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Another brilliant os from u..when i saw the title i was confused, i thought it would be a serious one but u really surprised me..its completely hilarious..i am sorry, im sorry,i knw this os is not entirely fiction n i knw that u suffered a lot but i jst cant stop myself from laughing after reading it n im blaming ur superb writing skill n ur amazing comic timing for this .i loved the whole flashback part n the convo between manvi n her parents.. & u r right ur counselor definitely needs counseling.... thank you for the pm and i hope u r fine now...take care of urself n get well soon..
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I loved the fact that, the story was completely unpredictable..when i started readin it i thot it would be a sad story like virat i was also goin crazy over here 'what happend?why would she try to kill herself'..but when i read manvi's reaction over it she was actin like nothin happened..I got confused..then suddenly the whole thing turned out to be just a misunderstandin..i couldnt control laughin after that..
The story title and the first half of the storyline..as a reader, I would've never thot it would end in a completely opposite way..i thot itd be tear-jerker story and yeah it is a tear-jerker story but it was tears of laughter ..AWESOME
sorry for the lame lamba explanation..
P.S-when i saw the title i thot maybe its a companion piece of ur SS ''Break my heart''..
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