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SwaRon OS: I Hear Thunder (Page 3)

swaron_tanha4 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
wow...
it ws damm...amazing...post...!!
luved to d fullest...!!!
all d bst fr ur exms...
Bt plz dnt say ...tht u wont write...yr i reallly jst luv wht u write ...plz...plz..plz contine...writing..

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swa-ron Goldie
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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 8:19am | IP Logged
amazing 
loved it

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 9:46am | IP Logged
ClapClapas usual a commendable job..loved d way was tryin his best 2 overcome sharon's fear...enjoyed reading a lotSmileSmileClapplzzz try 2 write soon...

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 9:51am | IP Logged
Awesome OS...loved itStar

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Rutu, magnificently written honey. The way the story unfolds is absolutely enchanting. As I told you earlier, the theme that you have chosen for your OS is profoundly engrossing from a reader's POV.
Tulia, beautiful name, must say. It was so obvious for them to have a daughter. The way your Tulia cries for the rains, the way she whispers her sweet nothings to the rains is all so damn-adorable. You managed to nail the essence of Swayum. His love and concern for Sharon has been brilliantly portrayed. He makes her overcome her inhibitions by reminiscing their glorious past. His affection dominates her apprehension. The ending couldn't have been more beautiful. Both of them swaying together in the rains. I wonder how Sharon ends up to be firm yet benign in all our write-ups and Swayum is always a perfect, mellow gentleman, ready to back her in all her endeavours.

P.S.-Do you remember what I told you earlier Ruts? Throw away the hair drier and accept some big cyber pats on your back.
All the best for ur exams. Both of us are in similar situations bud. I'm also in a semi-hibernation mode as I have my boards in March and JEE in April. Anyways, see u around :-)

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
amazing sequel to an amazing OSClapClapClap

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 12:28am | IP Logged
This was as a beautiful OS and I loved how you brought Tulia in it !! As  promised, Swayam finally got Sharon to over come her fear and enjoy the rain !! I loved how she started remembering all those beautiful memories that were related to the rain and the dance in the end was the perfect way to end this OS !!

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