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SwaRon OS: I Hear Thunder (Page 8)

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Knock-Knock could i sneak in? Embarrassed
first of all apologies to be accepted for such a stupid behavior of mines! i should have reported here first and what i am doing for now is absolutely contrary. 

Heya Ruts Hug
first of all i loved the title! and the way the OS started was adorable. i would have loved reading the whole poem if you included it too because it played a dominant role. the little Tulia was really cute. She is just like Sharon,i would say the lil Sharon and this time it is Shikhawat. Sharon is really hard as a mother,the time she asked Tulia to gulp down the milk was just like my mother,Truly.i loved the thought behind the OS. it was a meticulous journey all way through the read. Swayam here is diligent and amiable too.the canniness which Swayam presented with the matter of being stuck in traffic was cool. this the rain brought a cataclysm this time in a good manner. Tulia here was more of a motif as she somehow bound the story,though in the initial.
the rain dance that they shared were like a cherry on the top. 

P.S:thank the almighty now! i commented that too without much adieu(kidding).LOL

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rutu

Originally posted by swaron09

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WOW! thats the only word that comes to my mind at the moment. Awesome sequel! i just love this OS!

firstly i love the title. "I hear thunder" has always been on my top list of poems. i used to always love singing it when i was small. it has actually been my all time favorite poem. i still love singing this poem with my brother. WinkSo seeing the title, i got really excited

secondly coming to the os, i love the way you have penned it down. from Sharon - tulia's relationship to swayam- tulia's and eventually swayam- sharon's relationship have been expressed really well. the feelings this OS carried was incredible. The milk drinking episode in the OS was really sweet and simple.  and Tulia loving the rains was so adorable. Honestly i really like the name Tulia. its a very sweet and sober name. and swayam driving a bike.Day Dreaming awww he must be looking so adorable or shall i say HOTLOL . then swayam taking sharons phobia out was so husband like and warm gesture of him. he is certainly the best dad and husband one can get. and lastly the dance was just sooo romantic. went into the real swarm dreamland.Day Dreaming

so in all, i just loved this os. i don't have words to express how awesome this os was. please keep writing. i love reading ure collections of OS,FF and SS!


Thanks for the comment Rishita, glad you liked it. And I haven't written any FF dear, its just OS's and SS'sEmbarrassed

Sorry. i didnt know you havent written any FF yet. Embarrassed what i basically ment was i love ure reading whatever you write so added all 3 options!

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swaron09


Sorry. i didnt know you havent written any FF yet. Embarrassed what i basically ment was i love ure reading whatever you write so added all 3 options!

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
wonderful os

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
wow..what a beautiful OS...Smile

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Amazing os...luved the way u described sharon's rainy memories...n even swayam's way of making sharon overcome her fear...luved their cute n adorable tulia...continue soon n thnx for pm.

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Amezing
 
Beautyful
 
Really good
 
Capturing...
 
 
Best luck for exams. Hope to get more on SWARON wen u'll be back.

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged
And this was another gem from you. One couldn't have got  better sequel to 'Rain Rain Go Away'. Ever since you have decided to write the sequel to that OS I was waiting for it, my bad luck I myself went mia for two weeks and missed it. This OS was just enchanting. Right from the title to the content everything was just magical. While reading I was just spell bound by its beauty. This may be OS but the way you dealt with it was like a complete journey of Sharon. And I loved the way you introduced Tulia - SwaRon's daughter in it. She was a perfect addition to this work. All the flashaback memeories or the current events where awesomely penned and wonderfully contributed to the plot of making Sharon letting go of her fear regarding rain. It was quite enjoyable as a reader. Awesome work.

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