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SwaRon OS: I Hear Thunder (Page 6)

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rutu

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And @swaron09 @Uzma @kriyaansh_arsha @Beula @tejukor
Guys unres kab karoge? Ermm

finally unres kar diya!!! sorry for being late!

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rutu

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And @swaron09 @Uzma @kriyaansh_arsha @Beula @tejukor
Guys unres kab karoge? Ermm



Edited by tannu_swayam - 16 November 2012 at 12:36pm

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sajan_swaron

wow
u left me speechless
tulia was way too cute
finally due to swayams effort sharon got wet in the rain with tulia
their bike ride was awesome re
loved the way swayam made sharon overcome her phobia
"Sharon we always have an option to choose and it's all about what you choose the distressing past events or the good ones"

loved that line

the good memories were amazing and the way sharon reminiscenced  about them
god  u are more than perfect at ur work Clap
sorry for not commenting earlier in ur previous os
was busy with exams
u gave the joy of this beautiful os and a bad news that this may be ur last one 
please dont discontinue Cry

all the best for ur exams re do well and come back soon

Thanks for the comment Lalita and thanks for the wishes as wellEmbarrassed. And lets see whether I'm able to write on SwaRon after my examsStern Smile
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sadiyaswaron

RUTU
It was damm amazing Os
The emotions,sharon's fear was perfectly described..
Tulia was my fav in this os..
Loved the way how swayam help sharon to overcome from her fear.Rain give her more beautifull memory as compare to bad one.Whether it was tulia's birth or their first kiss or spending n sharing beautifull memories with swayam...
Loved it alot
Ps.best of luck for ur exams n i hope u will continue to write on swaron as it is the only way to remember tanha wala swaron...:D

Thanks for the comment Sadiya, glad you liked it, Embarrassedthanks you for the wishes and about continuing time will tellWacko
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 2:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by d3fan4eva

Amazing os...luvd it...

Thanks!Big smile

Originally posted by ambuja4

wow...
it ws damm...amazing...post...!!
luved to d fullest...!!!
all d bst fr ur exms...
Bt plz dnt say ...tht u wont write...yr i reallly jst luv wht u write ...plz...plz..plz contine...writing..

Thanks for commenting dear.Embarrassed And as I said may be I'll not be able to write on them, its not that I don't want to. But yeah lets seeConfused

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 2:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by frankyfio

amazing 
loved it

Originally posted by kool kanz

ClapClapas usual a commendable job..loved d way was tryin his best 2 overcome sharon's fear...enjoyed reading a lotSmileSmileClapplzzz try 2 write soon...

Originally posted by sweetsimi123

Awesome OS...loved itStar 

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nikita_arsha

Rutu, magnificently written honey. The way the story unfolds is absolutely enchanting. As I told you earlier, the theme that you have chosen for your OS is profoundly engrossing from a reader's POV.
Tulia, beautiful name, must say. It was so obvious for them to have a daughter. The way your Tulia cries for the rains, the way she whispers her sweet nothings to the rains is all so damn-adorable. You managed to nail the essence of Swayum. His love and concern for Sharon has been brilliantly portrayed. He makes her overcome her inhibitions by reminiscing their glorious past. His affection dominates her apprehension. The ending couldn't have been more beautiful. Both of them swaying together in the rains. I wonder how Sharon ends up to be firm yet benign in all our write-ups and Swayum is always a perfect, mellow gentleman, ready to back her in all her endeavours.

P.S.-Do you remember what I told you earlier Ruts? Throw away the hair drier and accept some big cyber pats on your back.
All the best for ur exams. Both of us are in similar situations bud. I'm also in a semi-hibernation mode as I have my boards in March and JEE in April. Anyways, see u around :-)

Thanks for the lovely analysis of this OS Nikita. In bold, Bingo!! aptly put girl.Big smile

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 2:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by TANHA_H

amazing sequel to an amazing OSClapClapClap

Thanks a lot dearEmbarrassed

Originally posted by arjuhiswaron007

Beautifully writtenClap

Thanks a ton Big smile

Originally posted by ABBY92

This was as a beautiful OS and I loved how you brought Tulia in it !! As  promised, Swayam finally got Sharon to over come her fear and enjoy the rain !! I loved how she started remembering all those beautiful memories that were related to the rain and the dance in the end was the perfect way to end this OS !!

Thanks a tonEmbarrassed


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