Sorry sorry sorry, one million sorry for the late comment. But der aaye durust aaye right?
Juhi ji, I was reading something written by you for the first time. I
had come across this one quite often and I thought you being a Chikni
Chameli, it would be a tp FF. But how wrong was I? When Saiyu told me
'Choti read Love, Lies and Two Weddings', I just had to read it then.
I started reading it some time back and I read up to 25th chapter and
then didn't get the time to read the epilogue. In a way I am glad I
didn't. Before I start about the story let me tell you that I was
pleasantly surprised that this being your first FF, you have hardly made
any typos. I am very finicky about typos in my work and I know how many
times I have to read my works to avoid any typos and I still find them
:(
But with this story, the whole of 25 chapters + 2 + 3 epilogue, there were hardly any typos. So kudos to that 👏
Now I will come to the story (By now you have realised that I speak a lot 😆 )
This story had everything that I wanted to be shown in the story. Every
single thing and may be more :D Firstly, I love those stories which have
Shyam as a good guy (Somehow I can't get his goody son-in-law image
from my head of the initial days of IPK) The story started from where
the show started going downhill. Nani and Shyam's interaction in the
start was awesome and I liked it that the bride and groom in question
knew about it.
Later came the best part of the FF. The redemption. You made him do every wrong in to a right. It wasn't rushed...It was perfectly paced...At certain points I would sit and think 'O yes this could have happened. That could have happened' and then I thought 'Yeah it could only happen in FFs now'
You had a logical reason for everything. A rational explanation for every action. An understanding behind every decision.
And the second best part about this story was - the surprises. I as a reader (and as I person) hate it when I can't guess some thing right and you made me do that often :( I would guess the North Pole and you would come up with Antarctica :( and that is a great achievement in itself.
Now the best part was - their telephonic conversation every night. You made Arnav make bolder statements as they took one extra step in the relationship. Never too less. Never too much. Just perfect. The right thing at the right time.
And the bestest part of the FF? Your Arnav and Khushi were in character ALWAYS!!! Never did I feel that 'Hey! Khushi will never do that. Arnav will never do that!'
Their true essence was maintained. The IPK essence was maintained.
And now comes the bestestest part of the FF - THE Epilogue. Yes it was THE epilogue. It is the best epilogue I have ever read on ArHi (I have read too many FFs :D )
As I read the first part, I was think Oh no what has happened to Arnav. Khushi can't be with someone else. No No No. But I had faith in you. i had faith in what you had said at the very first page of this FF - it is going to be all ArHi. So I continued and I am glad that I did :D
By the second part I was sure that okay this one is not Khushi but this one is Anjali. But no, you surprised us again. It turned out to be ArHi's grown up daughter! I loved the chemistry between Viraf and Kashish! Man smoking hot!!!!
The history was repeating itself in two different parts of the world and not surprisingly both Raizada and Gupta blood was involved :D
Can you get a part 4 of the epilogue probably? Pretty please 😃
Juhi ji you are a ⭐️ and this FF was ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful piece of writing with us. Thank you for letting me have an ending for my ArHi which the satellite one never provided 🤗
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