Originally posted by hilarious44
An AMAZING writer has AMAZED me once again...
Thanx . Your review is almost as long as my chap.
Thankyou so much sweety.
God i missed ur chapters sooo much Anu...Absolutely delighted today.. Thanku so so much buddy...
I am happy, that I finally finished the chap.
Its very hard to do a rewrite.
But I am glad that I could make u smile.
Coming to the chapter... Nidhi's thoughts...Very very well written... Her life has taken a complete U-turn...Must be really tough for her.... Specially seeing mallika's pics all around must have been terrible... The way she prepared her mind to come in terms with the current situation was too good... Loved her positive thinking... Great sacrifice for her family with not even a moment of regret...
Nidhi has a very generous nature. Its just that she has always been ignored, by her family.
And then to get married like that. But she is strong, and knew that what was done was done,
So she decided to forget the past, and go on with life.
But her sacrifice will pay off.
Ashutosh...felt so so sorry for the poor guy... He even in his wildest dreams couldnt have imagined that fate can do this to him... Would have been so hard to face the society... Loved him for equally taking care of his n nidhi's family reputation... It was great to read that all he had was anger in his heart for mallika rather than any hurt...
He,s a good guy. But, very reserved. Also very protective and involved with his family, as u
Will see when the story unfolds. But see, this is the first time that things were out of his control
Abhi tak toh he had planned his whole life. And now the real fun will begin.
And jahan tak Mallika ki baat hai, toh he never had any deep feelings anyway. So he is already
Over her. (I will give you a hint )Only Nidhi does not know that yet, or that he never loved Mallika in the first place. But she will not find out till much later.. The scene in bedroom was SUPERB... All the convo was very well written...Loved it... Ashu's concern for nidhi was so sweet.. Lines about DB n Papad belna were hilarious... His words to make the air comfortable for her was really cute...
Thanks. He was feeling bad, and wanted to make her feel better.
I am glad u liked DB. Abhi, toh she still has a role to play.
Both having faith that eventually things will work out...GREAT..
Ab koi choice thodihi hai. Toh faith toh rakkhna hi padega.
Then 4months leap.. Baba desperate to see nidhi n igoring ashu completely was hilarious...
Glad u liked that. There is still more stuff to.come.
So nidhi has won her place in eveyone's heart.... Bhabi-Dewar convo n masti was so sweet...
I wanted to give Rohan a special role. I just didn't feel
Like making him disappear into the sunset like always.
But still wanted him to have a special relationship with Nidhi, at
The same time.
Their combined effort to build up nidhi's self confidence was commendable... I hope ashu succeeds in making her agree to get back to medicine too n not waste her education...
Yes, everyone loves her. They will always be there for her, as u will also read
In the chapters to come.
And yes Ashu eventually toh, mana hi lega, Nidhi ko.
Rohan giving her respect as Bhabi despite the fact that she was younger was really nice... The whole makeover part...BRILLIANT... So sweet of rohan to care for his bhabi.. He wants them to behave like a normal couple...
Rohan, loves her, and respects her. And he adores his older brother.
So, he will do anything he can for them.
Felt sad to read that ashu-nidhi still maintained that distance...were only FRIENDS even after 4months of marriage...Why is that so???
They are friends. But the way they got married was not normal.
Aur phir, abhi toh I have not written anything about ke dono ke beech mein 4mahine mein kya hua ya kya nahin. Wait. Next chap will tell.(nothing intimate happened)
Glad that rohan has taken the matter in his own hands....
Yep. Mr. matchmaker.
Roah-Anji...hmmm...nice new angle...Liked it...
Thanks. I thought it was a different twist.
Finally the last scene... Nidhi must be looking AWESOME...
Ashutosh will tell you that in the next chap.
Could imagine her pre n post the makeover...Must have been a drastic change... Rohan waiting to see the stunned look on his brother's face n YES he got to see that...
He planned for it, and fully expected it.
To be continued in the first part of the next update.
I dont know how many times have said this before n how much is still to come BUT i have once again fallen in love with ur work Anu..
Thank you. You don't know how much encouragement I get from that.
I means a lot.
Feel super delighted to have read ur update after sooo long.... So happy n satisfied now... U never fail to mesmerize me by the quality of ur work... Aww. Thank you LOVE U SWEETY...
U are TOOO GOOD..
I love you too