sad to say that the SS ends here...

and yeah u will get a epilouge...wait for it till tomorrow...

love u guys for this much support

hope u liked it...

like and comment please...

love ya...

deetha😳


Edited by ..tulip.. - 11 years ago
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yippie first one to comment and congo deetha for new thread
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yayyee new thread

Ok editing my comment...

Deetha πŸ˜ƒ

Thank u soo much...mera rey toh chha gaya yaha pe...kya tha yaar woh court wala scene..

kaash main waha hoti..i would hav started clappin n whistling n den wld hav hugged him.

😳

i loved dis so much..bas ek wish hain meri...pleassseee...make both of dem dance on dil se in d epilogue...plzzz

main ek chocolate dungi..werever u stay, i'l courier it to u..

plzzzπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


And maine cheatin ki...kriya ka dance to maine dil se song ke saath hi dekha πŸ˜›

i loveee dis rey sooo much...

pagla gayi gun main..

jaldi update now..

n once agn, plzzz for d dance on dil se
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Congo for the new thread di..ab jaldi-jaldi update karo..
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GUYs wo wala thread then???
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congratzzz 4 the new thread...

u rocked it...
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Congratulations Deetha di for d new thread...πŸ‘