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libranangel

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Posted: 03 January 2013 at 6:00am | IP Logged
You terribly brilliant writer!!!!

i started reading this FF thinking that it would be a bit amateur, but honestly it was anything but!!!

i wanted to read the whole thing before i commented and now i'm feeling bad that i'm commenting only because this means its over!!! Cry

you made me fall in love with Arnav and Khushi even weeks after their story has ended. even though your FF had no evil characters, the bond between Arnav and Khushi is enough to give this FF all the masala and drama it needs!!

thank you for closing the loops on all the characters in the show, thank you for finally giving Arshi their own kids and creating magical stories even for them!!

like i said, you are terribly brilliant and a close second favourite of mine. the first spot is reserved for Meera!!! sorry!!!!  

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Posted: 03 January 2013 at 7:21am | IP Logged
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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 12:23am | IP Logged
Absolutely unexpected emotional ride through the lives of one of the two beautiful couple I have ever come across in Indian television (the other being Maan and Geet, You like them too, I guess).

I came across this FF yesterday and writing this after reading the epilogue SS today. I have always been an addict to good stories and this one got hooked me up with a passion. 

I love it when Khushi is portrayed as equally stubborn, ferocious, passionate but at the same time reasonable, like in this story. I also liked the fact that Arnav retained his characteristics and changed himself only for and in the presence of Khushi.

Kashish and Aarav, complete the life of a memorable couple. 

I am now off to your index to check on your other creations.

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 10:14am | IP Logged
You brilliant writer!

You are a naughty, witty, wise, intelligent, romantic, sensuous, mysterious, amazing person. How can you otherwise justify these elements in your story?

You are a queen of cliffhangers and though I know throughout the  story that you are writing a happy story, the seriousness with which you wrote "vague" left me scared.

Good I read it in one go. If I had read it while you were updating I would have made you crazy with my  stalking.

You didn't make Arnav redeem with tears and expressive guilt. You made him erase every wrong he did and replaced it with a smile. No amount of apologies could have healed Khushi's wounds. But what if there are no wounds to remember.

And everyone else? Shyam and Nani and then Anjali. Thanks for untwisting the twisted games of Shyam. Thanks for making these characters loyal and intelligent.

And yes! The Raizadas needed to leave Shantivan alone to the owner for once!

Even Payal, Aakash, Amma, Buaji and Buaji were enjoyable to read when around.

Thanks for making ArHi successful lovers, spouses, and parents.

Parents. Your entire story on one pan and your epilogue on another and your epilogue would win.

Please consider a spin off on Kashish and Aarav Singh Raizada. I will lap it up. PLEASE... PLEASE PLEASE.

PS: Everytime I read, I wondered how many times could you have them have the "What are you wearing" convo and yet bring in novelty everytime???

PPS: You do intimacy with just the right balance of innocence and desire. Loved it!

PPPS: Throughout the story there were so many things I wanted to say and this comment just doesn't do justice to it. Please forgive me


I BOW DOWN TO YOUR CREATIVE GENIUS Smile


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Posted: 07 January 2013 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
I just caught up with this FF - it's absolutely great! Looking forward to reading more of your work.  Will you be expanding on Kashish or Aarav?

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amritab

I just caught up with this FF - it's absolutely great! Looking forward to reading more of your work.  Will you be expanding on Kashish or Aarav?

Thank you!

I'm currently writing an SS "Sins", but it isn't a spin off on LLATW.
If I decide to tell the tale of Kashish and Arnav, I'll let you know!

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 12:24am | IP Logged
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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Wonderful FF.. great job..Clap

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