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SwaRon OS: I Hear Thunder (Page 2)

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 3:32am | IP Logged
this was brilliantly penned rutu...
the way swayam made efforts to get sharon out of her rain phobia was beautifully put...
the incidents u wrote was indeed nice way to add to best memories of one person's life...

their baby making it way easy for him to get sharon out her phobia was a nice idea rutu...
beautiful work rutu...
thanks for the pm... 

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 3:54am | IP Logged
to begin i liked this more then the previous part
may be because of the little version of sharon tulia
her name really did intrigue  me in the beginning so thanks for explaining
and i totally adored the flashbacks sharon had. From there first kiss to spending the night in a cottage to the day when there beloved daughter was born and all of these beautiful memories connected to rain. this all added up making it all the more beautiful 
Swayam !! as usual the loving and protective guy who would take all necessary measures to make the life of his love comfortable succeeded here also. 
and tulia was a perfect mix os sharon and swayam. her stubbornness from sharon and her cuteness from swayam was just a cherry on the cake
so in short this was really a treat to read
and u not writing any more abt awaron i can understand as i am also trying to get over them but it is really difficult with people like u who write such beautiful things abt swaron and those people who make such awesome VM's 
so all the best hope to see u write more if u wish so


Edited by an_skyfighter - 14 November 2012 at 2:33pm

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Rutu di, LOVED the story. Swayam has his ways man. He has his ways.How he helped her overcome her fear is a thing worthy of applause. Every woman deserves a guy like Swayam.

Please, di. Dont let go of them. Let them stay in your heart and make it weave wonderful stories such as this so we can carry their memories forward. Hope you write more keeping in mind our TanHa wala SwaRon. 

All the very best for your exams. :)
Hug

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 4:34am | IP Logged
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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 5:02am | IP Logged
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This is the best sequel I have ever read!
I was not expecting a leap!!  But you connected the leap to the fear of sharon so beautifully
Amazing, loved how swaya, helped overcome sharon's fear .
 
I admit I have read the first one Rain Rain Go away  and this one already 3-4 timesSmile


Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 15 November 2012 at 10:18pm

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 6:02am | IP Logged
just amazing
very well penned

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 6:45am | IP Logged
wow
u left me speechless
tulia was way too cute
finally due to swayams effort sharon got wet in the rain with tulia
their bike ride was awesome re
loved the way swayam made sharon overcome her phobia
"Sharon we always have an option to choose and it's all about what you choose the distressing past events or the good ones"

loved that line

the good memories were amazing and the way sharon reminiscenced  about them
god  u are more than perfect at ur work Clap
sorry for not commenting earlier in ur previous os
was busy with exams
u gave the joy of this beautiful os and a bad news that this may be ur last one 
please dont discontinue Cry

all the best for ur exams re do well and come back soon

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 7:30am | IP Logged
RUTU
It was damm amazing Os
The emotions,sharon's fear was perfectly described..
Tulia was my fav in this os..
Loved the way how swayam help sharon to overcome from her fear.Rain give her more beautifull memory as compare to bad one.Whether it was tulia's birth or their first kiss or spending n sharing beautifull memories with swayam...
Loved it alot
Ps.best of luck for ur exams n i hope u will continue to write on swaron as it is the only way to remember tanha wala swaron...:D

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