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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Neeti96

Wow an amazing sequel to an amazing OS

I loved the concept a lot. Sharon went out in the rain for her daughter..Awwwie^_^

And the last part was awesome , the way Swayam made Sharon forget her fear of rains

Pleassse dont stop writing. Pretty please with sugar on topEmbarrassed

Best of luck for ur xams!Smile



Glad you liked the sequel as well Neeti, Thanks!Embarrassed
And about writing, time will tellWacko

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pooja123456

wow...amazing update!!
the way u wrote about swyam making sharon overcum her fear of rains was just amazing!!!
Tulia was also very cutely potrayed!!!
u showed swarons love for each other in a very pure manner!
do write more!!!
thanks for the pm!!

Thanks for the comment, glad you liked itBig smile

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nature2

res till comment LOLLOLWink
 
 
aawosm  fab update ClapClap

Thanks a tonBig smile

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shaani2209

this was brilliantly penned rutu...
the way swayam made efforts to get sharon out of her rain phobia was beautifully put...
the incidents u wrote was indeed nice way to add to best memories of one person's life...

their baby making it way easy for him to get sharon out her phobia was a nice idea rutu...
beautiful work rutu...
thanks for the pm... 

Thanks for the comment Rosh, glad you liked itEmbarrassed

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by an_skyfighter

to begin i liked this more then the previous part
may be because of the little version of sharon tulia
her name really did intrigue  me in the beginning so thanks for explaining
and i totally adored the flashbacks sharon had. From there first kiss to spending the night in a cottage to the day when there beloved daughter was born and all of these beautiful memories connected to rain. this all added up making it all the more beautiful 
Swayam !! as usual the loving and protective guy who would take all necessary measures to make the life of his love comfortable succeeded here also. 
and tulia was a perfect mix os sharon and swayam. her stubbornness from sharon and her cuteness from swayam was just a cherry on the cake
so in short this was really a treat to read
and u not writing any more abt awaron i can understand as i am also trying to get over them but it is really difficult with people like u who write such beautiful things abt swaron and those people who make such awesome VM's 
so all the best hope to see u write more if u wish so

You liked this more than previous one, aww, thanks!
In bold, I knowEmbarrassed
And you know there are many writers on this forum who write brilliantly on SwaRon, so even if I'm not able to write on them, these writers will surely make you fall in love with SwaRon more, so yeahApprove

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by D3fication

Rutu di, LOVED the story. Swayam has his ways man. He has his ways.How he helped her overcome her fear is a thing worthy of applause. Every woman deserves a guy like Swayam.

Please, di. Dont let go of them. Let them stay in your heart and make it weave wonderful stories such as this so we can carry their memories forward. Hope you write more keeping in mind our TanHa wala SwaRon. 

All the very best for your exams. :)
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True every woman does deserve a guy like Swayam, but he is such a rare gem!!
And TanHa wala SwaRon IS THE reason I continued writing on them, but I can't vouch that I could write on them after I'm done with my exams, which are going to get stretched for nearly one and a half month!!
So lets seeErmm 

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joshua_TANHA

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Unres :
This is the best sequel I have ever read!
I was not expecting a leap!!  But you connected the leap to the fear of sharon so beautifully
Amazing, loved how swaya, helped overcome sharon's fear .
 
I admit I have read the first one Rain Rain Go away  and this one already 3-4 timesSmile

Aww thank you!!
And about the leap, as I mentioned it wasn't easy for Swayam to make Sharon overcome her fear immediately. But eventually to make it successful I thought of a leap.
In red which you wrote, I'm grinning sheepishlyEmbarrassed

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetcherry95

just amazing
very well penned

Thank youBig smile

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