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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
LOVE IT...AWESOME OS...

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
I lovedd it!!!! Deep, deep, deep!. And I hope the CVs borrow the following idea from your FF-

I hope Zoya in the show has a serious side to her shayari skills. It would be amazing to see that she writes deep shayari (like you did) in a journal or something. I'm imagining a scene where Zoya is slightly pensive on the inside one day and when Dilshad prompts her for a shayari, she gives them a serious one that bowls Asad over! And what would be even better is that Asad writes shayari himself. Imagine that. Ayan-Zoya sharing silly shayari would be a superb contrast to  Asad-Zoya sharing love for deep, meaningful shayari that comes to them from the similarly painful past they share.


Edited by princessjojo - 29 December 2012 at 9:31pm

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Posted: 31 December 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Really nice os :-) please pm me for your further work

Nikki <3

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 6:37pm | IP Logged
Hey ...
That was wonderful :)

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 7:45am | IP Logged
love the deep abstract lines

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Mesmerized. 

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 9:14am | IP Logged
wah wah, kya baat hai LOL
you write like a pro Clap pm when u write more?


Edited by Rushitaa - 29 March 2013 at 12:46pm

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
This was so beautiful and deep! I love your use of adjectives. Smile  And your shayari is brilliant.

I really like Jojo's idea of Zoya writing deep shayari. I sincerely hope they have that in the show too! It adds more dimension to her character... that she's much much more than the silly girl she portrays herself as. Someone should pitch the idea to the creators fo sho!

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