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IPK FF:Love,Lies and Two Weddings?TH2 *COMPLETED* (Page 5)

anuv123 Senior Member
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 12:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by EXPELLIARMUS

Originally posted by anuv123

I like the whole concept of leaving the newly weds alone...but at the same time...i was also feeling bad that everybody is leaving...mamiji..NK...anjali...shyam...nani...Dont you think it will get boring for the couple...and fun is always with family right...

And why was anjali and arnav's talk so mechanical..as if they are strangers saying good bye to each other...i mean when siblings who are so close...so dear to each other...are starting a new life...so i wanted some intensity in their convo...hmmm this might have happened because of your time constraint so i don't blame you...even in this short time you have written a beautiful story...

Why do i feel that you are just laying a trap and trying to make us believe that khushi is pregnant...I think they are not talking about a baby...

Please update soonSmile





Thank you for your honesty!
About the first part of your comment, I can only say wait, and watch.
I still have two chapters coming up.
The second part, about Anjali and Arnav, the detachment in their talk was deliberate on my part. Arnav has learned that she lied to him, and he cannot fully trust her now. Whereas Anjali is now aware that he knows about her manipulation, and also that his priorities have changed. 
Theses revelations have changed the equation between them, and they cannot ever go back to their earlier relationship.
 I wanted to show that there is a certain distance between them now. They are still there whenever the other needs them, but the emotional dependence is no longer there.
Does that make sense now? Maybe I should have portrayed that change in a better way..
But thanks for letting me know what you thought!

ya that makes sense now...Thanks for taking time out for reading my comment and explaining things to me...Smile

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 12:27am | IP Logged
It's amazing how this is turning out to be the real IPK! I love how he takes care of her and is so attuned to her needs. Which is how ASR really is. The true ASR as we know him. (Not lover boy Arnie, happy go lucky college romeo who cannot understand his wife or sense how she feels!)
Pregnant? So quickly? And his words? Ominous? I hope not. I hope he's not in an accident when he is driving back to her! I love this story. I can feel the love they share. Isn't this how it's supposed to be?? At least in FF we an stick to the true essence of Arnav and Kushi and their love story! Thank-you for doing that.
Thanks for the PM.Big smile Waiting for the next bit. 

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 12:40am | IP Logged
congrats on new thread..

superb update...

thanks 4 d pm

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 12:52am | IP Logged
when I hv read ur FF..it seems to me that IPK wud b like that then it wud b mindblowing...every chapter u make me waiting for next...Smile

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Fruti5 Senior Member
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 1:12am | IP Logged
nice update 
that woman is anjali ...

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Great Update..!! just love it

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 1:31am | IP Logged
awesome update.
loved this Anjali.

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 1:51am | IP Logged
congrats on your new thread...awesome update...omg khushi is pregnant...

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